Talk:C. A. Clingenpeel/GA1
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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 06:19, 25 October 2023 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources): c (No original research): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Notes
edit- Added many cats
- Added commons cat
- "Although the 1932–33 basketball team was very inexperienced, Clingenpeel again brought them to the conference championship" did they win?
Done
- I was trying to originally say that they were conf champs - I tried to make it more clear now.
- "He finished his tenure at Central with four football conference" infobox and table have 3
- add his five basketball titles to infobox
- @WikiOriginal-9: Well, the sources are confusing me a bit. Looking at what I've written (and I looked through all their yearbooks), I see basketball championships in '28, '30, '32 and '33 (4 ≠ 5) and then, in football the records added by Jweiss include three championships, but, while those three were all correct, the 1927 yearbook (p. 99 in issuu) says they won a fourth while going undefeated in conference play in 1926, which the coaching table contradicts. Any ideas of how this should be managed? BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:06, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
- so we have titles in 26, 28, 30, 32, 33, and 34?? WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 01:14, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
- @WikiOriginal-9: Basketball was at least '28, '30, '32 and '33 (4, but sources say 5), and then football was '28, '30 and '34 with the yearbook claiming '26 as well. BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:22, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
- Maybe we should ask Jweiss what he thinks. He seems to be the expert on college coaches. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 01:24, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
- But if you think 4 football and 4 bball are actually right, then that's good enough for me. Just add the sources and a note or two. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 01:29, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
- Pinging Jweiss for his opinion first: @Jweiss11: BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:31, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
- But if you think 4 football and 4 bball are actually right, then that's good enough for me. Just add the sources and a note or two. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 01:29, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
- Maybe we should ask Jweiss what he thinks. He seems to be the expert on college coaches. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 01:24, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
- @WikiOriginal-9: Basketball was at least '28, '30, '32 and '33 (4, but sources say 5), and then football was '28, '30 and '34 with the yearbook claiming '26 as well. BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:22, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
- so we have titles in 26, 28, 30, 32, 33, and 34?? WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 01:14, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
- @WikiOriginal-9: Well, the sources are confusing me a bit. Looking at what I've written (and I looked through all their yearbooks), I see basketball championships in '28, '30, '32 and '33 (4 ≠ 5) and then, in football the records added by Jweiss include three championships, but, while those three were all correct, the 1927 yearbook (p. 99 in issuu) says they won a fourth while going undefeated in conference play in 1926, which the coaching table contradicts. Any ideas of how this should be managed? BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:06, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
- "Central College (now Central Methodist) Hall of Fame" remove now central methodist, already said that earlier Done
- Removed.
- why does his playing spans in the infobox just say circa 1911, don't know the dates? Done
- Haven't found the exact dates, only know that he was there in 1911.
- i guess you didn't see his high school in your research? Done
- Wasn't able to - his early life seemed pretty obscure.
- in the infobox it says he coached baseball at central in circa 1930 but he was already coaching there earlier in the article Done
- Added c. 1914 to infobox.
- in regards to his first stint as central track coach, do you not know if he was coach the whole time like football? Is that why it says circa 1916? Done
- Yes, I haven't found that he coached there every year so I said c. 1916.
- we only know he coached central women in 1915 I guess? Done
- Yes.
- rem ref from lead Done
- Removed.
That's all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 06:38, 25 October 2023 (UTC)
Closed with the nominator BeanieFan11's permission. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 20:17, 22 December 2023 (UTC)
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