- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by BorgQueen (talk) 11:11, 3 April 2023 (UTC)
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Tiakur
- ... that move of regency seat of Southwest Maluku Regency to Tiakur was delayed from 2008 to 2012? Source: https://ambon.antaranews.com/berita/18703/pemprov-dprd-maluku-dukung-pemindahan-ibu-kota-mbd
- ALT1: ... that the town of Tiakur experienced shortage of specialist doctors due to them not renewing their contract? Source: https://beritakotaambon.id/article_read/kekurangan-dokter-spesialis-di-rsud-tiakur-jadi-pe1664136443
- ALT2: ... that the choosing of Tiakur as the regency seat caused division within the Southwest Autonomy Council? Source: https://ojs3.unpatti.ac.id/index.php/bastori/article/view/4786
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Gloria Orwoba
- Comment: New article, cleanup and CE will be appreciated.
Created by Nyanardsan (talk). Self-nominated at 05:27, 3 March 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Tiakur; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
- This review is for ALT1, the most interesting of the 3 hooks (the 4-year delay mentioned in ALT0 and the political division mentioned in ALT2 are not remarkable - pretty routine in politics.)
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- Cited: - This needs a bit of tweaking to match it to the facts as stated in the source (bertakotaambon.id). The article says that the doctor shortage is "owing to the fact that the hospital has low accreditation." But the hook simply states that doctors are not renewing their contracts. It would also be helpful if you explained in the article how the low accreditation affected the hospital (From the source (Google translated): "With the D accreditation ... the Tiakur Hospital also experienced difficiulties in recruiting health workers, especially specialist doctors").
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Overall: Very good work! Thanks for contributing this new article. Due to foreign language, references and plagiarism-free are accepted in good faith. Just align the wording of hook ALT1 a bit more with the facts - which would make the hook more interesting IMO if the hook said that the low accreditation is the problem. -- P 1 9 9 ✉ 14:31, 27 March 2023 (UTC)
- Fixed the issue with modifying the sentence within the article Nyanardsan (talk) 09:29, 28 March 2023 (UTC)