Talk:Johnny Fripp/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 07:42, 22 October 2023 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Notes

• Added Category:Royal Canadian Air Force personnel of World War II and skiing coaches.
• Could you find anything on his high school career? Did he play football or anything?
• What's the Dominion Championships? The article makes it sound like going to the Olympics is a downgrade.
• "competed against American and Austrian professionals" Those are both linked but Canadisn isn't linked in the lead and Americans is earlier in the body but not linked?
• "professionals and placed " A lot of ands here. Suggest changing to "professionals, placing"
• The "Montreal team" is the Montreal Bulldogs.
• "Baz O'Meara claimed he was ineligible to play due to" should we change it to "play as an amateur"?
• "re-joined the Ottawa Rough Riders" remove ottawa
• "before retiring from football" doesnt technically say he "retired"
• Why is he in the QB cat? Is that the flying wing?
• "He played the flying wing position" i dont see in ref four where it sayd that unless you are using PFA but thats not what is cited. Where did you get "back" from in the infobox"?
• "but left before the season start" The season had already started

I think that's all. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 08:11, 22 October 2023 (UTC)

 Closed with the nominator BeanieFan11's permission. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 20:15, 22 December 2023 (UTC)

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