Template:Did you know nominations/Lillian V. Holdeman Moore

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The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 17:29, 31 October 2023 (UTC)

Lillian V. Holdeman Moore

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... that Lillian V. Holdeman Moore identified a spike in hydrogen-gas producing bacteria in Skylab astronauts? Source: Sachs, Jessica Snyder (2008-09-30). Good Germs, Bad Germs: Health and Survival in a Bacterial World. Farrar, Straus and Giroux. ISBN 978-1-4299-2329-3.
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Created by PlantPoet (talk). Self-nominated at 16:43, 6 August 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Lillian V. Holdeman Moore; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy compliance:

Adequate sourcing: - Page number is needed for the book. If you read the book, you will also find that "Holdeman observed that astronauts had a 25% increase in the intestinal populations of hydrogen-gas-producing" is false. The increase was much larger, with the population increasing 13 times and accounting for the 25% of the total bacteria population. I tried to find the scientific publication in scholar but failed ( I found the other one mentioned about the stress). Also, I added two citation needed tags.
Neutral:
Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: None required.

Overall: C messier (talk) 16:10, 22 August 2023 (UTC)

Hey there, PlantPoet! Checking in, have you seen the review? theleekycauldron (talk • she/her) 07:21, 11 September 2023 (UTC)
- C messier, theleekycauldron, I pinged PlantPoet on their talk page last week, and they subsequently edited the article per the comments above, noting in a reply that they'd done. Have the issues raised in the review been sufficiently addressed by those edits? Does anything else remain? Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 00:57, 24 September 2023 (UTC)
  - There are some citation needed tags. C messier (talk) 07:37, 25 September 2023 (UTC)

Oh no! I will get on them this week. Right now, I can't find the citation needed tags, but I'm new and will have to search around to figure out where they are. Sorry! PlantPoet (talk) 23:56, 3 October 2023 (UTC)

citations have been added. Thank you so much for your patience! PlantPoet (talk) 18:51, 12 October 2023 (UTC)

C messier, does this satisfy your concerns, or is there more that needs to be done? Thank you. BlueMoonset (talk) 14:42, 13 October 2023 (UTC)

There are three more (two in the lead and one in the career section) C messier (talk) 15:57, 13 October 2023 (UTC)

@C messier: From my quick skim, I think all of the paragraphs are now cited. Does this satisfy your concerns? Z1720 (talk) 16:40, 21 October 2023 (UTC)

It looks OK now. C messier (talk) 16:53, 21 October 2023 (UTC)