Template:Did you know nominations/Nekima Levy-Pounds
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 00:02, 5 July 2015 (UTC)
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Nekima Levy-Pounds
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... that Minneapolis NAACP President Nekima Levy-Pounds (pictured) preaches bimonthly?
- Reviewed: Praise To the Living God
Created by Bobamnertiopsis (talk). Self-nominated at 01:16, 13 June 2015 (UTC).
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- I'm happily open to alternative suggestions. BobAmnertiopsis∴ChatMe! 14:42, 19 June 2015 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that an award called the Attorney of the Year exists, and was most recently won by Nekima Levy-Pounds? There is very little of interest in the whole article.--Launchballer 15:21, 19 June 2015 (UTC)
- ALT2: ... that an organization to help young African American men avoid gangs and prison, cofounded by law professor Nekima Levy-Pounds (pictured), is planning to open a coffee shop?
- ALT1: ... that an award called the Attorney of the Year exists, and was most recently won by Nekima Levy-Pounds? There is very little of interest in the whole article.--Launchballer 15:21, 19 June 2015 (UTC)
I'll complete this review since it looks like it has stalled a bit. Article is 4347 characters, moved to mainspace on June 12, and three sources support various parts of the ALT2 hook. I agree that the original hook is a tad boring (and others seem to agree), so I'm striking it. I spotchecked a few sources and found a few similar clumps of words here or there ("...was too focused on issues of police brutality...") but nothing that I would classify as close paraphrasing. I took the liberty of adding two commas in the ALT2 hook but now approve it for the main page. Well done! Ruby 2010/2013 19:36, 4 July 2015 (UTC)
