Talk:C. A. Clingenpeel/GA1

Latest comment: 11 months ago by AirshipJungleman29 in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 06:19, 25 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (No original research):   d (copyvio and plagiarism):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Notes

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  • Added many cats
  • Added commons cat
  • "Although the 1932–33 basketball team was very inexperienced, Clingenpeel again brought them to the conference championship" did they win?   Done
    • I was trying to originally say that they were conf champs - I tried to make it more clear now.
  • "He finished his tenure at Central with four football conference" infobox and table have 3
  • add his five basketball titles to infobox
  • "Central College (now Central Methodist) Hall of Fame" remove now central methodist, already said that earlier   Done
    • Removed.
  • why does his playing spans in the infobox just say circa 1911, don't know the dates?   Done
    • Haven't found the exact dates, only know that he was there in 1911.
  • i guess you didn't see his high school in your research?   Done
    • Wasn't able to - his early life seemed pretty obscure.
  • in the infobox it says he coached baseball at central in circa 1930 but he was already coaching there earlier in the article   Done
    • Added c. 1914 to infobox.
  • in regards to his first stint as central track coach, do you not know if he was coach the whole time like football? Is that why it says circa 1916?   Done
    • Yes, I haven't found that he coached there every year so I said c. 1916.
  • we only know he coached central women in 1915 I guess?   Done
    • Yes.
  • rem ref from lead   Done
    • Removed.

That's all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 06:38, 25 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

  Closed with the nominator BeanieFan11's permission. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 20:17, 22 December 2023 (UTC)Reply
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