Talk:Enchylium conglomeratum

Latest comment: 7 months ago by 62.73.69.121 in topic So why is it endangered/extinct?

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The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 16:28, 12 April 2024 (UTC)Reply

Created by Xkalponik (talk).

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X (talk) 21:35, 19 March 2024 (UTC).Reply

 
E. conglomeratum
 
E. conglomeratum

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Nominator: Xkalponik (talk · contribs)

Reviewer: Wolverine XI (talk · contribs) 08:46, 23 March 2024 (UTC)Reply


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Reviewing this now. Wolverine XI (talk to me) 08:46, 23 March 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Wolverine XI, Thanks. I'll be co-operating throughout. Let me know your suggestions/opinions. Thanks for the suggestions. I'll address them promptly. X (talk) 09:36, 23 March 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Wolverine XI, I think I've addressed most of your suggestions. However, I couldn't expand the chemistry section as the spot tests yielded negative results, there's not much room for details regarding these. I searched for a long time but couldn't find suitable info to be added in that section. But other than that I think it's better now. I fixed capitalization, started each para by species name, rewrote phrases, fixed disambiguation link, rearranged sections, expanded taxonomy, and other sections, and removed unnecessary headers. Let me know if there's more to be done. Thanks.— Preceding unsigned comment added by Xkalponik (talkcontribs)
OH, I see. Promoting now. Wolverine XI (talk to me) 14:37, 23 March 2024 (UTC)Reply

Review

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  • Dotted Jelly Lichen Any reason for the capitalisation?
  • Start each paragraph by indicating the species name
  • features common lecanorine apothecia Features and common don't go well together.
  • sessile Is an orange link.
  • that is entire and smooth. What does this mean?
  • Can you expand chemistry? There are many available sources.
  • Taxonomy should be moved above description
  • Please remove the unsourced synonyms section
  • You have to expand taxonomy; it's way too short.
  • This article is small, it doesn't need a further reading. Please use those sources as well
  • Pls remove 4th level header North America (NatureServe)

I am done. Wolverine XI (talk to me) 09:05, 23 March 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Xkalponik: If you are done, please indicate so. Wolverine XI (talk to me) 13:35, 23 March 2024 (UTC)Reply
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So why is it endangered/extinct?

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I clicked on the article to find out how and why precisely the UK had managed to cause this lichen to go extinct, and in general what has caused its partial extinctions. After all, this is what the DYK hook was based on - there is a surprising fact (in this case, the local extinctions contrasted with the global wide distribution), and you expect to find elaboration and explanations, or at worst, even just the information that there is no known explanation, if there is none. Especially when there is an unfortunate fact, as extinctions of species (besides disease-causing microorganisms) are, it is natural to want to know what it is caused by so as to know how it can be prevented or reversed. Maybe I have missed it, but I skimmed through the article and found no explanation, nor even the claim that the explanation is unknown. This is close to clickbait IMO. 62.73.69.121 (talk) 19:02, 17 April 2024 (UTC)Reply