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Not a formation with a continuous existence.
editTO say the 1st division had a very long history is misleading, since during the C19th there was a succession of divisions formed in the British army in the course of successive campaigns, each of which was identified as the '1st Division' being the first in the order of battle, nothing more.
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Division's history
editThere was an RFC to discuss potential restructures to this and the 1st (United Kingdom) Division articles. However, the RFP ended without any consensus being reached. Rather than the info end-up being buried in the MILHIST archives, the sources have been copied to the latter article's talk page, see: Talk:1st (United_Kingdom) Division#Division's historyEnigmaMcmxc (talk) 08:49, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 11:16, 22 March 2023 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 11:16, 22 March 2023 (UTC)
- Images properly licensed
- The article title reads strangely to me... "between 1809–1809" should either drop the "between" entirely or change to "between 1809 and 1909. I'd prefer the former as the between seems redundant
- Updated per your suggestionEnigmaMcmxc (talk) 14:46, 19 April 2023 (UTC)
- Set off William Stewart with commas
- Capitalize Allied in allied army and link it
- Slight rewording and added a link. The Talavera OOB article calls this formation the Anglo-Spanish Army, although if I am not completely mistaken the British divisions formed part of the Anglo-Portuguese Army. Oman, for example, refers to both. However, in his OOB and casualty section he lists the British as separate to the Spanish with troops detachments in Portugal and elsewhere; the Spanish force is referenced as the Army of Estremadura.EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 14:46, 19 April 2023 (UTC)
- repulsed several cavalry and infantry attacks suggest "several attacks by cavalry in infantry"
- UpdatedEnigmaMcmxc (talk) 14:46, 19 April 2023 (UTC)
- where it was reorganised into divisions "they" to agree with the earlier "forces"
- UpdatedEnigmaMcmxc (talk) 14:46, 19 April 2023 (UTC)
- In June, the division operated to trap the elusive operated?
- I have reworded this, but I was just trying to convey they were dispatched after Boer commandos.EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 14:46, 19 April 2023 (UTC)
- were radically changed reorganised
- UpdatedEnigmaMcmxc (talk) 14:46, 19 April 2023 (UTC)
- You've got at least one reference that isn't used in the article. Purge them or move them to further reading.
- I double checked them all and could only find one reference, which I have removed.EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 14:46, 19 April 2023 (UTC)
- Nicely done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:14, 12 April 2023 (UTC)
- Sorry for the delay in getting to this and also breaking the links by moving the page (thanks for the fix, Hog!). Thank you for your time, review, and comments. I have attempted to address all the issues you raised.EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 14:46, 19 April 2023 (UTC)
Why is this a standalone article?
editI don't understand. RadioactiveBoulevardier (talk) 00:19, 27 March 2023 (UTC)
- With the 2nd Division, I did the one article to cover everything approach and it came out at over 100k in size. That division, when compared to this one, was not as active in say the Second World War and was not involved in later conflicts. WP: Size suggests splitting off articles after they pass the 50k mark. So, the primary article for the 1st Division, in this case 1st (United Kingdom) Division article, is already around 40k in size and does not yet really cover the Gulf and Iraq wars. The article covering the world wars is also over 50k already, with little information about their First World War activities and little information about the fighting after Anzio. This article is, likewise, over 50k. Sure, some book citations would be merged if everything came together, but on the whole there is just too much content to provide a decent overview and be squished into one article.EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 02:26, 27 March 2023 (UTC)
Did you know nomination
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The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 21:19, 20 June 2023 (UTC)
- ... that the British 1st Division repulsed numerous French assaults at the Battle of Waterloo including the final main assault? Source: Citations 18-22
Improved to Good Article status by EnigmaMcmxc (talk) and Sturmvogel 66 (talk). Nominated by Onegreatjoke (talk) at 02:02, 5 May 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/History of the British 1st Division 1809–1909; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
- This would automatically meet the DYK criteria if it weren't for the fact that it has been more than a month since this was promoted to GA. That being said, this is only because no one has managed to pick up the nomination until now. I'd like a second opinion on this. Bneu2013 (talk) 16:11, 1 June 2023 (UTC)
- By my count it was nominated within 7 days of GA promotion, so that should be fine. —Mx. Granger (talk · contribs) 20:46, 9 June 2023 (UTC)
- Full review needed; article was nominated within seven days of being listed as a GA, and is therefore eligible for DYK. BlueMoonset (talk) 03:56, 14 June 2023 (UTC)
- New enough, long enough. Hook short enough and sourced (as is every paragraph). No neutrality problems found, no copyright problems found, no maintenance templates found. QPQ done. Good to go.--Launchballer 08:25, 16 June 2023 (UTC)