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Happy editing! HiLo48 (talk) 07:32, 1 June 2021 (UTC)

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Hello, 81.213.215.83. Your question has been answered at the Teahouse Q&A board. Feel free to reply there!
Please note that all old questions are archived after 2-3 days of inactivity. Message added by Nick Moyes (talk) 08:40, 3 June 2021 (UTC). (You can remove this notice at any time by removing the {{teahouse talkback}} template).

Note that your question was moved to the main Teahouse page, as you originally posted it on the talk page -a place used only by those discussing how the forum is managed and maintained. Nick Moyes (talk) 08:44, 3 June 2021 (UTC)

OK, Sank u very much --81.213.215.83 (talk) 21:15, 3 June 2021 (UTC)

Wikipedia and copyright

Hello 81.213.215.83! Your additions to Sean M. Carroll have been removed in whole or in part, as they appear to have added copyrighted content without evidence that the source material is in the public domain or has been released by its owner or legal agent under a suitably-free and compatible copyright license. (To request such a release, see Wikipedia:Requesting copyright permission.) While we appreciate your contributions to Wikipedia, there are certain things you must keep in mind about using information from sources to avoid copyright and plagiarism issues.

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Hello, Diannaa. The content you deleted was taken from Sean Carroll's website. Not MetaNexus. https://www.preposterousuniverse.com/naturalism2012/ Not saying it is not an infringement (or not saying vice versa either). Just informing you --81.213.215.83 (talk) 04:34, 20 June 2021 (UTC)

There's many instances where text is copied to multiple locations online, which makes it impossible for me to determine exactly which one was copied.— Diannaa (talk) 12:10, 20 June 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Battle near the Irghiz River has been accepted

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Battle of Irghiz (August 12)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robertsky was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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August 2021

Hello, I'm Sakura emad. I wanted to let you know that one or more of your recent contributions to Battle of the Indus have been undone because they did not appear constructive. If you would like to experiment, please use the sandbox. If you have any questions, you can ask for assistance at the Teahouse. Thanks. —— 🌸 Sakura emad 💖 (talk) 05:01, 13 August 2021 (UTC)

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Sakura emad, hello. Look, I was the one that introduced the note of Carl Sverdrup assessing the battle took place in Djerdin near Parwan. While I was reading the book, I discovered I made a mistake as Sverdrup assesses Djerdin is close to Ghazni, not Parwan (it is close to both of them but Sverdrup talks of Ghazni only). And it really is not clear if the battle Sverdrup talks about was indeed the battle Al-Athir and Nasawi mentioned. That is why I amended my own previous edits. --81.213.215.83 (talk) 05:40, 13 August 2021 (UTC)

dear IP thank you for your contributions, you do nothing wrong by Writing an Article or improve articles Quality however, anything you add to the wikipedia it must support by Sources, Please take a look at here —— 🌸 Sakura emad 💖 (talk) 10:52, 13 August 2021 (UTC)

You are missing the point, . I did not add something sourceless, rather, I deleted something I ADDED that was based on a misunderstanding of a source. The content I deleted was introduced by me, myself and I deleted it as I realised it was my misunderstanding --81.213.215.83 (talk) 02:41, 15 August 2021 (UTC)

@81.213.215.83 sorry if i misunderstood at the time. —— 🌸 Sakura emad 💖 (talk) 02:45, 15 August 2021 (UTC)

Hello, I'm Oshwah. I wanted to let you know that I reverted one of your recent contributions—specifically this edit to Battle of the Indus—because it did not appear constructive. If you would like to experiment, please use the sandbox. If you have any questions, you can ask for assistance at the Help desk. Thanks. ~Oshwah~^{(talk) (contribs)} 05:40, 21 August 2021 (UTC)

Hello, Oshwah. we have already settled that issue down. you are the 3rd person I am explaining this issue. Look: I was the one that introduced the note I have deleted - because I realised the note I introduced there was a confusion. It is explained in this thread/section to @Sakura emad: and here to @HistoryofIran:. Let me know if you have further comments, --81.213.215.83 (talk) 05:58, 21 August 2021 (UTC)

Hi there! I sincerely apologize for the annoyance and for reverting your edit. I'm pretty damn sure that having to repeatedly explain this is getting on your nerves. Please feel free to restore the changes you made, and I hope you have a great weekend. If you need anything, please don't hesitate to message me on my user talk page. I'll be happy to help! :-) Best regards - ~Oshwah~^{(talk) (contribs)} 06:04, 21 August 2021 (UTC)

it is obvious now why don't you revert it back? —— 🌸 Sakura emad 💖 (talk) 06:54, 21 August 2021 (UTC)

IP < Reminder. —— 🌸 Sakura emad 💖 (talk) 06:54, 21 August 2021 (UTC)

No problem, Oshwah. I was not annoyed but I grant my message might have sounded like that of an annoyed rude person. but that really was not my intention or situation. Thank you. Sakura emad, no problem. Sorry if I disturbed. --81.213.215.83 (talk) 19:42, 21 August 2021 (UTC)

A barnstar for you!

	The Citation Barnstar
	For your work in adding sourced information to history articles. Thanks! IronManCap (talk) 16:07, 29 August 2021 (UTC)

September 2021

Your edit to Jalal al-Din Mangburni has been removed in whole or in part, as it appears to have added copyrighted material to Wikipedia without evidence of permission from the copyright holder. If you are the copyright holder, please read Wikipedia:Donating copyrighted materials for more information on uploading your material to Wikipedia. For legal reasons, Wikipedia cannot accept copyrighted material, including text or images from print publications or from other websites, without an appropriate and verifiable license. All such contributions will be deleted. You may use external websites or publications as a source of information, but not as a source of content, such as sentences or images—you must write using your own words. Wikipedia takes copyright very seriously, and persistent violators of our copyright policy will be blocked from editing. See Wikipedia:Copying text from other sources for more information. — Diannaa (talk) 12:04, 22 September 2021 (UTC)

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Diannaa, I do not recall if they are outright copyright but I will re-phrase them differently and add them into Wikipedia. Is that OK? --81.213.215.83 (talk) 20:44, 22 September 2021 (UTC)

Everything you add to Wikipedia needs to be written in your own words please.— Diannaa (talk) 22:11, 22 September 2021 (UTC)

October 2021

Hello, I'm I dream of horses. I wanted to let you know that I reverted one of your recent contributions—specifically this edit to Jalal al-Din Mangburni—because it did not appear constructive. If you would like to experiment, please use the sandbox. If you have any questions, you can ask for assistance at the Help desk. Thanks. I dream of horses (Contribs) (Talk) 21:53, 9 October 2021 (UTC)

Hello, I dream of horses. I am the one that improved that article. I do not know how that last edit happened (e.g. I do not recall how I typed his name Magmangburni) but there are some typo issues I made in my former edits. I am gonna edit them --81.213.215.83 (talk) 23:09, 9 October 2021 (UTC)

Since you are editing under an IP address, it's possible that's it's dynamic enough that someone else made that edit. If I were you, I'd consider creating an account.

Thank you for being willing to correct to correct it, though. I dream of horses (Contribs) (Talk) 23:31, 9 October 2021 (UTC)

Jalal al-Din Mangburni issues

Hello, 81.213.215.83. I notice you made several efforts to have Jalal al-Din Mangburni increased from a C-Class rating, and you seemed confused when the requests were rejected. I have just gone through the article, and I have added specific issues to the box at the top of the page. If you are still willing to edit (I notice you haven't since 20 December 2021), may I suggest you focus your efforts on these issues? If you have any questions, please ask. Thank you.AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 21:26, 1 February 2022 (UTC)

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