Talk:Murder of Meredith Kercher/Archive 33
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Conflicting sources re. Guede's record
Regarding the following entry in Guede's section:
"Though he had no serious criminal record at the time of the murder,[1] Guede was known to the police as a drug dealer and had some minor drug offenses on his record."[2]
One source clearly states that he had "no criminal record" based on one of the reasons for his sentence to be cut down while the other says he did what seems to me is based on an assumption that a person known by the police must have a criminal record. The point is, and this is a BLP issue, we can't trust and use both sources by just hiding the contradiction in between them. I think we need further sources that are confirming one source or the other. Meanwhile this part of the section should be left out completely or at least made hidden till such confirmation is provided. And BTW, changing "criminal record" to simply "record" as was done is sure not the solution.TMCk (talk) 00:47, 8 June 2011 (UTC)
- I agree. It's a big difference in my experience between being "known to the police" and being a convicted criminal. The Daily Telegraph has a decent reputation for fact-checking, but I think we should insist on further or better sources on a WP:BLP issue. --John (talk) 01:10, 8 June 2011 (UTC)
- And, on reflection I removed this claim from the article pending better sourcing. I notice the Times article calls him a "small-time drug dealer and drifter with a record of petty crime who according to some witnesses harassed women and stole from their handbags" but also "working in bars,... and allegedly to introduce students from middle-class families to drugs" (my bolding). Again, I don't think this provides the very high standards we need to make such a claim about a living person. As an editor here I obviously recuse from using admin tools on this article, but I would take an extremely dim view on anybody reverting this back in, and would definitely take any such editing to a central venue. On the other hand, if further sources and discussion lead to a consensus here that this material is justified, I will be happy to see it return. --John (talk) 01:33, 8 June 2011 (UTC)
- No complaints from me. My initial objections to that phrasing was the "Though he had no criminal record at the time of the murder, Guede was well-known to the police as a drug dealer and petty criminal by the time Kercher was murdered." I think half of the dead English teachers in the world have contemplated returning to life to do something with that phrase. The sourcing isn't the best, and I think part of the problem is a lack of precision in some of those articles. Locally (for me), someone that has one or two possession convictions (minor with alcohol or marijuana) will generally be treated in a similar manner to someone with a clean record, particularly when young. I think there was a subtle push at one time to put Guede in a poor light. I'll do some searches and see if I can't find anything useful. Ravensfire (talk) 01:56, 8 June 2011 (UTC)
- Something interesting - this article includes the youth and lack of record comment, but sources it to Guede's attorney. I somehow missed that when I first reviewed it. There's no way that supports stating flat out in the article that he has no record. The court said they cut the sentence because he was the only one that apologized to Kercher's family. Interesting - we may be able to toss out that part (no record), and come up with a good way to include the other information. Ravensfire (talk) 02:22, 8 June 2011 (UTC)
- (edit conflict)I remember thoroughly discussing this edit previously. We had several sources that said that he had no criminal record, several that said that he was well known as a small-time drug dealer, and some that said he had minor drug offenses. Under the Italian system, this was explained as non-contradictory (getting pulled in for small offenses or being known does not necessarily lead to a criminal record. I don't see a problem here.LedRush (talk) 02:24, 8 June 2011 (UTC)
- Huh, I don't recall that. Any chance of linking to the archive and/or putting up the sources for discussion? --John (talk) 02:29, 8 June 2011 (UTC)
- I did find this, but I can't see credible sources or anything resembling a consensus to include this information on a living person. Or was there somewhere else? --John (talk) 02:47, 8 June 2011 (UTC)
- I can find many sources of vastly varying qualities. I really don't have time to sort through this again, so the following is a bit of an information dump (sorry, I hate it when people do this to me, and now I'm doing it to you). General discussion with sources (including Dempsey's book) [3]. More and different sources (hatted) [4]. Consensus for inclusion of most of the material (including contributions by Errant) [5].LedRush (talk) 12:25, 8 June 2011 (UTC)
- The discussion in archive 30 is pretty sparse and there isn't much (or any) discussion about this specific section. 24 and 25 have some better information with some sources that should be helpful (and some that are junk). There's a fair amount of OR/SYNTH from an editor in those sections, so I'm only going to look at better sources linked in those. With only a quick glance, I think the no record is supportable. The "known to police" phrase seems to reflect to sources, but is awkward and not really NPOV. There's a better way to put this - I'll ponder and see if I can come up with something this evening. I thinking along the lines of "no criminal record, but was accused of X by Y and stopped by A with B". If we're going to add this to Guede, should we also need check for similar things for Knox and Sollecito? Thinking marijuana usage. I'm leaning to no, but being careful with the information added to Guede's section. Worried about UNDUE if Guede has massive detail, but Knox and Sollecito don't. Ravensfire (talk) 16:44, 8 June 2011 (UTC)
- Possession of pot (under certain amounts) in Washington is akin to a parking ticket. Being accused of entering into people's houses with knives is not.LedRush (talk) 16:57, 8 June 2011 (UTC)
- The discussion in archive 30 is pretty sparse and there isn't much (or any) discussion about this specific section. 24 and 25 have some better information with some sources that should be helpful (and some that are junk). There's a fair amount of OR/SYNTH from an editor in those sections, so I'm only going to look at better sources linked in those. With only a quick glance, I think the no record is supportable. The "known to police" phrase seems to reflect to sources, but is awkward and not really NPOV. There's a better way to put this - I'll ponder and see if I can come up with something this evening. I thinking along the lines of "no criminal record, but was accused of X by Y and stopped by A with B". If we're going to add this to Guede, should we also need check for similar things for Knox and Sollecito? Thinking marijuana usage. I'm leaning to no, but being careful with the information added to Guede's section. Worried about UNDUE if Guede has massive detail, but Knox and Sollecito don't. Ravensfire (talk) 16:44, 8 June 2011 (UTC)
- I can find many sources of vastly varying qualities. I really don't have time to sort through this again, so the following is a bit of an information dump (sorry, I hate it when people do this to me, and now I'm doing it to you). General discussion with sources (including Dempsey's book) [3]. More and different sources (hatted) [4]. Consensus for inclusion of most of the material (including contributions by Errant) [5].LedRush (talk) 12:25, 8 June 2011 (UTC)
- I did find this, but I can't see credible sources or anything resembling a consensus to include this information on a living person. Or was there somewhere else? --John (talk) 02:47, 8 June 2011 (UTC)
- Huh, I don't recall that. Any chance of linking to the archive and/or putting up the sources for discussion? --John (talk) 02:29, 8 June 2011 (UTC)
- (edit conflict)I remember thoroughly discussing this edit previously. We had several sources that said that he had no criminal record, several that said that he was well known as a small-time drug dealer, and some that said he had minor drug offenses. Under the Italian system, this was explained as non-contradictory (getting pulled in for small offenses or being known does not necessarily lead to a criminal record. I don't see a problem here.LedRush (talk) 02:24, 8 June 2011 (UTC)
- And, on reflection I removed this claim from the article pending better sourcing. I notice the Times article calls him a "small-time drug dealer and drifter with a record of petty crime who according to some witnesses harassed women and stole from their handbags" but also "working in bars,... and allegedly to introduce students from middle-class families to drugs" (my bolding). Again, I don't think this provides the very high standards we need to make such a claim about a living person. As an editor here I obviously recuse from using admin tools on this article, but I would take an extremely dim view on anybody reverting this back in, and would definitely take any such editing to a central venue. On the other hand, if further sources and discussion lead to a consensus here that this material is justified, I will be happy to see it return. --John (talk) 01:33, 8 June 2011 (UTC)
- Possession of pot is legal in many parts of US.RockSound (talk) 19:27, 8 June 2011 (UTC)
- So we should drop the "drugdealer" part of Guede?TMCk (talk) 19:34, 8 June 2011 (UTC)
- Guede is documented to have 1)broken into a school, stolen cash, and armed himself with a knife, and 2) was found in possession of stolen goods including a laptop originating from a burglary of an office in Perugia. CodyJoeBibby (talk) 17:12, 8 June 2011 (UTC)
You know me :) I'm generally in favour of not really writing anything about any of their pasts. "Although he had no serious criminal record at the time of the murder" didn't strike me as very good - it is a little too POV (of the line "well he was never caught, but look what a naughty boy he was"). Minor drug offences.. "meh", lots of people have them, doesn't seem relevant. The knife incident has more relevance if well cited. --Errant (chat!) 19:45, 8 June 2011 (UTC)
- I'm the one who added the Telegraph reference and the thread of discussion is here. He had an arrest record prior to the events. I added it here on Apr. 4 and you can follow the next few edits to see how the sentence evolved.
⋙–Berean–Hunter—► ((⊕)) 02:37, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
- What's an "arrest record"? --John (talk) 18:26, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
- A record of being detained by police. CodyJoeBibby (talk) 20:46, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
- What does it look like? --John (talk) 00:27, 10 June 2011 (UTC)
- Different formats in different places (and at different times). In the US, the first part pops up on a monitor in a patrol car and lets the officer know that an individual has been arrested before regardless of whether they have been convicted of anything or not. The significance here is that it explains how the police happened to have Guede's fingerprints prior to Kercher's murder. Fingerprint cards are part of an arrest record. Here is an example.
⋙–Berean–Hunter—► ((⊕)) 03:51, 10 June 2011 (UTC)- Interesting. This may be a cultural difference then. In the UK and I suspect in Italy (anybody actually know?) such things are not a matter of public record, as the presumption of innocence applies unless a guilty verdict is obtained at trial. I certainly don't think we should base anything negative relating to a living person on reports of an arrest record; my opinion would be that nothing short of a conviction would be suitable for this. --John (talk) 13:22, 10 June 2011 (UTC)
- When I was first addressing the issue it was because the article was missing how the police made the logical connection to Guede...it is simply explaining that. An arrest record doesn't implicate guilt. I do believe it should be stated that he was previously arrested for logical reasons.
⋙–Berean–Hunter—► ((⊕)) 20:44, 10 June 2011 (UTC)
- When I was first addressing the issue it was because the article was missing how the police made the logical connection to Guede...it is simply explaining that. An arrest record doesn't implicate guilt. I do believe it should be stated that he was previously arrested for logical reasons.
- Interesting. This may be a cultural difference then. In the UK and I suspect in Italy (anybody actually know?) such things are not a matter of public record, as the presumption of innocence applies unless a guilty verdict is obtained at trial. I certainly don't think we should base anything negative relating to a living person on reports of an arrest record; my opinion would be that nothing short of a conviction would be suitable for this. --John (talk) 13:22, 10 June 2011 (UTC)
- Different formats in different places (and at different times). In the US, the first part pops up on a monitor in a patrol car and lets the officer know that an individual has been arrested before regardless of whether they have been convicted of anything or not. The significance here is that it explains how the police happened to have Guede's fingerprints prior to Kercher's murder. Fingerprint cards are part of an arrest record. Here is an example.
- What does it look like? --John (talk) 00:27, 10 June 2011 (UTC)
- A record of being detained by police. CodyJoeBibby (talk) 20:46, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
- What's an "arrest record"? --John (talk) 18:26, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
BLP violation to Hold Knox and Sollecito out as Legally Guilty of Murder
I see there is concern above about holding Guede out as having a prior criminal conviction, when that may be a BLP violation if incorrect.
Yet an obvious major BLP violation pertaining to Knox and Sollecito is being fostered in this article.
This article lede and througout makes it sound like Knox and Sollecito have been determined to be guilty of this murder. That is false. Their legal status in Italy is "innocent". It is false and misleading and a very serious BLP violation to hold someone out as guilty of a crime, and intentionally withold the fact that their legal status is "innocent" at this time. Someone deleted my edits claiming that to include their legal status as innocent was "too much detail". That is not persuasive, when that same person insisted on including the length of the sentences, which are of minor importance in comparison to their legal status of innocent vs. guilty. A reader perusing this lede and article will think that Knox and Sollecito have been ruled guilty, when that is only an interim finding and they remain "innocent' at this time.
The interest should be in presenting the reality of the situation, not in engaging in wishful thinking. Presently, Knox and Sollecito are legally innocent of the crime. That needs to be stated right up front, along with the damaging information that they were found guilty at a first level trial. RockSound (talk) 02:57, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
- Even if you are correct in your analysis: 1. it is correct to say that they have been convicted; 2. we need secondary sources which make this point. WP is not about truth. We report what reliable sources state. Also, the lede doesn't say they are guilty; it says they have been convicted and are appealing.LedRush (talk) 03:14, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
They have not been convicted. That is the point. A conviction is a final ruling, not an interim ruling. If one of them died today, they would not even have a criminal conviction on their record, because there was no final judgment entered before death. Their legal status today is "innocent" and that must be stated up front along with the fact that they were found guilty at a first level trial. RockSound (talk) 03:37, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
- But all the RSs disagree with you on this point. Out of curiosity, how would you describe their "convictions"?LedRush (talk) 03:42, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
- The facts that more than one appeal is permitted and that there is presumption of innocence should figure somewhere in the article. However, RockSound, Glrx was not at fault to revert your edits to the lead section on the rationale of "too much detail". What is more, in accordance with the Manual of Style, no statement should appear in the introduction without repetition and elaboration elsewhere. Your claim that lengths of the sentences are trivial in comparison to "legal status" is, for the most part, opinion - an opinion that is not supported by the majority of secondary sources, which talk of (presumed) guilt and sentences while making little of this (small, but no doubt important) difference between the judicial systems of Italy and many Anglophone nations. Yes, the initial verdicts are only an "interim finding", but on the basis of WP:UNDUE I do not necessarily agree that an explanation detailing the conduct of appeals in Italy is merited in the lead section, least of all when it entails removing the references to the 26- and 25-year sentences (which certainly are significant details). SuperMarioMan 03:45, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
LedRush, you refer to RS's that disagree with me. Would you please provide them? In answer to your question: I would describe them as being found guilty at a first level trial. But they have not been convicted, because there has been no final ruling. Why is this so hard to grasp? The Italian Constitution makes it very clear that there is no definitive determination of guilt until the appeals are completed. Art. 27(2) of the Italian Constitution states that “the defendant is not considered guilty until final judgement is passed”.
This lede creates the impression that Knox and Sollecito have been convicted. That is a BLP violation of significant magnitude. RockSound (talk) 03:56, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
- One other thing: didn't Guede also have the right to two appeals and the presumption of innocence until the end? The lead section states that "[Guede's] conviction was upheld in two appeals" before going on to state that "Knox and Sollecito are entitled to two appeals". Similarly, the subsection on Guede's appeals specifically mentions a first and a second hearing, but it is only when it comes to the text on Knox and Sollecito that the provisions under Italian law are made clear ("In May 2010, Guede launched a second and final appeal to the Court of Cassation ... This is the first of two appeals to which Knox and Sollecito are entitled under Italian law. They retain presumption of innocence until all appeals are completed.") If anything, this new information belongs with the text relating to Guede (who, after all, has gone through the appeals process first). It seems unusual that the explanation regarding the conduct of appeals is delayed until the focus of the article shifts to Knox and Sollecito. SuperMarioMan 04:00, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
Rudy Guede has been convicted of the murder of Meredith Kercher. Knox and Sollecito have not been convicted of the murder of Meredith Kercher, but may or may not be convicted at the end of their appeals. Simple as that. But these simple, obvious facts are being muddled, twisted and confused in the article. RockSound (talk) 04:04, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
- If that were so, K and N would have walked out of the court, free, at the end of the trial. Moriori (talk) 04:12, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
- Not so. But this was already discussed above. They are in custody for the same reasons they have been in custody since November of 2007---risk of flight, not conviction. RockSound (talk) 04:19, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
- RockSound, your response does not address the concern that I raised. The right to two appeals and the presumption of innocence applies to all the defendants, does it not? It is a general provision under Italian law (as the sources state), is it not? It seems illogical to refer to two appeals in the case of Guede while only explaining the actual processes (e.g. two appeals and presumption of innocence) later on (in the text about Knox and Sollecito's appeals). This also seems rather dubious with a mind to WP:NPOV. Either the explanation should be placed where the subject of appeals first arises (i.e. in the case of Guede - far more logical here than later in the article), or it should be completely disassociated from all the defendants, perhaps in the form of a footnote. SuperMarioMan 04:21, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
- But isn't it only currently applicable for Knox and Sollecito? If they lose their appeals, and the convictions become final, the issue is moot and wouldn't need to be mentioned at all, right?LedRush (talk) 04:53, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
- (edit conflict) Well, there is also the aim of maintaining a historical perspective when possible, and avoiding recentism. It simply seems more logical to me to give the explanation when, chronologically, the matter of appeals first comes up. This is what I have attempted in this edit. May I ask what others think of it? SuperMarioMan 05:18, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
- But isn't it only currently applicable for Knox and Sollecito? If they lose their appeals, and the convictions become final, the issue is moot and wouldn't need to be mentioned at all, right?LedRush (talk) 04:53, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
- RockSound, your response does not address the concern that I raised. The right to two appeals and the presumption of innocence applies to all the defendants, does it not? It is a general provision under Italian law (as the sources state), is it not? It seems illogical to refer to two appeals in the case of Guede while only explaining the actual processes (e.g. two appeals and presumption of innocence) later on (in the text about Knox and Sollecito's appeals). This also seems rather dubious with a mind to WP:NPOV. Either the explanation should be placed where the subject of appeals first arises (i.e. in the case of Guede - far more logical here than later in the article), or it should be completely disassociated from all the defendants, perhaps in the form of a footnote. SuperMarioMan 04:21, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
- Not so. But this was already discussed above. They are in custody for the same reasons they have been in custody since November of 2007---risk of flight, not conviction. RockSound (talk) 04:19, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
SMM: I have no problem briefly including this info at the start of the second paragraph in the lede, so that it is clear the presumptions and processes apply to all defendants. I will draft something tomorrow, short and crisp for the second paragraph in the lede. RockSound (talk) 05:15, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
- I just saw SMM's edit which I don't think provides sufficient clarification. I must sign off for the night, but will try to return tomorrow with something a bit clearer and crisper on these particular points. I think we will be helping the readers a great deal if we can provide them with a sharp, accurate intro that quickly lets them know where the defendants stand. After all, this is a very, very, long article. Good night. RockSound (talk) 05:40, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
- That's fine, RockSound. Of course, my edit isn't set in stone. SuperMarioMan 05:43, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
- I just saw SMM's edit which I don't think provides sufficient clarification. I must sign off for the night, but will try to return tomorrow with something a bit clearer and crisper on these particular points. I think we will be helping the readers a great deal if we can provide them with a sharp, accurate intro that quickly lets them know where the defendants stand. After all, this is a very, very, long article. Good night. RockSound (talk) 05:40, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
For all of this... there is 'yet to be a source presented which clarifies (in relation to this case) where the problem is. They have been convicted at their first trial, this is indisputable; and those claiming they are not convicted have not read the sources or understood Italian law (they are not considered definitively guilty before the law until appeals are concluded, but they are definitely convicted). All sources say they are currently serving sentences, no source has been presented to suggest this is not the case. Every time this comes up my response is the same; "seems reasonable, do you have a source". It feels like the second half of that statement just gets glossed over. So I will stress it again - please provide a source. Without one it is a bit difficult to work on content :) (and, yes, I have tried to find one with minimal success) --Errant (chat!) 08:33, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
- Yes, that's an important point. More sources would be an advantage. SuperMarioMan 11:04, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
- I agre with you, Errant.
Technically, Amanda and Raffaele are still presumed not guilty and will be so considered until a final judgement has been passed. Article 650 of the Italian Code of Criminal Procedure states that only irrevocable convictions can be eseguite (enforced); art. 648 lists the cases when a judgement can be considered irrevocable. In this case, Amanda and Raffaele's convictions are not;therefore, the are still considered not guilty, meaning that they are not serving their sentences yet, that the burden of proof is still on the prosecution and that, if the statute of limitation were to expire (which, in this case, is highly improbable), they would be acquitted.
To describe them as guilty, then, would definitely be a BLP-vio; to say that a Court of law has convicted them (and they are appealing), on the other hand, is not, because that's merely the description of an easily proveable historical event. The appellate court may uphold (confermare), quash (annullare) or modify (modificare) the original judgement, but this does not change the fact that the Corte d'Assise has convicted them.
Furthermore, they are not yet serving their sentences. Usually, at this stage, a defendant is still free and will be gaoled only after his conviction has become irrevocable, unless it has been deemed appropriate that he be kept in custodia cautelare (pre-trial detention, you'd call it). In this case, it was concluded that Amanda and Raffaele were flight risk and it was feared that they might committ other crimes and, so, they were remanded in custody; in fact, they could be released at any time, if a Judge deemed that it is no longer necessary to keep them in gaol, because they're no longer a flight risk.
As a side note, the summary proceeding aimed at determining if pre-trial detention is warranted is called processo cautelare and it involves the Judge for the Preliminary Investigations (or the Judge of the Preliminary Hearing or the trial Judge), whose order can be appealed before the Tribunale del Riesame and, then, before the Court of Cassation (due to art. 111 of the Italian Constitution, which states that Appeals to the Court of Cassation in cases of violations of the law are always allowed against sentences and against measures on personal freedom pronounced by ordinary and special courts.); this isn't the same kind of appeal that would follow a judgement passed by a Court of Appeal, even thought the deciding body is the same, which can cause a bit of confusion.
One more thing, If one of them died today, they would not even have a criminal conviction on their record, because there was no final judgment entered before death, this is correct, under art. 69 of the Italian Code of Criminal Procedure: if a defendant dies before a final judgement has been passed, the trial judge must pass a sentenza di non doversi procedere per estinzione del reato (which is not a not-guilty verdict, but the criminal record of the deceased remains clean, because this second judgement would substitute that of the first Court).
I know that all this is just WP:OR and, probably, WP:SYNTH for the moment, but I have very little time these days to look for sources (especially ones in English); I just hope this can help clarify things a bit. Salvio Let's talk about it! 13:28, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
- I agre with you, Errant.
- I provided this English language source higher up the page. This issue is being covered in two places: Presumption of innocence means that a person charged with a criminal offence shall be presumed innocent until proven guilty according to law (Art. 6 (2) ECHR). The presumption of innocence is also codified in Art. 27(2) of the Italian Constitution, which states that “the defendant is not considered guilty until final judgement is passed”. The document is a PDF. This part is on page 22 of the PDF. The title is: "Pre-trial Detention in the European Union - An Analysis of Minimum Standards in Pre-trial Detention and the Grounds for Regular Review in the Member States of the EU - A.M. van Kalmthout, M.M. Knapen, C. Morgenstern (eds.) ISBN: 978-90-5850-524-8 The web address is - http://ec.europa.eu/justice/doc_centre/criminal/procedural/doc/chapter_15_Italy_en.pdf As I stated above, the Italian Constitution must be considered a reliable source. Defendants who are still going through the trials process have a different name - "imputato" - from those with convictions confirmed and they are kept in different prisons (or are still at liberty, like Mignini). Just because this principle is ignored and misunderstood in the English language media, that is no reason for Wikipedia to add to the confusion. BLP considerations require that Knox and Sollecito's current legal status should be correctly described. NigelPScott (talk) 22:34, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
- I agree with you Nigel. It is not possible for a person to be deemed innocent of a crime and yet be convicted of a crime at the same time. The person is either convicted or not guilty, but cannot be both. Since the Italian Constitution makes it clear that Knox and Sollecito are presently not guilty of the crime, this absolutely must be made clear in the lede to avoid BLP violations. RockSound (talk) 20:29, 10 June 2011 (UTC)
- So how exactly do you propose presenting the fact that an Italian court convicted them? Once gain; do you have a source that details this information about them not being "finally guilty", convicted or serving sentences. --Errant (chat!) 20:41, 10 June 2011 (UTC)
- I agree with you Nigel. It is not possible for a person to be deemed innocent of a crime and yet be convicted of a crime at the same time. The person is either convicted or not guilty, but cannot be both. Since the Italian Constitution makes it clear that Knox and Sollecito are presently not guilty of the crime, this absolutely must be made clear in the lede to avoid BLP violations. RockSound (talk) 20:29, 10 June 2011 (UTC)
- Another issue here is that there is an attempt to use Italian law to justify BLP violations. That doesn't work as Italian law has no jurisdiction here. The only laws that count in that regard are the laws of the United States and the laws of Florida which is where the Wikimedia servers are located. Within the US, someone could write an article calling Knox & Sollecito murderers and they may present the findings of the court ruling as fact because that is what has prevailed so far. It does not matter that an appeal is ongoing. The author would not be guilty of libel because they would be reporting what the court has said. There is no valid civil or criminal legal recourse against the author or publisher. Italian law may not be used to justify BLP issues here. If the court makes new rulings then we can revisit to make corrections.
(Archive note: RockSound had interjected a perceived legal threat here which was subsequently removed; Ravensfire's response to RockSound remains bisecting Berean Hunter's statement.)
- Per no legal threats, please strike out your comment immediately. I will also be leaving this request on your user page. Making or implying legal actions in an attempt to intimidate editors is absolutely unacceptable. Ravensfire (talk) 23:03, 10 June 2011 (UTC)
- I do believe that it may be worthy of mentioning this interesting fact in the Trials/Appeals section that they are presumed innocent while the appellate process is ongoing under the Italian legal system.
⋙–Berean–Hunter—► ((⊕)) 21:05, 10 June 2011 (UTC)
- I do believe that it may be worthy of mentioning this interesting fact in the Trials/Appeals section that they are presumed innocent while the appellate process is ongoing under the Italian legal system.
- I too believe so and wonder why an editor just removed the explaining bit as being in the wrong spot of the article.TMCk (talk) 21:27, 10 June 2011 (UTC)
- He moved it to the Knox appeals section; to be honest I don't disagree that it fits there a little better in the current setup - especially as the article it is sourced to is about Knox's appeals. --Errant (chat!) 21:32, 10 June 2011 (UTC)
- I too believe so and wonder why an editor just removed the explaining bit as being in the wrong spot of the article.TMCk (talk) 21:27, 10 June 2011 (UTC)
- I would agree to keep it there if it wasn't for SM's convincing rationale to have it added to the top of the appeals section as this applies to all defendants even so one is certainly past that by now, but since we write from a historical perspective Guede too had this "priviledge".TMCk (talk) 21:39, 10 June 2011 (UTC)
- Given that most editors are not familiar with the Italian judicial system, putting a section between current sections 4 and 5 highlighting the differences and unusual characteristics of that system makes a lot of sense. What's confusing to me is where the view is coming from that any editor here is saying K & S are legally guilty of murder. Trust me, it's been thoroughly pounded into our heads by various editors that, under the Italian court system, they aren't guilty under law. No kidding, we get that. The article should NOT say that K & S are guilty. However, it would be an utter breach of WP:NPOV to NOT say that they were found guilty by the inital trial court. That's the main reason this drama-fest is going on here! If they'd been found innocent, this article would have been done long, long ago and probably been 1/4 the size it is. But they weren't. Regardless of what any editor feels about the verdict, they were found guilty by the Corte d'Assise. It is a major factor of this case and absolutely must remain in the article and in the lede. If they are eventually found innocent in their appeals, it will still have to say that the were found guilty by one court, appealed and were found innocent. I'm befuddled why anyone is thinking otherwise. Ravensfire (talk) 00:07, 11 June 2011 (UTC)
- This is a perennial sticking point and source of much of the drahmaz here; the view that to report the fact that K and S were found guilty in their first trial constitutes some sort of slur against them. This is then extended to impute nefarious motives to editors who insist that this fact be included, which it definitely should. pablo 08:46, 11 June 2011 (UTC)
- Given that most editors are not familiar with the Italian judicial system, putting a section between current sections 4 and 5 highlighting the differences and unusual characteristics of that system makes a lot of sense. What's confusing to me is where the view is coming from that any editor here is saying K & S are legally guilty of murder. Trust me, it's been thoroughly pounded into our heads by various editors that, under the Italian court system, they aren't guilty under law. No kidding, we get that. The article should NOT say that K & S are guilty. However, it would be an utter breach of WP:NPOV to NOT say that they were found guilty by the inital trial court. That's the main reason this drama-fest is going on here! If they'd been found innocent, this article would have been done long, long ago and probably been 1/4 the size it is. But they weren't. Regardless of what any editor feels about the verdict, they were found guilty by the Corte d'Assise. It is a major factor of this case and absolutely must remain in the article and in the lede. If they are eventually found innocent in their appeals, it will still have to say that the were found guilty by one court, appealed and were found innocent. I'm befuddled why anyone is thinking otherwise. Ravensfire (talk) 00:07, 11 June 2011 (UTC)
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Evidence Section Reorganization
It might be better to reorganize this section. List Rudy Guede in the first part. Explain the evidence used to convict him and that his appeals process is final. Then another section for Knox and Sollecito explaining the evidence use to convict them in the MASSEI REPORT. Advise that is under appeal at the current time and use the APPEAL Documents to explain why the evidence is disputed. We could just stick with the Motivation Report and Appeals. Right now there is a lot of old information in the section that they weren't even convicted on - examples being that the body was disrobed and moved after death and the women's shoe. We have the motivation report saying what evidence was used for conviction so any other reasons are not accurate. There is also a paragraph about the DNA experts. I think that should be moved to the support for Knox and Sollecito section. There is no reason that this Evidence section shouldn't be laid out straight forward. This is the the evidence used to convict Guede and it is final. This is the evidence used to convict Knox and Sollecito, it is still under appeal and these are the reasons they give to appeal the convictions. Issymo (talk) 07:25, 11 June 2011 (UTC)
- All 3 are on equal footing in this regard, all convicted for the murder. That one appeal is final while the other two are are not yet isn't relevant to the evidence presented. Tarc (talk) 19:03, 11 June 2011 (UTC)
- Guede has exhausted the appeal process, so putting the information there is burying it from where it is relevant.LedRush (talk) 15:08, 12 June 2011 (UTC)
- It is relevant to all defendants including Guede and relevant in general to the crime this article is about.TMCk (talk) 15:24, 12 June 2011 (UTC)
- That is an interesting declarative statement which ignores the argument against it.LedRush (talk) 15:41, 12 June 2011 (UTC)
- It is relevant to all defendants including Guede and relevant in general to the crime this article is about.TMCk (talk) 15:24, 12 June 2011 (UTC)
- If mine is then so is yours.TMCk (talk) 15:43, 12 June 2011 (UTC)
- Alas, no. My argument is that the appeals information is relevant to the people appealing, not to the one who has already appealed. That's called a "reason". If you are interested in construct and grown-up dialog you might want to actually address other people's opinions.LedRush (talk) 15:51, 12 June 2011 (UTC)
- If mine is then so is yours.TMCk (talk) 15:43, 12 June 2011 (UTC)
- Maybe you want to leave out your sarkastic remarks and PA's. TMCk (talk) 15:59, 12 June 2011 (UTC)
- Thera are no PAs, just a suggestion founded on your reticence to address or make actual arguments and your proclivity to make sarcastic non-sequitors.LedRush (talk) 16:08, 12 June 2011 (UTC)
- You're doing little more than trying to bait other editors into arguments, this is the oldest trick in the wiki-book. It doesn't matter who has exhausted what appeals; all 3 have been convicted and sentenced for murder, so they all should get listed in the same manner. Tarc (talk) 18:12, 12 June 2011 (UTC)
- I agree with Tarc, as would anybody fairminded. --John (talk) 18:21, 12 June 2011 (UTC)
- I see, Tarc is being ironical by attributing to me actions for which he has become well known, and John elaborates on the irony by making a personal attack against me. Anyway, seeing as I am the only one discussing edits constructively, I guess the discussion is over.LedRush (talk) 20:39, 12 June 2011 (UTC)
- I agree with Tarc, as would anybody fairminded. --John (talk) 18:21, 12 June 2011 (UTC)
- You're doing little more than trying to bait other editors into arguments, this is the oldest trick in the wiki-book. It doesn't matter who has exhausted what appeals; all 3 have been convicted and sentenced for murder, so they all should get listed in the same manner. Tarc (talk) 18:12, 12 June 2011 (UTC)
- Thera are no PAs, just a suggestion founded on your reticence to address or make actual arguments and your proclivity to make sarcastic non-sequitors.LedRush (talk) 16:08, 12 June 2011 (UTC)
- Maybe you want to leave out your sarkastic remarks and PA's. TMCk (talk) 15:59, 12 June 2011 (UTC)
I don't understand why you are saying their status is the same when it's not. One is through their appeal already and the other two are not. I think this section should be more matter of fact. This is the evidence - this is what they are appealing on. We can't say this is what RG is appealing on because his appeals are final, otherwise we could. Issymo (talk) 20:40, 12 June 2011 (UTC)
- The status of one's appeal does not affect the evidence against them. You are trying to set apart the evidence against Knox and Sollecito simply because you believe they're innocent, and wish to create a gap between their story and Guede's. Tarc (talk) 00:16, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- Please try to assume good faith and not try to project your opinions onto others. I want the information regarding the appeals to be where it is most relevant. Period.LedRush (talk) 00:24, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- Spadres are called spades here, I'm afraid. I am noting that some convicts still appealing and one being done with appeals does not necessitate a separated evidence section. They are all in the same boat. Tarc (talk) 01:18, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- They are obviously not in the same boat if one is convicted and has exhausted his appeals in a completely separate trial from the two who are in the middle of appeals.LedRush (talk) 01:26, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- They are all convicted murderers in different stages of the appeals process. There's nothing else to discuss here. Tarc (talk) 04:22, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- No, Guede is not in any stage of the appeals process. His appeals are completely finished.LedRush (talk) 14:08, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- Semantic masturbation. Call that the "finished stage" if that makes you feel happy. Tarc (talk) 14:13, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- This section needs to reflect that very issue. That this sentence was reduced to come to the 16 years through the exhaustion of his appeals. "Rudy Guede, a resident of Perugia, was convicted on 28 October 2008 of the sexual assault and murder of Kercher. His fast-track conviction was upheld, and he is now serving a sentence of 16 years." This is misleading in that it gives appearance that he was given a shorter time then the others, possibly due to less involvement.--Truth Mom 14:16, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- "They were given sentences of 25 and 26 years respectively. Knox and Sollecito have appealed." as seen here.--Truth Mom 14:20, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- This section needs to reflect that very issue. That this sentence was reduced to come to the 16 years through the exhaustion of his appeals. "Rudy Guede, a resident of Perugia, was convicted on 28 October 2008 of the sexual assault and murder of Kercher. His fast-track conviction was upheld, and he is now serving a sentence of 16 years." This is misleading in that it gives appearance that he was given a shorter time then the others, possibly due to less involvement.--Truth Mom 14:16, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- Semantic masturbation. Call that the "finished stage" if that makes you feel happy. Tarc (talk) 14:13, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- No, Guede is not in any stage of the appeals process. His appeals are completely finished.LedRush (talk) 14:08, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- They are all convicted murderers in different stages of the appeals process. There's nothing else to discuss here. Tarc (talk) 04:22, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- They are obviously not in the same boat if one is convicted and has exhausted his appeals in a completely separate trial from the two who are in the middle of appeals.LedRush (talk) 01:26, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- Spadres are called spades here, I'm afraid. I am noting that some convicts still appealing and one being done with appeals does not necessitate a separated evidence section. They are all in the same boat. Tarc (talk) 01:18, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- Please try to assume good faith and not try to project your opinions onto others. I want the information regarding the appeals to be where it is most relevant. Period.LedRush (talk) 00:24, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
First Trial, Rudy was given 30 years, a greater amount actually, the article does not reflect or show that in any way. That is a FACT, that needs placed within the article.--Truth Mom 14:23, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- I'm pretty sure the lead did say that, or at least I recall writing it, but that lead was re-written a number of times... well, for a very involved reason, and I think it simply got shunted out. No issues from me to reword it. --Errant (chat!) 14:33, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- Wrong. All those details are in the trial section.TMCk (talk) 14:33, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- It needs to be in the lead or, it is, and appears misleading.--Truth Mom 14:49, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- Doesn't really matter, his sentence was reduced, the cited reason being his remorse/apology to the Kercher family. Remember that this is an article primarily on the murder itself, the lead of an article summarizes what is to come. Tarc (talk) 14:58, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- It needs to be in the lead or, it is, and appears misleading.--Truth Mom 14:49, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- How about this:
"...and he is now serving a reduced sentence of 16 years."TMCk (talk) 14:57, 13 June 2011 (UTC)- "...he was initially sentenced to 30 years, and he is now serving a reduced sentence of 16 years after exhausting all appeals." Can you help reword it possibly in a way like this, which includes a few more facts? --Truth Mom 15:09, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- This is only the lede, a summary of what the article states. I agree with the others that there isn't currently an issue, though TMCk's proposal is a good suggestion regardless as it is merely one word that still imports a great deal of info.LedRush (talk) 15:23, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- Tarc, with all due respect, the article is to be neutral, thus not allowing, emotion of the fact Rudy apologized which helped reduce his sentence, to play part in laying out the facts here, within this article.--Truth Mom 15:25, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- I was citing the factual reason as to why his sentence was reduced. Your comment is ill-informed and not addressing what I actually said. Tarc (talk) 17:02, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- Tarc, with all due respect, the article is to be neutral, thus not allowing, emotion of the fact Rudy apologized which helped reduce his sentence, to play part in laying out the facts here, within this article.--Truth Mom 15:25, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- This is only the lede, a summary of what the article states. I agree with the others that there isn't currently an issue, though TMCk's proposal is a good suggestion regardless as it is merely one word that still imports a great deal of info.LedRush (talk) 15:23, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- "...he was initially sentenced to 30 years, and he is now serving a reduced sentence of 16 years after exhausting all appeals." Can you help reword it possibly in a way like this, which includes a few more facts? --Truth Mom 15:09, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- How about this:
- An emotional fact that reduced his sentence is still a fact and could be in the article w/o violating NPOV, not saying that it should thou.TMCk (talk) 15:32, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- Honestly, if we include too many details in the lede there is no need for the rest of the article.TMCk (talk) 15:29, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- Where is the 'emotion' here?
If the sentences are mentioned in the lead, and dealt with in more detail further down the article, that would be in keeping with what the lead is for. pablo 15:33, 13 June 2011 (UTC)- Rudy in no way apologised for the crime, he denied all responsiblity and continues to do so. CodyJoeBibby (talk) 23:09, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- Interesting. So is this incorrect then, and do you have a source saying so? pablo 23:14, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- What do you mean by false? The article says he is sorry he did nothing to help Meredith as she lay bleeding to death. It doesn't say he's sorry for killing her, for the very good reason that he denies doing so. CodyJoeBibby (talk) 12:51, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
- I'm not sure I see the point of your comment; no has said or implied that he apologised for the crime. :S But he made an apology to the Kercher family (which is detailed in the article) and is the reason for his reduced sentence. If your point is that if included in the lead it must be made clear it was not an apology for killing Kercher (as he still denies it), but for not helping her, then yes, I agree. --Errant (chat!) 13:07, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
- (edit conflict) I don't mean anything by "false:" didn't say it. By "incorrect," however,I was looking to reconcile the source with your statement that Guede "in no way apologised for the crime". pablo 13:11, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
- So, you were sarcastic and hostile to Cody, and you turned out to be wrong, and you still can't bear to say "sorry" or play nice?LedRush (talk) 13:42, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
- Huh? I'm not sure I see any sarcasm, Cody seems to have got the wrong end of the stick in Tarc's comment and that has caused a little confusion, nothing more dramatic :) No one is really incorrect here. --Errant (chat!) 13:54, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
- If you don't see a problem, that is part of the problem. If hostile jabs like this go uncriticized, the tone of the discussion here will never improve.LedRush (talk) 13:58, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
- If you find comments and questions like this hostile, you may wish to recalibrate your expectations. I certainly see nothing wrong with Pablo's question and it turns out that he was right and (unsurprisingly) Cody is wrong. End of story, for now, and we make incremental progress towards improving the article. What's the problem? --John (talk) 14:18, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
- I don't think we should lower common decency and politeness to a level where sarcastic attacks on others are considered civil. And Cody is correct that Guede never apologized for the crime...he apologized for not doing more to help Kercher. That's a huge difference. Also, I don't see why you needed to throw in another personal attack at Cody to make your argument.LedRush (talk) 14:31, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
- I made no sarcastic attack.
Cody is correct in that Guede did not apologise for murdering Kercher. He did apologise for what he admits to doing on the night of the murder, however. I did not see Cody's statement "Rudy in no way apologised for the crime" as reflecting that. pablo 15:46, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
- Actually no. If this is really your standard for a personal attack, you should swing by WP:WQA and see if the community shares your apparently (if selectively) low standard for what constitutes a PA. I don't think you will, because I suspect that you know deep down that these are not really personal attacks. Cody said "Rudy in no way apologised for the crime..." (my bolding), something which is clearly and demonstrably untrue with reference to the sources. That is what I mean by saying that he is wrong. When I say that I am unsurprised by this, I am making a judgment (I believe a correct one), that SPAs with an agenda to push often get things wrong here as they do not really understand the way we work. If you really take this as a personal attack, again I strongly suggest you try WP:WQA, or else let go of trying to label every comment as a personal attack as this won't help anybody and may only serve to underline the paucity of your arguments regarding content issues. Can we get on with focused discussion towards improving the article? This thread is increasingly pointless and is starting to resemble the notorious orange juice discussion. --John (talk) 15:49, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
- Alas, you are not only wrong (unless you think that Cody and Pablo were talking about Guede apologizing for the crime of breaking some sort of good samaritan law and not the crime of murder, which dominates our conversations), you cannot make your argument without attacking the editors who disagree with you. What is the purpose of continually labeling other editors as "SPAs with an agenda" if not to detract from there arguments with ad hominem ones of your own? Of course, we all know the answer to this question.LedRush (talk) 17:49, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
- There's really nothing more to say about this. If you don't get it at this point it's likely you never will. I won't respond further to your verbose and illogical nonsense per WP:DENY. I'll see you at WP:WQA. --John (talk) 19:50, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
- Alas, you are not only wrong (unless you think that Cody and Pablo were talking about Guede apologizing for the crime of breaking some sort of good samaritan law and not the crime of murder, which dominates our conversations), you cannot make your argument without attacking the editors who disagree with you. What is the purpose of continually labeling other editors as "SPAs with an agenda" if not to detract from there arguments with ad hominem ones of your own? Of course, we all know the answer to this question.LedRush (talk) 17:49, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
- I made no sarcastic attack.
- I don't think we should lower common decency and politeness to a level where sarcastic attacks on others are considered civil. And Cody is correct that Guede never apologized for the crime...he apologized for not doing more to help Kercher. That's a huge difference. Also, I don't see why you needed to throw in another personal attack at Cody to make your argument.LedRush (talk) 14:31, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
- If you find comments and questions like this hostile, you may wish to recalibrate your expectations. I certainly see nothing wrong with Pablo's question and it turns out that he was right and (unsurprisingly) Cody is wrong. End of story, for now, and we make incremental progress towards improving the article. What's the problem? --John (talk) 14:18, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
- So, you were sarcastic and hostile to Cody, and you turned out to be wrong, and you still can't bear to say "sorry" or play nice?LedRush (talk) 13:42, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
- What do you mean by false? The article says he is sorry he did nothing to help Meredith as she lay bleeding to death. It doesn't say he's sorry for killing her, for the very good reason that he denies doing so. CodyJoeBibby (talk) 12:51, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
- Interesting. So is this incorrect then, and do you have a source saying so? pablo 23:14, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- Rudy in no way apologised for the crime, he denied all responsiblity and continues to do so. CodyJoeBibby (talk) 23:09, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- For the lede, it doesn't need to state the original sentence. I think TMCK's suggestion is fairly decent, but I'm good with leaving it as is - Guede is serving a 16 year term. The section on his trial and appeals covers the original sentence and the reduction in more detail, as they should. Ravensfire (talk) 23:54, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- Fine with either. He is serving 16 years. I don't personally think it's important enough to mention in the lead that his sentence was reduced, but I've no objection if that goes in. I really don't think that the supposed reason for the sentence reduction should go in the lead however, all this is dealt with appropriately lower down. pablo 19:24, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
- Completely agree with you on that point. Ravensfire (talk) 19:37, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
- I agree with Pablo and Ravensire...though I still prefer TMCk's formulation.LedRush (talk) 19:54, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
- Done, can't see any significant objection to this in the 9 million words of discussion above. pablo 20:00, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
- Fine with either. He is serving 16 years. I don't personally think it's important enough to mention in the lead that his sentence was reduced, but I've no objection if that goes in. I really don't think that the supposed reason for the sentence reduction should go in the lead however, all this is dealt with appropriately lower down. pablo 19:24, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
Evidence Section - Woman's Shoe
"An additional shoe print, which prosecutors believed to be a woman's, was found on a pillow under the body. Prosecutors argued that it was the right size to be Knox's, although it did not match her footwear.[56] An expert defence witness stated that this was a partial print that matched the pattern of Guede's left shoe,[48]:367-8 that it was similar to four other left-shoe prints found on the pillow,[57] that it was not a woman's shoe size and had not been left by a man's right shoe.[57" **** This whole paragrah is a whole lot of nothing. What shoe? Where in the Massei report was it used in convicting Amanda Knox? The prosecution at one time tried to say a partial print of Rudy Guede's was a woman's shoe. That was discredited and does NOT appear in the Massei report. This whole section should be removed. It doesn't even make sense to include suggested evidence against Knox that wasn't even used to convict her. Issymo (talk) 01:06, 11 June 2011 (UTC)
- No one has posted any objections to the removal of this section so I'll delete this section if that is okay. Issymo (talk) 18:43, 12 June 2011 (UTC)
- Silence does not equal consent. Tarc (talk) 00:17, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- An interesting opinion (hypocritical perhaps) from someone who declares a conversation held in 24 hours between only like-minded editors as being a consensus.LedRush (talk) 01:16, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- Silence does not equal consent. Tarc (talk) 00:17, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- I had removed the above sentence as I advised I would above and someone reverted it. There is not a note here on who and why this was done. I gave very sound reasoning on why this portion should be removed. I would really appreciate other editors to please comment on this subject. Again, there is zero grounds to include the above sentence in the article. The Massei report, which is the final authority on the evidence used to convict Knox and Sollecito, does NOT include a possible women's size shoe as the reasoning for guilt. It should not be included any more than any other outdated theories. Also, why revert something without bothering to post an objection in the first place? Issymo (talk) 19:45, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- You are correct on all accounts. There is no reason for this sentence to be there, and per BRD, the discussion should move here.LedRush (talk) 19:51, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- There can be no conceivable reason to leave this in the article except for bad faith smearing of Knox. It does not form part of the case against her. CodyJoeBibby (talk) 23:13, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- You are correct on all accounts. There is no reason for this sentence to be there, and per BRD, the discussion should move here.LedRush (talk) 19:51, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- I had removed the above sentence as I advised I would above and someone reverted it. There is not a note here on who and why this was done. I gave very sound reasoning on why this portion should be removed. I would really appreciate other editors to please comment on this subject. Again, there is zero grounds to include the above sentence in the article. The Massei report, which is the final authority on the evidence used to convict Knox and Sollecito, does NOT include a possible women's size shoe as the reasoning for guilt. It should not be included any more than any other outdated theories. Also, why revert something without bothering to post an objection in the first place? Issymo (talk) 19:45, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
- It's sourced that it was used as evidence in trial against Knox and Sollecito with the defense producing an expert that argued it was made by Guede. I'm not seeing a problem here. Evidence that's discredited isn't automatically removed from the article, instead explain why it is discredited. That's what is done here. Ravensfire (talk) 00:09, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
- I completely disagree. We have the Massei report to explain what reasons the court found Knox and Sollecito guilty and the Micheli report for Guede. Only the evidenced used to give them the guilty verdicts should be listed. There are enough real reasons given in the reports without including things that were brought up at trial but were not part of the reasoning to convict them. Issymo (talk) 00:24, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
- Do we really want to do the back and forth of the whole trial? How many items would this be? We could discuss the time Raffaele called the police also? Why though? It isn't a reason used to convict him. Should we also then get into evidence for innocence that was ignored by the court? We could discuss the ToD issues that Massei ignored. It makes more sense to me to narrow things down to the actual reasons given by the reports for conviction. If we are going to include anything discussed in the trial this article will be about to get a lot longer. A point counter point could be given for everything at trial. Issymo (talk) 00:49, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
- I'm not going to agree with that view. If we've got sourced information that something was presented, especially if it was then examined by the judges, showing they considered it, it should be included. That it exists in the Masseo report demonstrates that it was considered and rejected. Ravensfire (talk) 00:39, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
- The concensus of the editors who have added comments on this is that it should be removed. Could we get a neutral admin, not John or Errant, to look at this and see if my deletion can be accepted now? Issymo (talk) 23:46, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
- Concensus to remove? Seriously? I think not. Let's get an admin to decide about that first. Ravensfire (talk) 00:13, 15 June 2011 (UTC)
- 24 hours is more than enough to remove a tag, but 4 days is totally not long enough to remove misleading and superfluous information?LedRush (talk) 03:43, 15 June 2011 (UTC)
- Concensus to remove? Seriously? I think not. Let's get an admin to decide about that first. Ravensfire (talk) 00:13, 15 June 2011 (UTC)
- The concensus of the editors who have added comments on this is that it should be removed. Could we get a neutral admin, not John or Errant, to look at this and see if my deletion can be accepted now? Issymo (talk) 23:46, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
- I'm not going to agree with that view. If we've got sourced information that something was presented, especially if it was then examined by the judges, showing they considered it, it should be included. That it exists in the Masseo report demonstrates that it was considered and rejected. Ravensfire (talk) 00:39, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
Ravensfire, how is this EVIDENCE as the section indicates. If a woman's shoe was evidence used in oonviction it would be in the Massei report. It is not there. Not eveything is fixed by having both sides post something to counter. This is a pointless inclusion in the article that only adds to the old out dated rumors. If the woman's shoe is to be included maybe we should start a new section of the article - Things that you heard at one time that were not included as evidence to convict. In this new section we could list the Woman's shoe, an olive thowing witness, bleach receipts, harry potter's books, washing machines and numerous of other 'evidence' that was reported in the news or presented at trial before dismissed. Does anyone consider olive throwing Hekuran Kokomani as 'evidence' against anyone? The woman's shoe is in the same category. It was discussed at trial but it is NOT evidence and wasn't use to convict them. Issymo (talk) 07:30, 15 June 2011 (UTC)
Three people saying yes and one person saying no is not a consensus. --(ʞɿɐʇ) ɐuɐʞsǝp 07:01, 15 June 2011 (UTC)
- Deskana, one thing you need to understand about this page is a group of abusive Admins and editors blocked and banned editors who leaned toward innocence views this last year. The affect was that the article was extremely unbalanced. It has gotten better since JW appeared, but there is still a lot of biased information in the article. The placement of the woman's shoe in the article is an attempt to insinuate guilt. Since it wasn't used to convict her in the Massei report it should be removed or moved to the new section suggested. The Evidence section should not be difficult. The reason used to convict the three of them are in the Massei and Micheli reports. Why not just list them out for each person, with a short paragraph explaining that this is what was used as evidence to convict them but the appeals process is not complete. Issymo (talk) 07:30, 15 June 2011 (UTC)
- Do we have a source saying explictly that it was dismissed as evidence? Or is it simply not mentioned in the reports? I think as evidence given at trial it has significance, but we could reduce the content down to a couple of lines. It is also somewhat out of place in that section given that it is less forensic evidence and more an argument over whose print it is (so in the forensics section we can say lots of shoe prints were found and detail any facts about those, and in subsequent sections talk about the prosecution/defence arguments relating to them. Thoughts? I do think Issymo has a point about a lot of face time being given to this content which doesn't appear of huge importance to the convictions, I don't support outright removal, but definitely cut it down. --Errant (chat!) 08:26, 15 June 2011 (UTC)
- I agree with Issymo up to a point, (I've no idea who first mentioned it as a possible womans's shoe, so saying that it's there to insinuate guilt is a bit omniscient). Certainly I think that the sentence "Prosecutors argued that it was the right size to be Knox's, although it did not match her footwear" adds nothing.
Issymo is absolutely right that too much detail from the court case would be madness - this is what the article has suffered from before. pablo 10:10, 15 June 2011 (UTC)edited pablo 13:35, 15 June 2011 (UTC)- pablo, the women's shoe claim was made by the head of Perugia's murder squad, and is from the Daily Telegraph source. There's a section of the Massei report dedicated to this print starting at pg 342 going to 344. They note the conflicting conclusions from the prosecution and defense experts, but don't express an opinion. The report does specifically state that they cannot exclude Knox from having stepped on the pillow. As the evidence section is done right now, with far too much detail, I can't agree with removing it. As part of a larger effort to actually summarize things, I'd love to see it. But pulling out only evidence that might possibly implicate Knox is pushing a POV. Ravensfire (talk) 15:16, 15 June 2011 (UTC)
- Yes, that's pretty much my opinion too. It would be great to see a general consensus here to summarize more of the over-detailed stuff but we can't selectively reduce stuff to suit one particular POV as this proposal seems to be suggesting. --John (talk) 15:38, 15 June 2011 (UTC)
- pablo, the women's shoe claim was made by the head of Perugia's murder squad, and is from the Daily Telegraph source. There's a section of the Massei report dedicated to this print starting at pg 342 going to 344. They note the conflicting conclusions from the prosecution and defense experts, but don't express an opinion. The report does specifically state that they cannot exclude Knox from having stepped on the pillow. As the evidence section is done right now, with far too much detail, I can't agree with removing it. As part of a larger effort to actually summarize things, I'd love to see it. But pulling out only evidence that might possibly implicate Knox is pushing a POV. Ravensfire (talk) 15:16, 15 June 2011 (UTC)
- First, Massei does not use the 'Woman's Shoe' as part of the reasoning to convict Knox - "The Court, on this point, takes notice of the opposing conclusions without expressing a specific opinion." Massei pg368. Then he goes on to say that that she was NOT WEARING SHOES but was moving around the murder seen in bare feet a la the luminol prints - "to whom [=Knox], actually, one [must] attribute moving herself about the murder scene essentially in bare feet,". Massei pg 368. So again, this is NOT evidence, Massei did not draw a conclusion on who the print belonged to; he did not use the shoe to convict and also says Knox was barefooted. The woman's shoe should be removed from the article as evidence used to convict, it was not. Issymo (talk) 02:38, 16 June 2011 (UTC)
- There is room for the shoe but not enough room to note that Judge Micheli thought Rudy deserved life (30 years). Which is of NO particular view, but fact.--Truth Mom 03:26, 16 June 2011 (UTC)
- From the article: "On 28 October 2008, Guede was found guilty of the murder and sexual assault of Kercher and sentenced to 30 years in prison." What's your point? pablo 05:31, 16 June 2011 (UTC)
- There is room for the shoe but not enough room to note that Judge Micheli thought Rudy deserved life (30 years). Which is of NO particular view, but fact.--Truth Mom 03:26, 16 June 2011 (UTC)
- There were blood footprints of Rudy Guede all over the place. There was one footprint that at one point was argued to be a woman's shoe while other experts said it was Rudy's. In the end it was not part of the evidence used for the conviction in the Massei report. Unless you are going to include all of the pieces of misinformation that did not hold up under scrutiny it should be removed. This seems obvious. Dougbremner (talk) 18:35, 16 June 2011 (UTC)
- Doug, is this addressing my question to Truth Mom? pablo 05:07, 17 June 2011 (UTC)
- There were blood footprints of Rudy Guede all over the place. There was one footprint that at one point was argued to be a woman's shoe while other experts said it was Rudy's. In the end it was not part of the evidence used for the conviction in the Massei report. Unless you are going to include all of the pieces of misinformation that did not hold up under scrutiny it should be removed. This seems obvious. Dougbremner (talk) 18:35, 16 June 2011 (UTC)
- Here is the actual court presentation given by Raffaele Sollecito's defense expert, Francesco Vinci, confirming without a doubt that there was not a shoe print on the pillow that could be attributed to a woman's shoe. All prints on the pillow came from Rudy Guede's Nike Outbreak 2 shoes. This should be able to be used as a primary source. I understand if the link can't be used but the PDF can be downloaded anywhere and used for reference. [6] You can also see an English interpretation here [7] I am not suggesting to use anything from the Injustice in perugia website in the Wiki article. I am posting the second link for the simple fact that Vinci's presentation is in Italian. BruceFisher (talk) 04:31, 16 June 2011 (UTC)
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An interesting article by the American Bar Association journal. [8]. It is based on an article in the Sun, which looks to be a more serious journalistic report than their usual. [9]. I would propose adding this information in the forensic section. I wouldn't think we'd even need a whole sentence; a clause should be enough.LedRush (talk) 15:22, 12 June 2011 (UTC)
The relevant Sun text is this; He shrugged and produced his latest bizarre theory - that Knox wasn't in the room at all, but orchestrated the killing from outside. Mignini said: "Amanda might theoretically have instigated the murder while even staying in the other room." Quite how we could present that in the article as "the prosecutor cannot place Knox in the room" is... well it would be intellectually dishonest! Unless I am being thick that is clearly presented as; he has a theory to explain a lack of DNA evidence. --Errant (chat!) 20:23, 12 June 2011 (UTC)
Oggi has also written about the interview. A CD of the interview was turned over to the Sollecito defense team. Here is a quote from Mignini "acknowledging that the scene of the crime have not been found biological traces of the alleged murderer Amanda Knox," says that "in principle Amanda may have instigated the murder also being in a 'other room " [10] I agree the SUN is a tabloid but Bob Graham has also freelanced for The Sunday Times and other papers. Since the interview has been picked up by Oggi and given to the defense it could be mentioned in the article. Issymo (talk) 20:56, 12 June 2011 (UTC)
There is no misrepresentation in this article. The ABA Journal is not a tabloid, it is a legal news source. There have been no valid objections to the content of the articles to date.LedRush (talk) 23:08, 12 June 2011 (UTC)
Presenting this as "the prosecutor cannot place Knox in the room" is definitely inappropriate and, yes, intellectually dishonest because that is not at all what was said; instead it is an inference drawn from the comment that does not quite hold up (the prosecutor does not seem to have made any comment about whether he can or cannot place Knox in the room, only theorized on why her DNA is not present). So; is this new theory significant enough to report. It's not doing itself any favours by being reported in the Sun :) have any other sources picked it up independently? In addition; we don't currently seem to mention any of his other theories on the murders - why suddenly this one? There should be plenty of material on the other theories he has expressed so perhaps that is the best place to start. --Errant (chat!) 08:55, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
If the National Enquirer publishes a story, we all agree that it's not a credible source, but if the same story appears in the New York Times then it becomes a very credible source. In this case the ABA article is the credible source. This doesn't seem that complicated. BruceFisher (talk) 16:43, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
I really don't want to get sucked into this article; it looks like a huge time waster. But I'll offer my 2 cents. I looked over the original Sun story as well as the ABA story. I have no idea how you can go from "Amanda might theoretically have instigated the murder while even staying in the other room" to "the prosecutor cannot place Knox in the room". The Sun didn't post a transcript and both stories are light on details. It would be irresponsible for us to include this in our article without stronger sourcing.
Another thing I would mention is the issue of weight. I did a Google News search,[15] and could only find 2 sources that even mention this. Given that there are probably thousands of articles about this topic, it would be undue weight to include something that virtually no one is talking about. A Quest For Knowledge (talk) 19:34, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
Why everyone is focusing on the theory and not on the facts seems strange to me.; uh, perhaps because the facts are tangential to the matter. Mignini does not seem to have made any comment on whether or not he can place Knox in the room, he simply was asked if he could explain a lack of DNA evidence. So those are the facts; a) there is no DNA evidence of Knox in the room (though this is, again, only touched on in the article) and b) Mignini has a (rather hilarious) theory on why that might be. "The prosecutor cannot place Knox in the room" is not a fact, it is a particular expression of the interview answer :) To demonstrate how much this has been stretched, LedRush, your comment based on the fact that nothing puts Knox in the crime scene does not at all reflect the sources, which talk exclusively about DNA evidence and make no mention of anything else.
I still think we can deal with Mignini's rather bizarre theorising in its entirety - I am not surprised this has been seized on a "Very Important Information" by some, and that it contradicts his previous stance might be significant. However, no source appears to have been presented which expresses this view and explains the reversal - so whilst it is fine for people here on the talk page to argue this is an about face and therefore significant, it would be OR to place it into the article in such a context. If this is significant we will see more sources. --Errant (chat!) 08:53, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
A new article today about a letter sent to Terni from the author of the Oggi article, Giangavino Sulas, who listened to the Bob Graham's 2 hour and 50 Minute interview with Giuliano Mignini. The author says Mignini did indeed say in the interview "in theory could Amanda instigating the crime, even from another room ", along with MANY very interesting things. One bomb shell being that it was Mignini who decided not to test the semen stain on the pillow because the " the police could not search for all tracks." Apparently there are more articles to come out of this interview because they have only written about 25% of the interview due to space. [16] Issymo (talk) 01:22, 16 June 2011 (UTC) |
Oggi
Out of interest, has anyone actually seen the Oggi article itself? I haven't seen the magazine, and have searched their website, and come up with zip so far. Note that this one, which I cited and this one which Cody cites are websites which mention the Oggi piece. pablo 21:17, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
- I've tried a Google search, specifically within www.oggi.it, for "Mignini", which (for me at least) produces 7 results. From what I can tell, none of them includes more than one or two mentions of the name. SuperMarioMan 21:32, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
- I can explain why. OGGI does a lot of stories which it only puts in its print edition, not the online version, to maintain sales of the print version. We can only get these stories from bloggers who speak Italian and have bought copies of OGGI, i.e. Candace Dempsey, who is automatically assumed to be lying on this article for unexplained reasons. CodyJoeBibby (talk) 21:58, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
- I thought it was probably print-only, maybe there will be an online version eventually. I'll see if I can get hold of it elsewhere then. pablo 22:07, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
- Oggi's online and offline print are very different. Shouldn't matter under wiki's policies about citing an offline magazine as long as special care is taken: http://en.wiki.x.io/wiki/Wikipedia:Offline_sources. I have very good research resources and might be able to provide a scan if need be. (GeniusApprentice (talk) 22:38, 14 June 2011 (UTC))
- Thanks, Genius. CodyJoeBibby (talk) 22:45, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
- That would be good, thanks. The account from "ilsitodiperugia" had a number of quotations, ostensibly from the interview, which weren't really covered in the Sun piece. pablo 22:59, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
- Ok sounds good all. It may take a bit, but I shall do my best.(GeniusApprentice (talk) 23:08, 14 June 2011 (UTC))
- That would be good, thanks. The account from "ilsitodiperugia" had a number of quotations, ostensibly from the interview, which weren't really covered in the Sun piece. pablo 22:59, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks, Genius. CodyJoeBibby (talk) 22:45, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
- Oggi's online and offline print are very different. Shouldn't matter under wiki's policies about citing an offline magazine as long as special care is taken: http://en.wiki.x.io/wiki/Wikipedia:Offline_sources. I have very good research resources and might be able to provide a scan if need be. (GeniusApprentice (talk) 22:38, 14 June 2011 (UTC))
- I thought it was probably print-only, maybe there will be an online version eventually. I'll see if I can get hold of it elsewhere then. pablo 22:07, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
- I can explain why. OGGI does a lot of stories which it only puts in its print edition, not the online version, to maintain sales of the print version. We can only get these stories from bloggers who speak Italian and have bought copies of OGGI, i.e. Candace Dempsey, who is automatically assumed to be lying on this article for unexplained reasons. CodyJoeBibby (talk) 21:58, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
The writer of the Oggi article Giangavino Sulas has published an original letter about the interview with Bob Graham on the online version of the local Umbria magazine terniinrete here. In it he refutes the claim that it was not a real interview, that it lasted 2 hours and 50 minutes with an interpreter, and that there was a planned photo shoot. He further supplies the key quotes from the article where Mignini states that he preferred the Carabiniere as being more meticulous and less emotional, that they didn't have time to investigate the entire murder scene, and that there was no evidence to place Knox in the murder room.--Dougbremner (talk) 13:49, 16 June 2011 (UTC)
Convicted, guilty, presumed innocence...
Hi folks,
I am here because an editor who was blocked for editing the article made an appeal to the Unblock Requests Mailing List. Prior to that, I knew nothing of this case, and as far as I am aware, I have never edited this article or any connected articles.
I am asking for you to have a discussion on the "presume innocent" statements, which the blocked editor inserted, and which were removed.
My understanding is that although they were convicted by the jury (and unanimously at that) - and that fact obviously has to remain in the article, no question about that - Italian law does not regard them as being convicted murderers until their two stages of appeal are exhausted and they fail in their appeals.
My initial thought is that it is a good idea to mention this fact, as to ignore it could be in violation of Wikipedia's NPOV stance - to stress the guilt over the presumed innocence.
I see in the history of this talk page that the editor tried to start a conversation on this matter, but as they had no sources, their discussions were removed.
The most recent attempts to insert the statement about their presumed innocence included this Seattle Post-Intelligencer article by Andrea Vogt. The same reference is currently in use in the article (as I type, reference 109, referencing the sentence "According to the lay judges, the verdict was unanimous."), as are two other stories by Vogt from The Independent. I can see no reason to believe that either the source (it is not a blog entry, but a news story) nor the writer are unreliable or not independent of the subject.
The exact quote from the article reads:
The presumption of innocence is so strong in Italy that under criminal procedural law, Knox is still not considered a convicted murderer, and won't be, until she has been found guilty through all phases of the process: Court of Assize, where the jury just made a decision; the Appellate Court of Assize; and the Court of Cassation.
"In Italy there is a presumption of innocence until there is a definitive conviction," Carnevale said.
My initial feeling is that I would be veering towards including a mention of the "not considered a convicted murderer" even if as a footnote, rather than in the main text. However, I feel that it needs to be discussed by those who edit this article, and a very clear consensus formed on the issue. If the consensus is that it should not be included, I would be interested in reading the policy-based reasoning behind that, as my initial feeling is that the NPOV policy would seem to indicate that it should be mentioned.
Regards, PhantomSteve/talk|contribs\ 11:12, 18 June 2011 (UTC)
- This was discussed in in tense depth recently; I think the general consensus was that it was worth noting in the article text (probably under "appeals") but not something needing detail in the lead. The Guede appeals section (the first appeals section) says Two appeals are permitted under Italian law. Presumption of innocence is maintained until all appeals are completed.; I've disagreed this is the best place for it given that it is currently more relevant to Knox... but *shrug*
- (actually this raises an interesting idea - can we cut out a section prior to both trial sections giving a quick run over the Italian trial system - that could be interesting... maybe term it "Legal proceedings" and make a "lead" introduction briefly summarising the status of all three at this point and tie that to the trial processes in Italy... I think that could clean up content no end and make it more logical; I'll put something together later) --Errant (chat!) 11:22, 18 June 2011 (UTC)
- Having thought about it some more, I feel that the best place for the mention of the "presumed innocent" is indeed as a footnote - you guys just need to work out what it should be a footnote to, should you agree! PhantomSteve/talk|contribs\ 11:55, 18 June 2011 (UTC)
- PhantomSteve, you do realise that the person who submitted the unblock request to unblock-en-l isn't even blocked, right? --(ʞɿɐʇ) ɐuɐʞsǝp 11:29, 18 June 2011 (UTC)
- Well, as she neglected to give her user name, I cannot be sure! I have requested her username so that I can look into it further. I don't know if it is the one I refer to above, but it was something which I thought needed clearing up on this page when I saw this issue. PhantomSteve/talk|contribs\ 11:55, 18 June 2011 (UTC)
- This is a problem that plagues this topic area; a concerted, off-wiki effort by places such as Injustice in Perugia and Perugia Shock, Friends of Amanda. Now anonymous people who proxy for blocked editors to the Wikipedia mailing lists are getting a seat at the editing table? BTW, the SeattlePI is an online local newspaper, Knox's home town, with apparently zero impartiality on this matter. Tarc (talk) 13:12, 18 June 2011 (UTC)
- Of course, the highly organized group of like-minded editors who follow almost every post by every editor who contributes to this page and exert a stranglehold on this article constitute a substantial problem to the article as well.LedRush (talk) 13:45, 18 June 2011 (UTC)
- This is a problem that plagues this topic area; a concerted, off-wiki effort by places such as Injustice in Perugia and Perugia Shock, Friends of Amanda. Now anonymous people who proxy for blocked editors to the Wikipedia mailing lists are getting a seat at the editing table? BTW, the SeattlePI is an online local newspaper, Knox's home town, with apparently zero impartiality on this matter. Tarc (talk) 13:12, 18 June 2011 (UTC)
- Back on topic, burying the information where it doesn't matter (Guede has exhausted the appeals) doesn't make sense to me. I think the information needs to be brought up the first time we say K&S were convicted. I think stating the text is best, but the footnote may be a good compromise.LedRush (talk) 13:49, 18 June 2011 (UTC)
- Well, as she neglected to give her user name, I cannot be sure! I have requested her username so that I can look into it further. I don't know if it is the one I refer to above, but it was something which I thought needed clearing up on this page when I saw this issue. PhantomSteve/talk|contribs\ 11:55, 18 June 2011 (UTC)
- I agree that there is scope for a concise section detailing the special aspects of the Italian judicial system. Alternatively, a footnote could be written. I am the one responsible for placing the information about two appeals and presumption of innocence in the section on Guede - perhaps it is currently more relevant to Knox and Sollecito, but this is still a general provision under Italian law, and as such it made more sense to me that the article give this explanation in the first instance where the two appeals and presumption of innocence are relevant (i.e. for Guede, who went through trial and appeals first). There is WP:RECENTISM to consider. SuperMarioMan 13:54, 18 June 2011 (UTC)
- But by burying the information, it means anyone looking up info merely on the people whose case is ongoing will not get the info. The BLP violation potential far outweighs misplaced concerns of recentism. And, as I said, this should be mentioned the first time someone is mentioned as "convicted" who still is has not exhausted the appeals process. This should happen whether or not there is a section on Italian law.LedRush (talk) 14:01, 18 June 2011 (UTC)
- Exactly what BLP violation are you asserting here? Tarc (talk) 15:19, 18 June 2011 (UTC)
- This has nothing to do with "burying the information" - it is simply a case of writing the article from a historical perspective whenever possible. Wouldn't someone reading the article in section order be confused to find the explanation for the two appeals and presumption of innocence only towards the end of the page, in the Knox and Sollecito trials section, when the conditions have previously applied just as much to Guede? I think that WP:BLP is a fallacious argument here - this discussion about the Italian judicial system certainly raises WP:NPOV concerns, but Wikipedia is not subject to Italian law and is not concerned with how it defines guilt and innocence. SuperMarioMan 16:22, 18 June 2011 (UTC)
- It seems a little contradictory to me say that the article is about the Italian judicial system and then follow that up by saying that Wikipedia is not concerned with how it defines guilt and innocence. You can't have it both ways; if the article is about the Italian judicial system then by the definition of the scope of the article, the definition of guilt and innocence that they use matters. --(ʞɿɐʇ) ɐuɐʞsǝp 16:38, 18 June 2011 (UTC)
My comment (which I probably could have written with greater precision) questions how it is BLP that is the major concern as opposed to NPOV. Since Wikipedia is not based in Italy, I struggle to see how the potential for a BLP violation exists due to distinctions made in Italian law. I do not dispute that the article should include discussion of this definition of guilt and innocence, preferably in the form of a separate section or a footnote, but the concerns that are entailed surely relate to NPOV alone. SuperMarioMan 16:55, 18 June 2011 (UTC)- If the only reason why something is not a BLP violation is where Wikipedia is based, then it is without question that the spirit of BLP is being violated. I do not know enough about this particular dispute to assert whether that is the case, but that you imply that the only reason BLP is not being violated is because Wikipedia is based in the USA is quite disturbing to me. --(ʞɿɐʇ) ɐuɐʞsǝp 16:59, 18 June 2011 (UTC)
- I believe the assertion that there was a BLP violation was founded in Italian law here. The one asserting it kept claiming that our article states that Knox & Sollecito are guilty of murder...as a distinction, our article states that they were convicted (by a court) which is backed by what mainstream sources have reported.
⋙–Berean–Hunter—► ((⊕)) 17:23, 18 June 2011 (UTC)
- I believe the assertion that there was a BLP violation was founded in Italian law here. The one asserting it kept claiming that our article states that Knox & Sollecito are guilty of murder...as a distinction, our article states that they were convicted (by a court) which is backed by what mainstream sources have reported.
- If the only reason why something is not a BLP violation is where Wikipedia is based, then it is without question that the spirit of BLP is being violated. I do not know enough about this particular dispute to assert whether that is the case, but that you imply that the only reason BLP is not being violated is because Wikipedia is based in the USA is quite disturbing to me. --(ʞɿɐʇ) ɐuɐʞsǝp 16:59, 18 June 2011 (UTC)
- It seems a little contradictory to me say that the article is about the Italian judicial system and then follow that up by saying that Wikipedia is not concerned with how it defines guilt and innocence. You can't have it both ways; if the article is about the Italian judicial system then by the definition of the scope of the article, the definition of guilt and innocence that they use matters. --(ʞɿɐʇ) ɐuɐʞsǝp 16:38, 18 June 2011 (UTC)
- But by burying the information, it means anyone looking up info merely on the people whose case is ongoing will not get the info. The BLP violation potential far outweighs misplaced concerns of recentism. And, as I said, this should be mentioned the first time someone is mentioned as "convicted" who still is has not exhausted the appeals process. This should happen whether or not there is a section on Italian law.LedRush (talk) 14:01, 18 June 2011 (UTC)
- (edit conflict) Clearly I'm not articulating my points well and don't seem to be making the right decisions today. I'll withdraw that previous comment for now and consider re-phrasing it - I'm sorry that it proved disturbing. SuperMarioMan 17:28, 18 June 2011 (UTC)
- I oppose mentioning the presumption of innocence in the lede. The presumption really doesn't say much: if we had video of an accused doing the crime, then the presumption would still apply. It really says nothing either way about whether K & S were involved in the murder. If the appeals do not complete, then we would have a Kenneth Lay situation where it would belong in the lead because it might vacate the legal result of the first trial. (I'm not sure we have any WP:RS that describe how Italian law handles that situtation; does an appeal immediately vacate the first trial? If an appeal does not complete, may journalists still report that a defendant lost his first trial?) If the appeals are later exhausted and the judgments become final convictions, then the presumption will be irrelevant to the article. The effort to include the presumption in the lede appeared to be more of an effort to suggest that K and S did not do the crime rather than explain a point about the Italian judicial system. Furthermore, the presumption of innocence is more about the standard of proof (defendant must lose in three courts before being guilty) rather than reporting K and S's progress through the court system. I take no position on including the presumption of innocence in the main article. Glrx (talk) 18:42, 19 June 2011 (UTC)
- I looked at a machine translated it:MoMK to see how it characterized the status. In Italy, there may be terms of art for the progress through the judicial system: "judgment of first instance" and "judgment of second instance". Glrx (talk) 22:02, 19 June 2011 (UTC)
- There's a summary here which you may find useful. pablo 22:17, 19 June 2011 (UTC)
- I looked at a machine translated it:MoMK to see how it characterized the status. In Italy, there may be terms of art for the progress through the judicial system: "judgment of first instance" and "judgment of second instance". Glrx (talk) 22:02, 19 June 2011 (UTC)
Amanda Knox own article
I'm boldly closing this; if you are considering re-opening please consider these points first:
- The discussion has begun to break down and I don't see anything productive coming from it any more.
- There is little chance, anyway, of a formal resolution on whether Knox should have a biography in this informal discussion. I suggest a good next step would be as follows:
- Construct a decent biography in user space and ask for input
- Open a formal neutrally worded RFC in a more logical place (perhaps the Knox talk page) and attain community consensus on the matter
- Alternatively the idea of a forked Knox/Sollecito trial article has better support and is worth considering (in terms of a user space draft etc.)
I'm closing this mostly because it has turned into glaring tetchily at each other after all the relevant points have been made. --Errant (chat!) 10:29, 20 June 2011 (UTC)
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I want to bring it up for discussion again, isnt it time for Amanda Knox to have her own article. I think we are all fully aware that she herself has reached the notability needed to have her own Wikipedia article. There is more focus on her than the murder victim herself, it has been made a for TV-movie about Amanda Knox in person starring Hollywood stars. Whenever something even insignificant happens in her trial etc it becames instant headline news in international and americna media. So its not just an american phenomena. I am in Strong Support of an separate Amanda Knox article.--BabbaQ (talk) 11:52, 18 June 2011 (UTC)
Knox is obviously in need of her own article, and Wikipedia does a great disservice to its readers by not allowing one. Of course, when I say Wikipedia doesn't allow one, I am not referring to its policies, which clearly dictate that she is notable and that the one-event rule clearly doesn't apply in this case. The content of the article would merely be the facts of her life as reported by mainstream media: early life and education; preparation for move to Italy, events surrounding murder; murder trial and appeals; related trials; life in prison. There are countless precedents for this type of article on Wikipedia. The biggest problem I see with this article is the one Tarc alludes to: that it would become a content fork regarding the trials. This would need to be carefully monitored, and stopped. This article should retain the most detail about the trials and evidence, and that article should have no new information in it regarding these topics. But seeing as the highly organized group of like minded editors is able to follow virtually every edit by every editor who posts on this page and reprimand and/or begin administrative actions against them for any perceived fault, I am sure that adding an Amanda Knox page would be easy as pie.LedRush (talk) 13:43, 18 June 2011 (UTC)
LedRush makes the best case for an article on Amanda Knox. I know there is a rule somewhere stating that I cannot mention other articles to support my argument but I would still like to know what Scott Peterson ever did in his life that was notable before he murdered his wife Laci [17]. Innocence or guilt plays no part in the comparison. Of course I see a brand new excuse surfacing about "forking" so I guess there is always another Wikipedia policy somewhere that a Wikipedia veteran can pull out of his pocked when his last policy attempt failed. Either way the wikipedia editors that have a firm grip on the Meredith Kercher article have decided that an Amanda Knox article is a bad idea so don't expect to see an article anytime soon. Wikipedia suffers when Wikipedia veterans take a strong hold as they have here. BruceFisher (talk) 19:19, 19 June 2011 (UTC)
Stop ranting and start drafting.Put your money where your mouth is if you're so "firm" in your believe.TMCk (talk) 23:22, 19 June 2011 (UTC)
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New Testimony; Theories of the Crime Section?
A couple hundred new news articles were written about the trial in the past day or so, concentrating on 5 new defense witnesses. http://edition.cnn.com/2011/WORLD/europe/06/18/italy.knox/ and http://www.cbsnews.com/stories/2011/06/18/earlyshow/saturday/main20072239.shtml are two examples.
Earlier, Errant had suggested a section of the article dedicated to prosecution theories of the crime. That could be mixed in with alternative theories of the crime, with some of this info mixed in. Alternatively, we could merely update the appeals section to reflect this info.
Any thoughts?LedRush (talk) 21:06, 18 June 2011 (UTC)
- This ref seems to contain a little more detail. If we give it another day or two, we may get better details. Of the multiple theories, the one that may be worth mentioning concerns the witnesses' testimonies surrounding Guede.
⋙–Berean–Hunter—► ((⊕)) 11:43, 19 June 2011 (UTC)
- I think it's a section with potential. There's some elements of such a section scattered in various spots, putting it all into one place is both good from an article perspective and provides useful information about a notable aspect of the case. These theories began before the trial and have been changing since then. Some care will need to be exercised to keep it focused on the more notable versions though. Ravensfire (talk) 03:54, 20 June 2011 (UTC)
Forensic Evidence: Stomach Contents
According to her English friends Meredith Kercher ate a meal at 6:00 or 6:30 pm (Massei report). Autopsy performed after the murder showed no stomach contents had emptied into the duodenum (Massei report). Based on a median time for stomach contents to first enter the duodenum from the start of a meal of 82 minutes (25-75% 66-102 minutes) (Gastric emptying time of fluids and solids in healthy subjects determined by 13C breath tests: influence of age, sex and body mass index Stephan Hellmig1,*, Florian Von Schöning1, Christof Gadow1, Stavros Katsoulis2, Jürgen Hedderich3, Ulrich Robert Fölsch1, Eckhard Stüber1, Journal of Gastroenterology and Hepatology Volume 21, Issue 12, pages 1832–1838, December 2006) that places time of death at 9:00 or 9:30 pm, which is not consistent with the prosecutor's time of death of 11:30 pm (Massei report). — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dougbremner (talk • contribs) 21:02, 15 June 2011 (UTC)
- As I've explained on my talk page, you're taking material from multiple sources and combining it to draw a conclusion not explicitly stated by any of the sources, which runs afoul of WP:SYNTHESIS. Is this conclusion examined by any reliable, third-party source (i.e. not blogs, Facebook pages, self-published websites and so on)? Salvio Let's talk about it! 21:08, 15 June 2011 (UTC)
- I have to agree. Your argument seems sound (but what do I know about this stuff), but it is original research (synth). We need RSs reporting on information to include them here.LedRush (talk) 21:24, 15 June 2011 (UTC)
- Yes. And even on original research grounds, there's a huge leap between quoting a median value and giving a time with a 30-minute margin of error. From the numbers quoted, there's a 50% chance the time would lie outside this range. --John (talk) 21:30, 15 June 2011 (UTC)
- The stomach contents argument (complete with battling experts) is covered in the Massei Report. Glrx (talk) 21:35, 15 June 2011 (UTC)
Yes, but the point is that the odds of a time of death much greater than three hours after the start of the meal is less than 1%. The pathologist who performed the autopsy based on stomach contents gave a time of death of 2-3 hours. Other expert gave 2-4 hours and one up to 5 hours (which is demonstrably false).--Dougbremner (talk) 21:54, 15 June 2011 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dougbremner (talk • contribs) 21:41, 15 June 2011 (UTC)
- I understand what you're saying, but Wikipedia is not about finding the Truth. It is about reporting what reliable sources say. Do you have any reliable sources which put the time of death at a certain time or time period?LedRush (talk) 21:45, 15 June 2011 (UTC)
Revision of above: According to her English friends Meredith Kercher ate a meal at 6:00 or 6:30 pm (Massei report). Autopsy performed after the murder showed no stomach contents had emptied into the duodenum; based on this the pathologist testified that time of death was 2-3 hours after the start of the meal (Massei report). Another expert testified to a time of death of 2-4 hours after the start of the meal, while a third stated that time of death could have been up to five hours after the start of the meal (Massei report)--Dougbremner (talk) 21:54, 15 June 2011 (UTC). — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dougbremner (talk • contribs) 21:49, 15 June 2011 (UTC)
- That's quite detailed content for the article... can we get the premise of it in a sentence (with sources)? I could support that. --Errant (chat!) 22:09, 15 June 2011 (UTC)
Based on the time of the last meal and the absence of stomach contents in the duodenum, the pathologist who performed the autopsy placed the time of death at 9:00 pm, while two other experts placed the time of death at 9-10 pm and 9-11 pm (Massei Report).--Dougbremner 22:14, 15 June 2011 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dougbremner (talk • contribs)
- My inclination might be... Stomach content analyis by three experts placed the time of death between 9 and 11 pm. --Errant (chat!) 22:20, 15 June 2011 (UTC)
- Errant, I appreciate your attempt here at synthesizing the different takes on time of death but the way it's written sounds like they all said the time of death was from around 9 to 11, not three different times. Is there a problem with saying that different experts came up with different times of death? Is the problem that we only have the Massei report and not something from reliable sources?(GeniusApprentice (talk) 22:46, 15 June 2011 (UTC))
- As SMM says, we appear already to cover it... and, yes, the problem is any lack of sources raising this as an important or significant distinction. Remember; this is a light-weight summary of the source material so we can only go into minimal detail on content. --Errant (chat!) 22:51, 15 June 2011 (UTC)
- I totally understand what you are saying, but I think that sentence can easily be changed to reflect that the experts each had different times. "Stomach content analysis by three experts place the time of death at different times between 9 and 11 pm." That might not read well, but I was thinking something of that nature. The way it reads now makes it seem that all three experts agreed on the same time frame. So maybe the distinction is not important, but since we have bothered to address the issue in the first place, the sentence raises another inference that we know isn't true. I think a rightly worded sentence can be an easy fix.
- As SMM says, we appear already to cover it... and, yes, the problem is any lack of sources raising this as an important or significant distinction. Remember; this is a light-weight summary of the source material so we can only go into minimal detail on content. --Errant (chat!) 22:51, 15 June 2011 (UTC)
- This is already discussed in the "Events surrounding the murder" section: "According to early investigations and post-mortem examination, Kercher died in the flat between 9 and 11 pm". SuperMarioMan 22:24, 15 June 2011 (UTC)
- I think even this could be synthesized better to reflect reality. For example "According to early investigations and post-mortem examination, though experts differed on the exact time, all placed the time of death no earlier than 9PM and no later than 11 PM." Again, I'm not sure this is the greatest sentence in the world, but I do think the way it's written now gives off the wrong impression, and therefore would not even properly reflect what reliable sources have reported. (GeniusApprentice (talk) 23:17, 15 June 2011 (UTC))
- Another possibility: "Different experts placed the time of death as early as 9pm and as late as 11pm". (GeniusApprentice (talk) 23:29, 15 June 2011 (UTC))
- Errant, I appreciate your attempt here at synthesizing the different takes on time of death but the way it's written sounds like they all said the time of death was from around 9 to 11, not three different times. Is there a problem with saying that different experts came up with different times of death? Is the problem that we only have the Massei report and not something from reliable sources?(GeniusApprentice (talk) 22:46, 15 June 2011 (UTC))
- (e/c) ??? That is not what the Massei Report says. There were more than 3 experts who weighed in on stomach contents. Lalli at 109 (2 to 4 hours and 2 to 3 hrs after eating), Bacci at 114 (9PM to 12AM), Norelli at 119 (too many unknowns to reliably estimate), Introna at 129 (9:30 to 10:30), and Ronchi at 146 (no ligatures in autopsy; slide; 3 to 5 hours or longer). The Report at 180 rejected Introna's estimate. Furthermore, the issue of the ligatures made it possible that duodenum was not empty. Then there's the uncertainty of the meal timing, the mushroom, and the alcohol. Glrx (talk) 01:17, 16 June 2011 (UTC)
To state that the time of death based on gastric contents was placed at 9-11 pm is misleading since it makes it look like it could have been anywhere in that range. This controverts the Wikipedia entry "Digestion" which lists the gastric phase (when food fills the stomach and begins to empty into the duodenom) at 3-4 hours. Entry into duodenum begins at the beginning of the gastric phase (median 82 minutes per the citation above). What you have is three experts with three different time frames, one of which is impossible and which controverts Wikipedia "Digestion" entry. Note that there were no contents in the duodenum. It is impossible in a normal person to have no stomach contents in the duodenum after 4 hours (i.e. 10 pm). Leaving it as written 9-11 pm implying time of death could have been anywhere in this range is false. --Dougbremner 00:49, 16 June 2011 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dougbremner (talk • contribs)
Even using the wikipedia "digestion" entry is misleading because the only thing of concern is the time when contents first arrive in the duodenum and I could not find a wikipedia entry for that. Apparently it is not allowed to bring in other sources to cite to what normal time of first entry into the duodenum would be. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dougbremner (talk • contribs) 00:57, 16 June 2011 (UTC)
- Wikipedia entries are not reliable sources, and can be used for just about nothing.LedRush (talk) 01:22, 16 June 2011 (UTC)
there is no uncertainty about the meal timing - the girls all placed the meal at 6:00- 6:30 pm. This was followed by watching a two hour movie (they were clear they ate before the movie), following which one of the girls accompanied Meredith home before 9:00 pm - she knows because she wanted to get home to watch a 9:00 pm TV show. Meredith was captured returning by CCTV at about 8:55 pm. These are facts. We can start from these and go from there. --Dougbremner 02:16, 16 June 2011 (UTC)--Dougbremner 02:16, 16 June 2011 (UTC)
"Uncertainties" about alcohol, mushrooms and ligatures and "too many uncertainties" are red herrings. I am a doctor. There is a physiology of the gastric tract and Meredith Kercher had no known gastric pathology. It would be extremely unlikely for there to be no gastric contents in the duodenum after three hours and essentially impossible (e.g. p<.0001) after four hours. Her alcohol content was less than one beer. That is irrelevant. She had a mushroom fragment in her esophagus which might mean something got stuck or she had a snack on returning - which is irrelevant. "Ligatures" - the pathologist clearly said there were no contents in the duodenum. Ligatures have nothing to do with it. All known science demonstrates that a time of death is physically impossible after 10 pm.--Dougbremner 02:29, 16 June 2011 (UTC)
- I think this would be good to include in the Appeal Section of the article. The appeals go into the ToD issues at length. It's simple math, 4 hours is given as the longest time for the stomach to start emptying. They started dining at 6 p.m., 6 + 4 hrs = no later that 10 p.m. I guess I'm confused how we are using the Evidence Section. To my understanding it should be the evidence used to convict and not just what was argued. Can we clarify what we want from this section? Issymo (talk) 02:49, 16 June 2011 (UTC)
- Do you have reliable sources that discuss this calculation? Otherwise it's original research. --John (talk) 03:03, 16 June 2011 (UTC)
- John, I'm not saying that should be stated as fact in the article. This topic is in the appeals. I think we should include the stomach content ToD issue in the appeal section of the article Issymo (talk) 03:17, 16 June 2011 (UTC)
- Sources?
⋙–Berean–Hunter—► ((⊕)) 03:23, 16 June 2011 (UTC)- The source that the topic is discussed in the appeal is the appeal. Am I missing something here? Issymo (talk) 03:44, 16 June 2011 (UTC)
- How about just stating what is in the appeal? How about this: "In the appeal of Raffaele Sollecito, the defense argues that the time of death was between 9:30 and 10:pm. Times were estimated using body weight, temperature, and digestion (i.e. the time it takes stomach contents to begin to empty into the duodenum after the start of the last meal). The appeal also states that the court has indicated wrongly that Professor Ronchi testified that it can take 4 to 5 hours for stomach contents to empty, when his actual testimony on October 19, 2009, stated that it takes 3 to 4 hours. (source, Avv. Giulia Bongiorno and Avv. Luca Maori, Appeal of Raffaele Sollecito)"Dougbremner (talk) 13:25, 17 June 2011 (UTC)
- Is there a link for this so we may take a look?
⋙–Berean–Hunter—► ((⊕)) 20:40, 17 June 2011 (UTC)
- Is there a link for this so we may take a look?
- How about just stating what is in the appeal? How about this: "In the appeal of Raffaele Sollecito, the defense argues that the time of death was between 9:30 and 10:pm. Times were estimated using body weight, temperature, and digestion (i.e. the time it takes stomach contents to begin to empty into the duodenum after the start of the last meal). The appeal also states that the court has indicated wrongly that Professor Ronchi testified that it can take 4 to 5 hours for stomach contents to empty, when his actual testimony on October 19, 2009, stated that it takes 3 to 4 hours. (source, Avv. Giulia Bongiorno and Avv. Luca Maori, Appeal of Raffaele Sollecito)"Dougbremner (talk) 13:25, 17 June 2011 (UTC)
- The source that the topic is discussed in the appeal is the appeal. Am I missing something here? Issymo (talk) 03:44, 16 June 2011 (UTC)
- Sources?
- Not much to add at this point.. Dougbremner doesn't seem to need any help anyway..Just checking in so the usual suspects don't label me a 'meatpuppet' or 'votestacker' and block me again. I do have to ask, are some of you actually arguing that Meredith DIDN'T eat at 6:00-6:30 and/or that accepted facts such as that the stomach empties 3-4 hours after eating are wrong? I'm thinking these sorts of objections fall under the category of desperate obstructionism... Just my take. No disrespect intended. 21:06, 17 June 2011 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tjholme (talk • contribs)
- We're asking to be shown where this is coming from. What reliable source is presenting this? We would like to verify that this is being presented and with some degree of importance. As it was initially presented, it appears to be original research and synthesis but we remain open-minded if someone will identify a source that we may check.
⋙–Berean–Hunter—► ((⊕)) 21:23, 17 June 2011 (UTC)
- We're asking to be shown where this is coming from. What reliable source is presenting this? We would like to verify that this is being presented and with some degree of importance. As it was initially presented, it appears to be original research and synthesis but we remain open-minded if someone will identify a source that we may check.
- It's found in Raffaele Sollecito's appeal. [18] I agree with DougBremner that this could be mentioned it the appeal portion of the article. Issymo (talk) 21:48, 17 June 2011 (UTC)
- This is not a reliable source and neither a secondary source discussing this subject thus doesn't answer Berean Hunter's question.TMCk (talk) 21:56, 17 June 2011 (UTC)
- No, that's true. It's a primary source, just like the Massei and Micheli Reports. What more primary source could there be to answer what the defense is appealing than the appeal itself? Issymo (talk) 00:03, 18 June 2011 (UTC)
- We don't use unbalanced primary sources. Court records when presented prima facie will speak for themselves and we don't try to construe anything with them. We don't however wish to present Mignini's (or any other prosecutor's) material and the same applies for defense documents. Unless there are secondary sources, this subject doesn't merit mention in the article.
⋙–Berean–Hunter—► ((⊕)) 00:38, 18 June 2011 (UTC)
- We don't use unbalanced primary sources. Court records when presented prima facie will speak for themselves and we don't try to construe anything with them. We don't however wish to present Mignini's (or any other prosecutor's) material and the same applies for defense documents. Unless there are secondary sources, this subject doesn't merit mention in the article.
- I do not get your point. The appeal doc is a primary source. There is nothing to construe if it is used to explain what is in the appeal. This subject is a component of the appeal and it definetly merits mentioning. Issymo (talk) 01:04, 18 June 2011 (UTC)
- Then find a good secondary source which presents the information you wish us to carry. That's how we work here. --John (talk) 01:06, 18 June 2011 (UTC)
- BereanHunter and John are right; primary sources should only be used for information which doesn't require any interpretation.LedRush (talk) 13:52, 18 June 2011 (UTC)
- Quoting Wikipedia's description of the use of primary sources: "A primary source may only be used on Wikipedia to make straightforward, descriptive statements that any educated person, with access to the source but without specialist knowledge, will be able to verify are supported by the source" What is there about the defense arguing for a time of death of 9:30-10:00 pm based on medical evidence that is not straightforward? You stated that the first level trial gave a time of death of 9-11 pm, what's the difference? Dougbremner (talk) 22:10, 19 June 2011 (UTC)
- I'm sure the defence are arguing many things. Is there any particular reason we should include this particular thing if it isn't even covered in a reliable secondary source? Nil Einne (talk) 12:15, 20 June 2011 (UTC)
- Because it is medically impossible for the time of death to be much past 10:00 pm, let alone 11:40 pm as found in the first trial (for the sake of brevity I am leaving out why the prosecution needed the time of death to be 11:40 pm). Meredith left her friend in the street at about 8:45 pm, was seen arriving at her home at about 8:52 pm on CCTV, made a call to her mother at 8:56 pm which was inextricably cut off and not re-dialed. We know she was alive up until this point, but the odds of her dying much after 9:00 pm start to drop off dramatically (scroll through my prior entries here to see why). Since there was computer activity at 9:26 pm at the Sollecito apartment, the physical evidence related to the stomach contents alone proves that they were not involved in the murder. Now, to anticipate those who will say that we are not hear to find truth or solve the case, I will say that someone asked why we should include this when the defence are arguing many things, and my answer is that it is one of the most important, along with lack of credibility/changing stories of witnesses, and faulty forensics/DNA conclusions Dougbremner (talk) 15:34, 20 June 2011 (UTC)
Again, do you have a reliable source for your conclusions? Ravensfire (talk) 18:25, 20 June 2011 (UTC)
- Sollecito appeal, accessed as "Apello Sollecito" and downloaded here. Translation is mine. Dougbremner (talk) 04:22, 21 June 2011 (UTC) Correction, translation checked by me. English translation is here. Dougbremner (talk) 14:06, 21 June 2011 (UTC)
- Do you have absolutely ANYTHING from a secondary source showing why this aspect of the appeal is of any notability? I did a google search, and the only thing I found were, predictably, blog posts. That's problem one. Problem two is the "sources". The links you've provided are generally not good enough for links - we don't know if the version uploaded is a true and correct version, nor if it's been translated accurately. This isn't a forum - please read WP:RS and WP:OR. Ravensfire (talk) 14:57, 21 June 2011 (UTC)
- This article quotes the Massei Motivations Report with links to both the original and a translation that have been uploaded onto the internet. What is the difference between that and the Sollecito appeal authored by Buongiorno and Maori and submitted to the court of Perugia? Are you suggesting that this document could be a forgery? If so that would be illegal since these are legal documents. I have already covered use of primary sources in my post above. I have read WP:RS and it does not say that use of primary sources is not allowed, only that secondary sources are preferred, and in this case there are none. As for primary research, there is none. Only a translated quote from the appeal. The Italian speakers here can check that the translation is correct. Dougbremner (talk) 16:21, 21 June 2011 (UTC)
- The appeal argument for time of death is based in part on Professor Introna arguing in court for a time of death of 9:30 pm based on the stomach contents as reported by someone who was present at the trial here and here and here. I will leave you all to argue about the sources. Dougbremner (talk) 16:59, 21 June 2011 (UTC)
- This article quotes the Massei Motivations Report with links to both the original and a translation that have been uploaded onto the internet. What is the difference between that and the Sollecito appeal authored by Buongiorno and Maori and submitted to the court of Perugia? Are you suggesting that this document could be a forgery? If so that would be illegal since these are legal documents. I have already covered use of primary sources in my post above. I have read WP:RS and it does not say that use of primary sources is not allowed, only that secondary sources are preferred, and in this case there are none. As for primary research, there is none. Only a translated quote from the appeal. The Italian speakers here can check that the translation is correct. Dougbremner (talk) 16:21, 21 June 2011 (UTC)
- Do you have absolutely ANYTHING from a secondary source showing why this aspect of the appeal is of any notability? I did a google search, and the only thing I found were, predictably, blog posts. That's problem one. Problem two is the "sources". The links you've provided are generally not good enough for links - we don't know if the version uploaded is a true and correct version, nor if it's been translated accurately. This isn't a forum - please read WP:RS and WP:OR. Ravensfire (talk) 14:57, 21 June 2011 (UTC)
- Nothing to argue as reader blogs are not reliable sources. TMCk (talk) 17:14, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
- What are you suggesting to be illegal? That isn't clear to me.
⋙–Berean–Hunter—► ((⊕)) 18:10, 21 June 2011 (UTC)- Berean, I think I know the answer to that. Dougbremner, I'm not suggesting that you've done anything wrong. I'm quite sure it's accurate. The problem is that with documents uploaded to sharing sites there IS a risk of that happening, making them extremely touchy w/ regards to use as a source. Anytime you rely on something like that you should always cite from the original, then provide a courtesy link in the reference cite (especially if there's a translation involved). Ravensfire (talk) 18:42, 21 June 2011 (UTC)
- Let me see if I understand. Should there be a quote from the original document in Italian with English translation with courtesy link, or a quote in English with courtesy link. Also, the appeal document underlined and bolded a section on computer activity, stating that the trial of the first instance did not consider 9:26 pm opening of a Naruto file on Sollecito's computer on 1 Nov and computer activity early the next morning. Finally, can we have some discussion about this source this source (online news media source Seattlest.com) as an acceptable secondary source related to stomach contents. This is the only one I can find outside of SeattlePI blogs. Dougbremner (talk) 19:40, 21 June 2011 (UTC)
- That is a blog...the publishing company states "Gothamist LLC owns and operates the most popular network of city blogs on the Internet today." when one clicks on their name. Back to the appeal; thank you for providing the translation, that is very helpful. What page is the text we need to see? The doc is 200 pages and I don't see a search function or where you may have indicated it above.
⋙–Berean–Hunter—► ((⊕)) 20:18, 21 June 2011 (UTC)
- That is a blog...the publishing company states "Gothamist LLC owns and operates the most popular network of city blogs on the Internet today." when one clicks on their name. Back to the appeal; thank you for providing the translation, that is very helpful. What page is the text we need to see? The doc is 200 pages and I don't see a search function or where you may have indicated it above.
- Let me see if I understand. Should there be a quote from the original document in Italian with English translation with courtesy link, or a quote in English with courtesy link. Also, the appeal document underlined and bolded a section on computer activity, stating that the trial of the first instance did not consider 9:26 pm opening of a Naruto file on Sollecito's computer on 1 Nov and computer activity early the next morning. Finally, can we have some discussion about this source this source (online news media source Seattlest.com) as an acceptable secondary source related to stomach contents. This is the only one I can find outside of SeattlePI blogs. Dougbremner (talk) 19:40, 21 June 2011 (UTC)
- Berean, I think I know the answer to that. Dougbremner, I'm not suggesting that you've done anything wrong. I'm quite sure it's accurate. The problem is that with documents uploaded to sharing sites there IS a risk of that happening, making them extremely touchy w/ regards to use as a source. Anytime you rely on something like that you should always cite from the original, then provide a courtesy link in the reference cite (especially if there's a translation involved). Ravensfire (talk) 18:42, 21 June 2011 (UTC)
- What are you suggesting to be illegal? That isn't clear to me.
- News blogs where the editor retains full control over the content are acceptable secondary sources. The Seattlest article qualifies. WP:NEWSBLOGS Dougbremner (talk) 15:29, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
- Agree with Doug on the Seattlest. Undecided on whether to include.LedRush (talk) 15:39, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
- So, is there a printed newspaper associated with the blog? That is what qualifies under WP:NEWSBLOG...those are for the online sites of legitimate & recognized media outlets...this one isn't.
⋙–Berean–Hunter—► ((⊕)) 16:29, 22 June 2011 (UTC)- I don't believe (but, as always, could be wrong) that a print newspaper is required. Kotaku is a RS source for video-game related news, though it is a blog with no print, and I don't believe the Huffington Post has a paper (does it?). In this day and age, having a print edition would be an odd requirement...I always thought independent editorial control was the main factor.LedRush (talk) 17:53, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
- I was taking a literal read of our policy. The author is simply given as "Allecia and she is not listed as a member of their staff. Anyone can write for them and they simply sport themselves as a blog..."Seattlest, launched in January 2005, is a local blog that keeps Seattle residents informed of the local happenings of the city. Ranked as one of the most informative blogs on the web in a Carnegie Mellon study, readers come to Seattlest for news and events, as well as information on food and entertainment. "
⋙–Berean–Hunter—► ((⊕)) 18:56, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
- I was taking a literal read of our policy. The author is simply given as "Allecia and she is not listed as a member of their staff. Anyone can write for them and they simply sport themselves as a blog..."Seattlest, launched in January 2005, is a local blog that keeps Seattle residents informed of the local happenings of the city. Ranked as one of the most informative blogs on the web in a Carnegie Mellon study, readers come to Seattlest for news and events, as well as information on food and entertainment. "
- I don't believe (but, as always, could be wrong) that a print newspaper is required. Kotaku is a RS source for video-game related news, though it is a blog with no print, and I don't believe the Huffington Post has a paper (does it?). In this day and age, having a print edition would be an odd requirement...I always thought independent editorial control was the main factor.LedRush (talk) 17:53, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
- So, is there a printed newspaper associated with the blog? That is what qualifies under WP:NEWSBLOG...those are for the online sites of legitimate & recognized media outlets...this one isn't.
- Agree with Doug on the Seattlest. Undecided on whether to include.LedRush (talk) 15:39, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
- News blogs where the editor retains full control over the content are acceptable secondary sources. The Seattlest article qualifies. WP:NEWSBLOGS Dougbremner (talk) 15:29, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
Saying they are looking for contributors does not mean that "anyone can write for them" or that it is not under editorial control. Dougbremner (talk) 19:19, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
- There are lots of pseudo news sites that we don't consider RS. But rather than belabor the argument over this one, it shouldn't be too difficult if this is a mainstream issue to find another source otherwise that is undue weight.
⋙–Berean–Hunter—► ((⊕)) 19:30, 22 June 2011 (UTC) - (edit conflict)I'm not saying this is the greatest source out there, but this is a self-professed news-blog, and they have what appears to be a significant editorial staff. That this writer seems to be a contributor/free-lancer instead of a staff member shouldn't matter if there is still editorial control over the content.LedRush (talk) 19:33, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
- Seattle has lost most of its print newspapers as most people there get their news online. There is only one print paper left, the Seattle Times (the PI lost its print version). To insist that online news sources also have a print version would mean that there are no reliable sources from Seattle, which is patently ridiculous. If all Wikipedia entries required reporting by the BBC you would have to eliminate 99% of articles. Seattlest is a reliable and frequently used source of local news with a substantial editorial staff. Dougbremner (talk) 19:46, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
- OK, here is the long version: "The time of death could in this way be placed, on the basis of medical-legal criteria of the highest trustworthiness (given the unambigious and converging opinions of the various consulting experts and reports) at a distance of 2-3/3-4 hours from the beginning of the start of the last noted meal (6:30-7:00 pm on Nov 1, 2007) and then around 9:30-10:00 pm. Ascribing the time of death to 9:30-10:00 pm on Nov 1, 2007 is confirmed by the following factors: -in that the quantity (500 cc and about half kilo of gastric contents) and quality (pizza with mozzarella and vegetables, if not any apple pie) the food eaten during the last meal of Nov. 1 2007 corresponds to the gastric contents of the body. - the absence from the stomach of any food different from that described by Meredith’s friends as being consumed during the meal of Nov 1 2007. -in that the empty duodenum (being deliberately closed by means of a ligature as seen in the filmed autopsy) is indicative of the lack of initiation of emptying of the stomach." p 168 Appeal of Raffaele Sollecito Appello (Appeal) - Raffaele Sollecito), Giuliano Bongiorno and Luca Maori, translation by Doug Bremner, Accessed 21 June 2011 at http://www.docstoc.com/docs/45300712/Apello--Sollecito. Dougbremner (talk) 22:04, 21 June 2011 (UTC)
- We shouldn't include it. It is an unproven, unverified assertion that serves to advance the defense's theory without any reliable secondary sources. It also wouldn't improve the article.
⋙–Berean–Hunter—► ((⊕)) 00:42, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
- We shouldn't include it. It is an unproven, unverified assertion that serves to advance the defense's theory without any reliable secondary sources. It also wouldn't improve the article.
- Unproven? I have already refuted the statement that primary sources are not allowed. Unverified assertion? The appeal document summarizes the findings of ALL of the experts who gave testimony. What they said about time of death is fact, not "unverified assertions". Will not improve the article? Can you honestly say that what the defense will argue in the appeal does not improve the article when we have an appeal that is in process? That the basis of that appeal is not of interest? Does anyone else agree with Berean Hunter or is this a single opinion? In any case there is a secondary source, see my comment above. Dougbremner (talk) 15:01, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
No, I don't believe that you have a valid secondary source (see my comment above). Yes, I can honestly say that there will be some of the points argued in the appeal that do not improve the article...this is an article meant to be a summary. We don't need to carry each & every point made in the appeal. If it is truly significant, it will show up in several reliable sources and we won't have to debate a single source.
⋙–Berean–Hunter—► ((⊕)) 16:29, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
- Stating something in Wikipedia's voice based soley on the defense appeal? Sheesh, that's pushing a whee bit of a POV there ... EDIT: It's also way too much weight on something like that. Still object entirely to the addition until we get some solid secondary source that demonstrates the notability of the information. And if that happens, summarize it, not cram every possible detail as in the proposal above. Ravensfire (talk) 18:25, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
- You asked me for a translation (see above). The style of writing is long winded so I posted the whole thing here. I never proposed putting all of that in there, that's why I said "here is the long version". There is a section on the appeals, there is a secondary source here, I am not including everything in the appeal, only what I consider to be the most important. Dougbremner (talk) 18:59, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
- But it is the sources that need to consider it important; proven by more prevalent coverage. When BBC or CBS or the Washington Post or other mainstream media begin to give weight to the issue then we can revisit. Until then, it is not an issue. Please see WP:UNDUE.
⋙–Berean–Hunter—► ((⊕)) 19:07, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
- But it is the sources that need to consider it important; proven by more prevalent coverage. When BBC or CBS or the Washington Post or other mainstream media begin to give weight to the issue then we can revisit. Until then, it is not an issue. Please see WP:UNDUE.
- So only things that are reported on by the BBC can make it into Wikipedia? You point me to WP:UNDUE - so what is involved in the appeal (or I should the most important points of the appeal) is of interest only to a minority of people and should be given the same weight as the view of people who see the world as flat? Dougbremner (talk) 19:29, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
To summarize all of the above, I am proposing the addition to the appeal of a statement to the effect that the defense appeal of Sollecito argues for a revised time of death of before 10:00 pm, based on the primary document of the appeal, and the news source of Seattlest.com. I further am arguing that Seattlest is a RS based on WP criteria that online news sources are allowable if there is editorial control over their content. Seattlest has substantial substantial editorial staff. I further argue that since all of the news sources in Seattle have gone online except for one (e.g. the PI lost its print version as well as several magazines) it is incorrect and outdated to insist that all news sources must be print media. Against the argument that stating what is in the appeal gives undue weight to a topic that is not of general interest, the stomach contents are one of the most important parts of the six or so items in the appeal (which I can list if needed). Dougbremner (talk) 22:34, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
- All what the seatlest article does anyway is quoting Dempsey's entry from a blog that is not reliable. TMCk (talk) 22:58, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
- It is quoting Dempsey as a primary witness to the court hearing. You are saying that she is quoting an entry from a blog that is "not reliable". First of all, you have no evidence that it is not reliable, and second of all, you are stating that there is a different standard for something that is quoted as written in a blog versus quoted in person. You are stating that if someone writes something on their blog that it is somehow different than if I pick up a phone and call you and ask you about it. Can you provide anything to sustain this assertion? Dougbremner (talk) 01:59, 23 June 2011 (UTC)
Book for bibliography
For about a month, ABC has been promoting this book which, to the best of my knowledge, exists only in digital form. Are there any rules about including this type of material in the bibliography? http://abcnews.go.com/International/amanda-knox-story-ebook-abc-news-exclusive-video/story?id=13857997 — Preceding unsigned comment added by LedRush (talk • contribs)
- Do you have this book? If ABC put it out themselves then SPS may apply.
⋙–Berean–Hunter—► ((⊕)) 11:48, 19 June 2011 (UTC)
- The following guideline does apply in regards to notability: Wikipedia:Notability (books)#Self-publication. TMCk (talk) 13:20, 19 June 2011 (UTC)
- If ABC presents information on a news show Wikipedia accepts it as a reliable source, if they present it as a video book it is considered self published? I think it's a stretch to put an ABC news presentation into a self published category. BruceFisher (talk) 19:02, 19 June 2011 (UTC)
- Unless I'm reading this advert wrongly this book contains a kind of compilation of ABC's news coverage, which is surely fine to use as sourcing. Like Bruce nearly says, all ABC's output is published by ABC, isn't it? pablo 19:17, 19 June 2011 (UTC)
- Concur with Pablo; it seems fine to pop into the bibliography --Errant (chat!) 10:32, 20 June 2011 (UTC)
- Definitely, but I'd go further (without, admittedly, having seen it - has anyone here?) and say if it is as advertised then it can be used as a source for ABC's reports at the time. E-books are a relatively new medium which need some serious thought wikipedia-policy-wise. pablo 19:16, 20 June 2011 (UTC)
- I've added it, I note a couple of others that have an ASIN rather than a ISBN, which needs looking at. If they're amazon-only that's fine but if not it's just advertising. pablo 19:32, 20 June 2011 (UTC)
- Definitely, but I'd go further (without, admittedly, having seen it - has anyone here?) and say if it is as advertised then it can be used as a source for ABC's reports at the time. E-books are a relatively new medium which need some serious thought wikipedia-policy-wise. pablo 19:16, 20 June 2011 (UTC)
- Concur with Pablo; it seems fine to pop into the bibliography --Errant (chat!) 10:32, 20 June 2011 (UTC)
Benefit for Knox
This article has some interesting information that could be incorporated into the article [19]
- Knox's family is over a million dollars in debt
- Trump has made donations to Knox's defense fund and has contacted Knox's parents directly
- Knox's family does not support the boycott of Italian products that Trump called for
The way the "support" section is currently structured, some of this info may be hard to incorporate, but I do believe at least some of this is worthwhile. Any thoughts?LedRush (talk) 20:13, 21 June 2011 (UTC)
- First one I think is a useful bit. Second one, not as sure about - it's getting more into name-dropping to highlight specific donors. Last one, probably not unless there's something that can show Trump's "boycott" has had any impact. Him saying something does not make it notable. I think adding something to the end of the initial para on the support section would work. "The investigation, trial and appeal have been extremely expensive, with the Knox family incurring significant debt to date. Funds have been established to help with these costs." Obviously there's a fund for Knox, does anyone know about something for Sollecito? Ravensfire (talk) 20:54, 21 June 2011 (UTC)
- Added. Ravensfire (talk) 14:16, 23 June 2011 (UTC)
New Testimony; Theories of the Crime Section?
A couple hundred new news articles were written about the trial in the past day or so, concentrating on 5 new defense witnesses. http://edition.cnn.com/2011/WORLD/europe/06/18/italy.knox/ and http://www.cbsnews.com/stories/2011/06/18/earlyshow/saturday/main20072239.shtml are two examples.
Earlier, Errant had suggested a section of the article dedicated to prosecution theories of the crime. That could be mixed in with alternative theories of the crime, with some of this info mixed in. Alternatively, we could merely update the appeals section to reflect this info.
Any thoughts?LedRush (talk) 21:06, 18 June 2011 (UTC)
- This ref seems to contain a little more detail. If we give it another day or two, we may get better details. Of the multiple theories, the one that may be worth mentioning concerns the witnesses' testimonies surrounding Guede.
⋙–Berean–Hunter—► ((⊕)) 11:43, 19 June 2011 (UTC)
- I think it's a section with potential. There's some elements of such a section scattered in various spots, putting it all into one place is both good from an article perspective and provides useful information about a notable aspect of the case. These theories began before the trial and have been changing since then. Some care will need to be exercised to keep it focused on the more notable versions though. Ravensfire (talk) 03:54, 20 June 2011 (UTC)
Guede's Testimony
A few hundred more articles are up regarding Guede's testimoney. This seems like an ok one [20]LedRush (talk) 13:52, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
- I've added the bit on Alessi and Guede testifying.
⋙–Berean–Hunter—► 14:58, 30 June 2011 (UTC)
- The basis for backing up Alessi is this, I believe: "Castelluccio was also held at the Viterbo prison. He said he heard the story about Knox and Sollecito's innocent mostly from Alessi. However, he said on one occasion when he was in his cell, he heard Guede say from a separate cell that Knox and Sollecito were innocent."1
⋙–Berean–Hunter—► 15:44, 30 June 2011 (UTC)
- The basis for backing up Alessi is this, I believe: "Castelluccio was also held at the Viterbo prison. He said he heard the story about Knox and Sollecito's innocent mostly from Alessi. However, he said on one occasion when he was in his cell, he heard Guede say from a separate cell that Knox and Sollecito were innocent."1
- All that he and others are backing up is that Knox and Solecito had nothing to do with the crime, not the detailed account Alessi gave.TMCk (talk) 16:05, 30 June 2011 (UTC)
- The MSNBC article that Berean Hunter quotes seems to say much more than that. They say that the other witness testified that he had already heard the story of innocence, mostly from Alessi (therefore backing up the claim) and that he heard independently from Guede that they were innocent (also supporting the story).
- This, to me, clearly supports Alessi's testimony (or backs it up, if you prefer). It also does more...it adds a new aspect, i.e., that they also heard Guede say K&S were innocent independent of Alessi. TMCk, is there language which you would like to propose to incorporate this information?
- I proposed the language I did because it is directly supported by the cites and is very short. However, we could say something that even more closely matches the language of the article (but hopefully doesn't run afoul of COPYVIO), like "The defense also called other witnesses to support Alessi's testimony. One such witness testified that he had heard stories of Knox and Sollecito's innocence while he was in jail and he heard Guede say that Knox and Sollecitor were innocent." LedRush (talk) 16:54, 30 June 2011 (UTC)
- All that he and others are backing up is that Knox and Solecito had nothing to do with the crime, not the detailed account Alessi gave.TMCk (talk) 16:05, 30 June 2011 (UTC)
So, should I just re-add my last edit, or is there a constructive comment to it?LedRush (talk) 01:04, 1 July 2011 (UTC)
- No. You can put in something like what you're proposing here.TMCk (talk) 01:50, 1 July 2011 (UTC)
DNA evidence review by court appointed experts.
The review found that the DNA profiles on the knife blade and on the bra clasp are not reliable. There is an article in the Daily Mail today that could be used as a source if needed, but I would prefer to find one with a better reputation to update the article. Footwarrior (talk) 15:06, 29 June 2011 (UTC)
- [21] This article has people from Knox's camp saying the forensics people said it wasn't reliable, but it only quotes the report as saying the DNA couldn't be retested and may have been contaminated. This is "breaking news", so I expect we'll get better information as we wait.LedRush (talk) 15:17, 29 June 2011 (UTC)
- The report does call the DNA evidence unreliable. [22] [23] [24] LedRush (talk) 15:25, 29 June 2011 (UTC)
- "The international procedures for inspection, protocol and collection of evidence were not followed." [25] [26] [27]LedRush (talk) 15:25, 29 June 2011 (UTC)
- I ran across a translation of the report conclusions. The issues with these two pieces of evidence go far beyond a mere possibility of contamination. Unfortunately, Wikipedia rules leave us hoping that some newspaper reporter reads the report and understands the science enough to write a proper article. Maybe we will get lucky this time. Footwarrior (talk) 16:00, 29 June 2011 (UTC)
- The report comes out tomorrow; can I suggest waiting till it is picked up properly by some really good media. I noticed the AFP (google hosted content) article which is probably the best so far & would be enough for inclusion IMO. But I feel this is fairly major point in the appeals process so it would be good to do it careful justice :) --Errant (chat!) 16:05, 29 June 2011 (UTC)
- We also have Fox News for the specific comments, but it does make sense for the actual report to be released widely and then see how the media treat it.LedRush (talk) 16:17, 29 June 2011 (UTC)
- From from front page Corriere della Sera- Specifically the Kercher DNA on the knife blade was low copy number and none of the appropriate cautions were taken and therefore they cannot conclude that the Kercher DNA was present on the knife. There was the possibility of contamination of the bra clasp. What is not said in the article was that there were no skin cells on the bra clasp and there was an error in the analysis of the Y chromosome (i.e. there was nothing there in the first place). It doesn't really matter though bottom line is that they concluded no evidence for DNA of Kercher on knife or Sollecito on bra clasp, and that is being reported in all the major news outlets. Dougbremner (talk) 16:21, 29 June 2011 (UTC)
- PERUGIA, Italy (Reuters) - An independent forensic report Wednesday discredited police evidence used to help convict American student Amanda Knox of the murder of her English housemate, in a major victory for her defense.[28] BruceFisher (talk) 16:37, 29 June 2011 (UTC)
- The most complete report so far, confirming everything above. [29]. And the NYTimes [30]LedRush (talk) 18:11, 29 June 2011 (UTC)
- This source [31] quotes that the experts said there were "erroneous interpretations" of the electropherograms related to identification of the Y chromosome and autosomal STRs. Are foreign language sources acceptable if there is no English source? Dougbremner (talk) 21:45, 29 June 2011 (UTC)
- Yes, but there are English translations. This report [32] says the same thing. The more of this report I read, the more I read it as "scathing", as the sources describe it.LedRush (talk) 21:51, 29 June 2011 (UTC)
- This article appeared in the Guardian yesterday [33] Totorotroll (talk) 07:38, 30 June 2011 (UTC)
- Yes, but there are English translations. This report [32] says the same thing. The more of this report I read, the more I read it as "scathing", as the sources describe it.LedRush (talk) 21:51, 29 June 2011 (UTC)
- This source [31] quotes that the experts said there were "erroneous interpretations" of the electropherograms related to identification of the Y chromosome and autosomal STRs. Are foreign language sources acceptable if there is no English source? Dougbremner (talk) 21:45, 29 June 2011 (UTC)
- From from front page Corriere della Sera- Specifically the Kercher DNA on the knife blade was low copy number and none of the appropriate cautions were taken and therefore they cannot conclude that the Kercher DNA was present on the knife. There was the possibility of contamination of the bra clasp. What is not said in the article was that there were no skin cells on the bra clasp and there was an error in the analysis of the Y chromosome (i.e. there was nothing there in the first place). It doesn't really matter though bottom line is that they concluded no evidence for DNA of Kercher on knife or Sollecito on bra clasp, and that is being reported in all the major news outlets. Dougbremner (talk) 16:21, 29 June 2011 (UTC)
- We also have Fox News for the specific comments, but it does make sense for the actual report to be released widely and then see how the media treat it.LedRush (talk) 16:17, 29 June 2011 (UTC)
- The report comes out tomorrow; can I suggest waiting till it is picked up properly by some really good media. I noticed the AFP (google hosted content) article which is probably the best so far & would be enough for inclusion IMO. But I feel this is fairly major point in the appeals process so it would be good to do it careful justice :) --Errant (chat!) 16:05, 29 June 2011 (UTC)
- I ran across a translation of the report conclusions. The issues with these two pieces of evidence go far beyond a mere possibility of contamination. Unfortunately, Wikipedia rules leave us hoping that some newspaper reporter reads the report and understands the science enough to write a proper article. Maybe we will get lucky this time. Footwarrior (talk) 16:00, 29 June 2011 (UTC)
What is the best way to integrate this information? I would think that, as currently written, we would need to explain this thoroughly in the appeals section, and also make mention of this (and delete other language) in the current forensics section.LedRush (talk) 14:52, 30 June 2011 (UTC)
- The report is made public today but the actual review of the report doesn't occur until July 25. I would suggest just adding what the report states in a small paragraph but I wouldn't start making major amendments to the forensics section just yet.
⋙–Berean–Hunter—► 15:06, 30 June 2011 (UTC)- Yes. As I mention below, I believe this issue, while open, ties into some much larger questions.LedRush (talk) 15:13, 30 June 2011 (UTC)
The most in depth article I've seen about the murder and Knox
Is here [34]
It has much basis for a Knox article, as well as for supporting other information in the article. More comments to come.LedRush (talk) 17:17, 29 June 2011 (UTC)
Reorganization of article
I know that several of the editors here have kicked around the idea of reorganizing the article, but it is a large task and there are worries from different editors about adding POV during the process. However, the new report on the unreliability of the DNA evidence and the criticism of the police/forensics personnel now put a finer point on the question of reorganization. Perhaps the question is premature as the report can still be objected to, but here it goes...
Is the current structure of the trial/evidence the best one? If not, what is the preferable way?
Currently, it seems to me that we have a semi-chronological order, with later information inserted when the early information is hotly contested or provably wrong. The advantage of this approach is that it tries to deal with allowing the reader to understand the process as it unfolded, but not cause BLP issues or misunderstandings by people who read only about the trial, for example.
Another method would be to go in pure chronological order. This might be easiest to follow, but it can be highly misleading, especially considering the many changes in witness testimony, prosecution theory, and forensic reliability.
Yet another method would be to explain each "set" of evidence completely, section by section. (e.g., witnesses section, forensics section, etc). This has the advantage of not being misleading, but it could be hard to follow. Also, the related "trial" sections would be loose overviews...little more than the statements of when they happened and what the conclusions of the court were (sentences, etc.).
While I tend to favor either the last or first (current) approach, it is a highly complicated question and am open to ideas and thoughts, hence this topic.LedRush (talk) 14:51, 30 June 2011 (UTC)
- I'm not a big fan of the chronological order approach for Wikipedia articles. This is supposed to be a summary of the topic, not the full details. Going chronologically makes it far too easy to keep adding in every detail and much harder to tie related things together. It's one of the reasons I keep harping on notability - why is point XYZ notable.
- I think I've said in the past that a reorg would help. Started one, then the page went to hell and I deleted my notes. My preferred approach would be your last idea. I'd put the G's trial and appeal, then K & S trial and appeal sections, then the controversies though. The K&S appeal section is where a great deal of the "meat" of this article starts. So summarize the trial, highlighting any significant issues raised in the trial. Possible idea is to include a list of the major evidence used in the trial, but I'm leery about that turning into what we've got now. Then the appeal, summarizing the timeframe of the appeal and a summary of the various controversies raised by each side. The existence of those would also be touched in the lede (1 sentence) but get more detail here (3-4, maybe more depending on things). Next section is controversies. Possible sections here include Mignini's changing theories, forensic procedures and evidence, with sub-sections under evidence for highly controversial pieces of evidence that have a material impact. The initial sections of the article
- I think the hardest part will be to keep a good focus on being a summary. I'm not always the best at that, but too much detail can really bog down articles. We link to sources for more specific details about things, highlight important points to cover the story. There have been vast improvements on that here, I'm just worried some of the old fights will come back. I like the re-org idea, and think it can result in a much more readable and informative article. Ravensfire (talk) 17:42, 30 June 2011 (UTC)
- One re-org proposal that seemed to have support was to re-jig the trials section to have abrief chronological overview of both trials - plus the information about the appeals process and innocent till proven guilty etc. And then follow that with more detailed stuff on the trial proceedings. Really the evidence needs to go in this section as well - and then above that we can do a simple chrnology of the murder, arrests and investigation pre-trial. --Errant (chat!) 18:33, 30 June 2011 (UTC)
An NPOV issue
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Determining consensus concerning NPOV tagFrom what I have seen, it seems to be a general goal of the innocence advocates to keep the tag up as a would-be warning to anyone reading the article. This seems to be a tactical maneuver and a misuse of the template. As there are differing claims concerning the consensus, it would be good to get clarification concerning the tag usage.
This is getting silly... the point of discussing the tag removal was to determine if it was being used to warn readers about the content, or whether it was intended to draw editor attention to a specific' neutrality issue for it to be resolved. The NPOV tag is intended to be carefully employed so that any one faction cannot use it to grump about content discussions they lost out in. The intention of the tag is to use it as follows: someone spots a neutrality issue, they tag the page, they post about it on the talk page, the issue is resolved and the tag removed. When I asked RockSound to note his specific neutrality issue (the step he missed) it seemed to be the case that "the page is trying to make K&S look guilty" was the overriding argument. We've been over that one ad-nauseum and I don't think that it is a very specific argument. The intention of the tag is to let editors know there is a matter requiring their urgent attention on the talk page; given that the talk page is highly active anyway the tag seems redundant. It is specifically not to note that neutrality issues exist in the article (yes, an important distinction). If the tag exists long term you have to ask "why is the specific issue not resolved". To be specific; a general claim of lack of neutrality is not worth adding the tag for. If a specific issue is raised each and every time the tag should be added and removed. I am concerned that the majority of those wanting to keep the tag wish to do so as a "warning" to readers, I for one am disinclined to let them circumvent the editing process and abuse Wikipedia to further their campaign. This persistent war of attrition to try and make the article exonerate Knox is disgusting, and having to fight against it and maintain the integrity of the encyclopaedia is one of the main reasons that the article is in a poor shape and contains inaccurate material. Some editors legitimately seem to think the tag is useful; to them I say - has adding/removing the tag had any effect on the number of new editors participating here on the talk page? For my own view; I see no legitimate argument that supports the idea that having the neutrality tag on the page is helpful in bringing more editors into discussion of specific neutrality issues. So we can safely remove it. But this amount of argument over it? Why not put that attention into working on content. --Errant (chat!) 13:21, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
"When to remove This template is not meant to be a permanent resident on any article. Remove this template whenever: No discussion about neutrality issues was started on this article's talk page. Discussions about neutrality issues have stopped (for more than a few days). The problems in the article have been resolved. All editors involved in the article agree to remove it."
This long conversation and split vote has shown that there was NEVER concensus to remove the NPOV tag. Someone jumped the gun in removing it within a day. It should never have been taken down without concensus and those who took it down should admit that there was not a clear consensus to remove the tag and put it back up. Issymo (talk) 00:49, 16 June 2011 (UTC)
Keep For what to me are obvious reasons. I second the motion to get new editors to come in. Dougbremner (talk) 15:56, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
Further discussionSo do we do another re-vote? Or is the plan to not discuss this further and let it archive and win by archive? There CLEARLY was NEVER concensus that the tag should have been removed. It should be put back up.
Tarc is right - this is getting ridiculous, and is the same as the Knox article thread below. A number of accounts want a separate Knox article but they can't actually come up with a list of information that should be in such article that isn't in this one; the same accounts want an NPOV tag slapped on the article but can't actually identify the specific parts of the article that are POV, or why. It's like me going to my local car dealer and saying "I'd like you to give me a brand new car". When the car dealer says "Why?", my reply being "I dunno. I'd just like one". Would I get the car? Of course I wouldn't. Black Kite (t) (c) 19:36, 21 June 2011 (UTC)
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POV Issues
Already brought up POV issues/discussions
- http://en.wiki.x.io/wiki/Talk:Murder_of_Meredith_Kercher/Archive_27#NPOV_tag
- http://en.wiki.x.io/wiki/Talk:Murder_of_Meredith_Kercher/Archive_32#Mounting_challenge_to_the_neutrality_of_this_article
Current POV issues (these are just arguments I've remembered-please add as you like)
- Improper labeling of Knox and Sollecito's legal status as appeal progresses
- Inadequate and improper explaination of appeals process
- Lack of information on Mignini
- Lack of information on prosecution theories
- "Support" section doesn't accurately weight the importance of the supporters
- Information from Moore and Heaney routinely deleted
- Criticism of police (lack of lawyer for Knox in interrogation, lack of recording of interviews, lack of interpreter for Knox in interrogation, poor evidence collection)
- Inclusion of the shoe evidence
- No defense argument for prosecution's staged break-in theory
- Guede's assertions of the crime over time
Anyway, that's the best I can do off the top of my head. For my proposed Knox article format, please see the hatted discussion below.
I would invite others to add to the list as they see fit.LedRush (talk) 20:50, 21 June 2011 (UTC)
Discussion on points
Berean's initial comments in red...anyone feel free to comment under any point...
- Improper labeling of Knox and Sollecito's legal status as appeal progresses
- Are there reliable sources which state this? I believe this is what we were waiting on. If there are and we don't state it then it might be an NPOV issue but if not it isn't.
- I'm not sure about the sources (for some reason, I think we got some good primary, but not secondary), but there would still be ways to address our language in the article to make it more precise.LedRush (talk) 15:12, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
- Whoops, there are three sources below on this page.LedRush (talk) 15:38, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
- Yep, you're right. I think we should work this into the K&S appeals section. If that occurs, does a full explanation of the point below still need to expounded upon?
⋙–Berean–Hunter—► ((⊕)) 16:58, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
- Yep, you're right. I think we should work this into the K&S appeals section. If that occurs, does a full explanation of the point below still need to expounded upon?
- Inadequate and improper explaination of appeals process
- Same question as above...sources? I believe Salvio's excellent explanation but we need sources (English). Also, the appeals process isn't usually an NPOV issue in any crime article is it? It may good to include but isn't a basis for NPOV argument.
- I guess the POV issue would be tied with the above comment.LedRush (talk) 15:12, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
- If this is still the correct format to discuss these issues, should we move Errant's suggested language here? I think the beginning could address questions 1 and 2.LedRush (talk) 22:46, 1 July 2011 (UTC)
- Yeh sorry I got tied up answering OTRS tickets tonight - am going to try and chuck that content in boldly now and see how it goes - bear with. --Errant (chat!) 22:51, 1 July 2011 (UTC)
- If this is still the correct format to discuss these issues, should we move Errant's suggested language here? I think the beginning could address questions 1 and 2.LedRush (talk) 22:46, 1 July 2011 (UTC)
- Lack of information on Mignini
- I guess the POV issue would be tied with the above comment.LedRush (talk) 15:12, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
- I'll assume that you mean crticisms of Mignini's conduct/actions in this case. The problem is that it is all assertions and the authorities have never ruled/commented on this...it is just accusations at this point which may be BLP vios against him
- We have many RSs which have commented on this in detail.LedRush (talk) 15:12, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
- Could you or someone else state suggested wordings (preferably at the bottom of this page)?
⋙–Berean–Hunter—► ((⊕)) 16:58, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
- Could you or someone else state suggested wordings (preferably at the bottom of this page)?
- We have many RSs which have commented on this in detail.LedRush (talk) 15:12, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
- Lack of information on prosecution theories
- This might be good to elaborate on (needs further explanation) but I don't see how it is an NPOV issue. We don't want to get into the situation of tit-for-tat having every counter point from the defense introduced for every prosecution theory, right?
- Presenting only the sane prosecution theories seems a clear POV issue to me...it's filtering to make the prosecution look better.LedRush (talk) 15:12, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
- If the court dealt with it dismissively and it bore no outcome upon the case, I don't see where it has relevance. Mignini brought it up and they shrugged it off...not much to tell.
⋙–Berean–Hunter—► ((⊕)) 16:58, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
- If the court dealt with it dismissively and it bore no outcome upon the case, I don't see where it has relevance. Mignini brought it up and they shrugged it off...not much to tell.
- Presenting only the sane prosecution theories seems a clear POV issue to me...it's filtering to make the prosecution look better.LedRush (talk) 15:12, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
- "Support" section doesn't accurately weight the importance of the supporters
- That isn't an NPOV issue at all. Explanation needed.
- I think this was Jimbo's comment. I think he was saying that we needed to really explain how deep Knox's support was, but I'm not sure.LedRush (talk) 15:12, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
- Information from Moore and Heaney routinely deleted
- How is that NPOV issue? In fact, adding it may create one as it is pro-innocence conjecture.
- Deleting opinions of people commonly quoted in RSs seems like a clear issue to me.LedRush (talk) 15:12, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
- Well, no. Opinions in RSs are dismissed all the time. Do you think that every single published RS with a criticism on George Bush the younger is obligatory in his article?
⋙–Berean–Hunter—► ((⊕)) 16:58, 22 June 2011 (UTC)- The issue is that what they were saying was seen as important, but was dismissed because they weren't "notable" enough.LedRush (talk) 17:39, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
- Well, no. Opinions in RSs are dismissed all the time. Do you think that every single published RS with a criticism on George Bush the younger is obligatory in his article?
- Deleting opinions of people commonly quoted in RSs seems like a clear issue to me.LedRush (talk) 15:12, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
- Criticism of police (lack of lawyer for Knox in interrogation, lack of recording of interviews, lack of interpreter for Knox in interrogation, poor evidence collection)
- Poor evidence collection is an issue for the court to decide (and they may) but not for theorists. This has yet to be established as fact by an authority. Lack of lawyer - is that an issue under Italian law? Lack of recordings (they were made, right?), I agree this should be mentioned and can be found in sources. Lack of interpreter - maybe.
- Poor evidence collection has been noted in RSs. And none of the information we include in here should be for a court to decide (what an odd comment). Under international law, I believe Knox was required to have a lawyer, but I'm not sure under Italian law. I know that this is a common criticism of the police, though. Recordings of Knox's interview were either made then destroyed or not made at all, the subject of criticism in RSs. Ditto the interpreter.LedRush (talk) 15:12, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
- Whether or not there was poor evidence collection has been put forth by theorists. It is, at current, fringe theory and not validated as fact. I agree that the bit on recordings should be mentioned but not convinced that this can't be worked in somewhere without having a full section police criticisms.
⋙–Berean–Hunter—► ((⊕)) 16:58, 22 June 2011 (UTC)- Can you please support your assertion that the poor evidence collection is a fringe theory. Of course we do not need information validated as fact to be included here, as there is much opinion and conjecture already in the article. But when RSs reference opinions on poor evidence collection (something that will always be an opinion and not a fact), I believe it is POV to omit.LedRush (talk) 17:39, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
- Now, not only do American scientists, forensic experts, retired FBI agents, judges and lawyers say that the evidence collection was poor, the court-appointed forensic experts do as well. I think it's fair to say it's not a fringe theory. This is just another example of criticism of the conduct of the prosecution/police. These instances are well covered in RSs, and should be incorporated into the text of the article.LedRush (talk) 04:58, 2 July 2011 (UTC)
- Article 141 of the Italian CPP (code of criminal procedures) states that statements made be suspects that are not recorded cannot be used in a court of law. Article 111 of CPP states that suspects have the right to a lawyer present when questioned. Mignini in an interview with CNN states that a recording of Knox was not performed because of 'budget problems'. For these reasons the Supreme Court ruled that Knox's statements could not be included in a court of law. Dougbremner (talk) 14:45, 24 June 2011 (UTC)
- Can you please support your assertion that the poor evidence collection is a fringe theory. Of course we do not need information validated as fact to be included here, as there is much opinion and conjecture already in the article. But when RSs reference opinions on poor evidence collection (something that will always be an opinion and not a fact), I believe it is POV to omit.LedRush (talk) 17:39, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
- Whether or not there was poor evidence collection has been put forth by theorists. It is, at current, fringe theory and not validated as fact. I agree that the bit on recordings should be mentioned but not convinced that this can't be worked in somewhere without having a full section police criticisms.
- Poor evidence collection has been noted in RSs. And none of the information we include in here should be for a court to decide (what an odd comment). Under international law, I believe Knox was required to have a lawyer, but I'm not sure under Italian law. I know that this is a common criticism of the police, though. Recordings of Knox's interview were either made then destroyed or not made at all, the subject of criticism in RSs. Ditto the interpreter.LedRush (talk) 15:12, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
- Inclusion of the shoe evidence
- I believe this was disputed and opens a can of worms as opposing sides need to be presented...do we want to get that detailed? That said, the Nike Outbreak 2 shoes are probably worth mentioning. I don't see this as NPOV, though.
- I think the point was that editors wanted to delete the mention of the shoe-print as it wasn't used in K&S's trial.LedRush (talk) 17:39, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
- But it was presented as evidence in the K&S trial. ref.
⋙–Berean–Hunter—► 17:46, 4 July 2011 (UTC)
- But it was presented as evidence in the K&S trial. ref.
- I think the point was that editors wanted to delete the mention of the shoe-print as it wasn't used in K&S's trial.LedRush (talk) 17:39, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
- No defense argument for prosecution's staged break-in theory
- Maybe it would be better to pull out that theory. Above on another point, there is a call to expand the prosecutions theories...are we going to need to have a counter-argument for every one of them? We are trying to avoid a blow-by-blow account, right?
⋙–Berean–Hunter—► ((⊕)) 00:30, 22 June 2011 (UTC)- Again, I don't like the idea of filtering the theories. I'd rather explain themLedRush (talk) 15:12, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
- The conviction on the first level was completely based on the staged break in theory. Dougbremner (talk) 14:45, 24 June 2011 (UTC)
- Again, I don't like the idea of filtering the theories. I'd rather explain themLedRush (talk) 15:12, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
So, does the silence mean that the POV tag goes back, as there are clearly many specific open points? Or does it mean that everything I've identified can be changed to NPOV? Does it mean everyone is on summer vacation or doing something more meaningful with their lives? Or are people trying to ignore the situation in the hopes that it (or me) goes away?LedRush (talk) 14:06, 29 June 2011 (UTC)
- I've reached the point where I don't really care on way or another what tag people want to put on the article. Too much time has been spend moaning about it either being included or removed to very little gain (yep, me included). My final stance on the matter is this; I have an underlying concern that the tag is being replaced (at least by some, not all) to notify readers rather than to attract more comment on the talk page, and that placing the tag will not have the desired effect of bringing more editor contribution to the issues raised above. This sits as a bad taste in my mouth as an abuse of the tagging process.
- One final point; I suggest that anyone replacing the tag makes a substantial effort to propose solutions to the problems listed above to show that they are making the effort to resolve them. The reason for this is that if the discussion of these problems becomes dormant after the tag is placed then, per the tag requirements, it must be removed. I am working lightly on the first two issues but am a bit tied up at the moment to address them fully. The rest... someone else will have to deal with ASAP. --Errant (chat!) 14:36, 29 June 2011 (UTC)
- I've been reverted. Now's the time to discuss. So, what criteria for the tag hasn't been met?LedRush (talk) 18:17, 30 June 2011 (UTC)
- So, what criteria for the tag hasn't been met?; the only criteria for the tag is that someone raises an POV issue here on talk. You appear to be doing so. So fine; but now you have done so you must discuss the specific issues and resolve them via consensus within a short time. Once discussion goes stale, consensus agrees or the issues are resolved the tag is removed. --Errant (chat!) 18:29, 30 June 2011 (UTC)
- I don't understand your "huh?" or your response. I added the tag after pointing out the POV issues and announcing that I planned to add the tag. The only response to that announcement was your, which seemed indifferent. I took that to mean I could add the tag. I got reverted. I brought up many specific issues. After some discussion, everyone went away. So, can I just change the article based on my points, or will I be mass reverted (hint, I'll be mass reverted)? So, I've brought up the issues here with the hopes of resolving them here. I've added the tag per this discussion and to prompt more discussion, preferably with some new editors as well as old ones. Isn't that the point of the tag?LedRush (talk) 18:35, 30 June 2011 (UTC)
- Well, I agreed that points 1 & 2 should be addressed...do you have any wording that you would suggest? On point 3, I requested some suggested wording which has never occurred. (I haven't seen any mass reverting. :)
⋙–Berean–Hunter—► 00:34, 1 July 2011 (UTC)- I am a little confused, it seems that everyone agrees that all we need for the tag is what has been provided, so why was I reverted?LedRush (talk) 01:03, 1 July 2011 (UTC)
- Well no, I don't see that. "Everyone agrees" - obviously not. So, trying to move forward, your suggested wordings with cites? ...also, in your opinion, does this article make Knox & Sollecito look guilty? ...look innocent? Where do we stand?
⋙–Berean–Hunter—► 01:16, 1 July 2011 (UTC)- Process is important, and this just isn't how it works. I want more editors (so far it's basically been you) to comment, and I've identified many specific issues. What more would I have to do to show that the tag is warranted? (BTW, I really do appreciate your comments and willingness to work on this, but the process is important, and it should be adhered to).LedRush (talk) 01:38, 1 July 2011 (UTC)
- Thank you, that helps because I would love to see things moving forward. Right now, getting full participation may be difficult because we are moving into a holiday weekend but looking at a potential bright side, there is less chatter. I'd suggest focusing on the underlying reasons why folks wanted the tag in the first place...neutrality. Like Errant said, the idea is to get moving towards resolution...so let's go. :) Others will join if they are available. Let's work on the stuff I've mentioned above.
⋙–Berean–Hunter—► 01:52, 1 July 2011 (UTC)- I am more than happy to work on the identified issues above and whittle down my list. However, as I have said, I believe that the process is important. I feel that I have met the conditions to have the tag, and Errant seems to agree above. Let's put it up, see if it helps get more participation, and get moving. This may seem trivial to you, but to me, it is indicative of how things should be working on this page.LedRush (talk) 02:03, 1 July 2011 (UTC)
- I am the one discussing here...the tag issue above has several users with stated reasons and it is not mine to mitigate. I don't decide for them (I actually view the above straw poll above as having no consensus one way or the other). That is no reason to halt forward progress. Come on, issues 1,2, & 3 above, please. Let's try to solve this.
⋙–Berean–Hunter—► 14:47, 1 July 2011 (UTC)- For the record, I was not asking you to mitigate other users' positions, merely to follow WP guidelines on how to deal with these issues. Hopefully we will reach a sensible compromise and move past this issue quickly, as you seem more than willing to address my concerns (and for that I thank you again).LedRush (talk) 15:33, 1 July 2011 (UTC)
- I am the one discussing here...the tag issue above has several users with stated reasons and it is not mine to mitigate. I don't decide for them (I actually view the above straw poll above as having no consensus one way or the other). That is no reason to halt forward progress. Come on, issues 1,2, & 3 above, please. Let's try to solve this.
- I am more than happy to work on the identified issues above and whittle down my list. However, as I have said, I believe that the process is important. I feel that I have met the conditions to have the tag, and Errant seems to agree above. Let's put it up, see if it helps get more participation, and get moving. This may seem trivial to you, but to me, it is indicative of how things should be working on this page.LedRush (talk) 02:03, 1 July 2011 (UTC)
- Thank you, that helps because I would love to see things moving forward. Right now, getting full participation may be difficult because we are moving into a holiday weekend but looking at a potential bright side, there is less chatter. I'd suggest focusing on the underlying reasons why folks wanted the tag in the first place...neutrality. Like Errant said, the idea is to get moving towards resolution...so let's go. :) Others will join if they are available. Let's work on the stuff I've mentioned above.
- Process is important, and this just isn't how it works. I want more editors (so far it's basically been you) to comment, and I've identified many specific issues. What more would I have to do to show that the tag is warranted? (BTW, I really do appreciate your comments and willingness to work on this, but the process is important, and it should be adhered to).LedRush (talk) 01:38, 1 July 2011 (UTC)
- Well no, I don't see that. "Everyone agrees" - obviously not. So, trying to move forward, your suggested wordings with cites? ...also, in your opinion, does this article make Knox & Sollecito look guilty? ...look innocent? Where do we stand?
- I am a little confused, it seems that everyone agrees that all we need for the tag is what has been provided, so why was I reverted?LedRush (talk) 01:03, 1 July 2011 (UTC)
- Well, I agreed that points 1 & 2 should be addressed...do you have any wording that you would suggest? On point 3, I requested some suggested wording which has never occurred. (I haven't seen any mass reverting. :)
- I don't understand your "huh?" or your response. I added the tag after pointing out the POV issues and announcing that I planned to add the tag. The only response to that announcement was your, which seemed indifferent. I took that to mean I could add the tag. I got reverted. I brought up many specific issues. After some discussion, everyone went away. So, can I just change the article based on my points, or will I be mass reverted (hint, I'll be mass reverted)? So, I've brought up the issues here with the hopes of resolving them here. I've added the tag per this discussion and to prompt more discussion, preferably with some new editors as well as old ones. Isn't that the point of the tag?LedRush (talk) 18:35, 30 June 2011 (UTC)
- So, what criteria for the tag hasn't been met?; the only criteria for the tag is that someone raises an POV issue here on talk. You appear to be doing so. So fine; but now you have done so you must discuss the specific issues and resolve them via consensus within a short time. Once discussion goes stale, consensus agrees or the issues are resolved the tag is removed. --Errant (chat!) 18:29, 30 June 2011 (UTC)
- I've been reverted. Now's the time to discuss. So, what criteria for the tag hasn't been met?LedRush (talk) 18:17, 30 June 2011 (UTC)
- Silence does not mean "that everyone agrees that all we need for the tag is what has been provided". Many people commented on the tag above; that one of those voices now states some indifference does not mean the tag now has universal support. That some editors choose not to join in endless debate does not mean that their comments should be ignored. Silence can also mean agreement with views stated by others (the whole WP:NOTAVOTE thing).
- I must have missed you "announcing that I planned to add the tag"; I read your comments as you were uncertain how to proceed.
- The tag does not have a clear statement identifying a non-neutral point of view. It's a list of topics that are / might be covered in the article.
- I did not comment on your list of points above. For the most part, those topics do not unduly slant the article. Many items were previously debated. Some items are arguably irrelevant. That the prosecutor made illegal wiretaps in another case need not touch the current case where wiretaps are not at issue. I might be OK with the article mentioning it, but it is primarily speculative. The desired implication is an overzealous prosecutor went after K & S. Did the prosecutor coerce the DNA experts? Did the prosecutor coerce witnesses? Did the prosecutor coerce the panel? The item about the failure to record AK's initial interview is better fixed by adding a sourced statement to the article rather than a dull POV tag. I don't an effort to suppress such a statement. Moore and Heanley are poor sideshows; their presence in the list suggests a lack of perspective. Five years down the road, are they going to matter at all? Why do they matter now? They are hardly prominent individuals. The article should not be an extensive laundry list of all people who support innocence. Neither should it have an extensive list of those who support the judgment in the first instance.
- The article should not become a newspaper offering day-to-day developments in the appeal. Neither should the article become a comprehensive non-fiction book about the trial -- or even a lengthy term paper. WP is an encyclopedia; it need not and should not descend into excruciating detail or replay all the arguments. Filters are appropriate.
- As to NPOV, when I first read this article, I was mystified how K & S could have ever been convicted. I thought their lawyers must have been inept. I didn't know that Guede had ever met Knox, so how could K & S act in concert with him? I had to read the Massei report to get an appropriate sense of the prosecution's case and the competence of the defence. Today, the article still gives that odd impression, but I don't consider that a POV problem. In a sense, it suggests why there is public controversy about the case.
- FWIW, I want to see K & S acquitted, but the case is muddy. I'm troubled that the Massei Report accepted a lot of thin argument, but even if one were to say there is no DNA evidence against K & S and threw out the cartwheels, the hanging back, the screams in the night, and the silly pornography, then the prosecution still has a circumstantial case.
- Glrx (talk) 18:37, 1 July 2011 (UTC)
- Rather than try and argue WP process with you, I would direct you to the compromise solution below.LedRush (talk) 18:45, 1 July 2011 (UTC)
Tag Resolution Suggestion
I propose the following. I put the tag up with an expected expirary of two weeks. We address the 10 issues I've raised (and any others that come up). When we, through consensus, decide (a) the issue isn't one of POV (but perhaps there is an issue), (2) there is no issue or (3) the issue has been addressed in the article, we remove that item from the list. If at the end of two weeks we are still working towards consensus on open issues, the tag stays up until the discussions are finished. If, at the end of two weeks, the discussion is stale or all issues have been resolved by consensus (not resolved according to my view, meaning, if consensus agrees it's not an issue, it's "resolved"), we remove the tag. If the tag remains after two weeks, we need to continue actively resolving the issue. If the discussion grows stale for (let's say) 3 days on the outstanding topics, the tag gets removed.LedRush (talk) 15:44, 1 July 2011 (UTC)
SupportSupport if Tarc's suggestions on limitations are met below. Glrx, Tarc & Mario bring up valid points. As Errant says, compromise is good. I'd feel better if someone were making good faith efforts to work towards resolve. Instead, SPAs are showing up to !vote and not contributing any suggestions on moving forward. Where are the suggested wording(s)? ⋙–Berean–Hunter—►15:50, 1 July 2011 (UTC)Amended.
⋙–Berean–Hunter—► 22:15, 1 July 2011 (UTC)- Willing to compromise on this - it's not the end of the world to have the tag back up for a bit seeing as we *are* now working on a couple of issues. So long as it is removed properly :) --Errant (chat!) 18:50, 1 July 2011 (UTC)
- The suggestion above is a massive curtailment of the original policy, which contemplates anyone being able to put up the tag and everyone needing to agree (or the discussions to grow stale/reach resolution) to come down. Let's say we change the proposal as contemplated. Then, 12 days into it we get a legitimate POV concern but the currently listed ones get resolved on the 13th day. Do we take the tag down despite the concern? Under the guidelines, anyone can place the tag up in the situation I mentioned.
We'd basically be saying regardless of how huge a POV situation we discover, we will not use the tag at all unless listed now.LedRush (talk) 22:25, 1 July 2011 (UTC) - Actually, now that I read the suggested removal of the clause again, I see I misread it. The removal of the phrase merely creates the possibility of ending the terms of the agreement regarding these suggestions and this tag earlier than otherwise, thus making the tag policy return to the normal wikipedia guidelines. While I'd prefer that this agreement cover all the POV issues raised in this time to ensure that we have incentive to work towards a goal quickly, I'm fine with the regular wikipedia policy, as I believe it adequately deals with this situation anyway.LedRush (talk) 04:34, 2 July 2011 (UTC)
- The suggestion above is a massive curtailment of the original policy, which contemplates anyone being able to put up the tag and everyone needing to agree (or the discussions to grow stale/reach resolution) to come down. Let's say we change the proposal as contemplated. Then, 12 days into it we get a legitimate POV concern but the currently listed ones get resolved on the 13th day. Do we take the tag down despite the concern? Under the guidelines, anyone can place the tag up in the situation I mentioned.
- Oppose (ec). I do not see the list as meriting a POV tag at this time. Furthermore, the plan uses the POV tag as a bargaining chip: resolve these issues or the tag stays. It's open ended because the list can grow. It sets a strange burden on a consensus: if no consensus, the tag stays. I view the suggestion as a poor compromise. There is not a block on adding material to the article now. Even without the tag, the list topics can and are being discussed. What is the point of the tag? Glrx (talk) 18:52, 1 July 2011 (UTC)
- A tag can be added by any one editor when they identify POV issues in the article and bring them to the attention on the talk page. It is designed to call attention to the issues, to facilitate discussion and to attract more editors to discuss these issues. The tag can be removed when the discussions have concluded or have gone stale or everyone agrees to remove it. This compromise is actually putting much stricter limits on how a tag works than Wikipedia itself puts on it. I have offered this as a way around this issue. Please read http://en.wiki.x.io/wiki/Template:POV to learn more about how the process is supposed to work.LedRush (talk) 19:15, 1 July 2011 (UTC)
- But where is the discussion about neutrality issues? If the discussion lapses for a few days, then the tag is removed. We get a list thrown up on June 21, there is some topic discussion (not nec. about neutrality) until about June 24. Then 5 days later (ie, a few days) you comment about the silence. If the tag were up, the period of silence should have killed the tag. Even if there were POV discussions about some of the items, most of the list should be viewed as expired. This is not putting stricter limits on the POV policy. Glrx (talk) 21:16, 1 July 2011 (UTC)
- I am not sure I follow your comments. The discussion on neutrality would occur from now until the issues are resolved. Seeing as the policy allows anyone to put up a tag as long as they raise specific issues regarding neutrality, but this plan would seek to more specifically regulate the ability to take down the tag (by having a definite, short time; by requiring only consensus; by getting everyone on board with the idea of endeavoring to solve issues within two weeks) I fail to see how this is anything but a dramatic restriction on the ability to tag the article per the guidelines.LedRush (talk) 22:35, 1 July 2011 (UTC)
- The proposal is much stricter than the current policy. If the discussion lapses for a few days, then the tag should come down. No consensus is required. This discussion has already lapsed for several days on occasion. Template:POV#When to remove item 2. Glrx (talk) 19:34, 4 July 2011 (UTC)
- I am not sure I follow your comments. The discussion on neutrality would occur from now until the issues are resolved. Seeing as the policy allows anyone to put up a tag as long as they raise specific issues regarding neutrality, but this plan would seek to more specifically regulate the ability to take down the tag (by having a definite, short time; by requiring only consensus; by getting everyone on board with the idea of endeavoring to solve issues within two weeks) I fail to see how this is anything but a dramatic restriction on the ability to tag the article per the guidelines.LedRush (talk) 22:35, 1 July 2011 (UTC)
- But where is the discussion about neutrality issues? If the discussion lapses for a few days, then the tag is removed. We get a list thrown up on June 21, there is some topic discussion (not nec. about neutrality) until about June 24. Then 5 days later (ie, a few days) you comment about the silence. If the tag were up, the period of silence should have killed the tag. Even if there were POV discussions about some of the items, most of the list should be viewed as expired. This is not putting stricter limits on the POV policy. Glrx (talk) 21:16, 1 July 2011 (UTC)
- A tag can be added by any one editor when they identify POV issues in the article and bring them to the attention on the talk page. It is designed to call attention to the issues, to facilitate discussion and to attract more editors to discuss these issues. The tag can be removed when the discussions have concluded or have gone stale or everyone agrees to remove it. This compromise is actually putting much stricter limits on how a tag works than Wikipedia itself puts on it. I have offered this as a way around this issue. Please read http://en.wiki.x.io/wiki/Template:POV to learn more about how the process is supposed to work.LedRush (talk) 19:15, 1 July 2011 (UTC)
- Support - As per my initial suggestion and per Template:POV LedRush (talk) 19:18, 1 July 2011 (UTC)
- Weak support. If it means ending this interminable discussion, I'm all for LedRush's plan, and I thank him for articulating it so clearly. Equally, Glrx puts forward a number of excellent points, especially about open-endedness. I'm still concerned that there is a bit too much emphasis here on simply having the tag for its own sake, or as a banner or a warning. Nevertheless, I have no concrete objections to this proposal for compromise. SuperMarioMan 19:23, 1 July 2011 (UTC)
- I would like to point out that the actual policy on Templates is far more open-ended than my proposal Template:POV. However, I understand peoples' concerns regarding this, which is why I built in the 2-week goal, the 3-day stale period, and the need for consensus on the issues (instead of "all editors" agreeing to remove the tag as the policy states). I feel these are three major concessions towards fears of open-endedness.LedRush (talk) 19:32, 1 July 2011 (UTC)
- Support Should be put back up. Issymo (talk) 20:07, 1 July 2011 (UTC)
- Until when?
⋙–Berean–Hunter—► 20:12, 1 July 2011 (UTC) - Quite. As I suggested, sometimes the focus seems to be not so much on fixing perceived problems as simply whether or not the article should be tagged. SuperMarioMan 20:24, 1 July 2011 (UTC)
- Support Tag should be up. Turningpointe (talk) 20:19, 1 July 2011 (UTC)
- Oppose, unless the "and any others that come up" bit is stricken. We have 14 days for 10 issues, it'd be much better to proceed with a specific parameter rather than have n escape clause to add every possible future grievance. Tarc (talk) 20:24, 1 July 2011 (UTC)
- Oppose per Tarc. --John (talk) 18:51, 4 July 2011 (UTC)