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Citations in Micheli Report

Ref the following footnote

"^ a b c d e f g h i j k l m n o p q r s t u v w x y z aa ab ac ad ae af ag ah ai aj "Judgement 28.10.2008", Dr. Paolo Micheli, dep. 2009-01-26, Court of Perugia Italy, trial of Rudy Hermann Guede, (Google Translation, Italian to English)Translate.google.com, Italian webpage: Penale.it . Retrieved 2009-12-11."

All 36 items that depend on the above citation do not meet WP:BOP and are not properly sourced. No page number is given for any item as required by WP:BOP. The source is not in English and cannot be understood by the audience. The translation tool above only does a poor translation of a portion of the document. Even in English, the above is a reliable source only to show what is stated in the court opinion. Because of the level of criticism of the trial, the the Micheli Report can only be used on a case by case basis as a reliable source for assertion of fact.PhanuelB (talk) 23:35, 8 July 2010 (UTC)

There where discussions about how to handle the "Micheli report" before as it does not have page #'s. I'll try to find and post links to the previous and now archived discussions sometime tomorrow (unless someone beats me to it). The basic idea proposed (by me) was to add a (Italian) phrase to the citation that would make it easy to find the section in this 400+ pages trial record for readers and for editors. Also it is a primary source, it can be used (Italian language or not) for some instances and for sure when it can be backed up by reliable mainstream press coverage or, in some instances to discredit some sources as unreliable if they're contradicted by this official report. Also, most weight should be given to what RS's reported from the report when there is no contradiction. See wp:verifiable.The Magnificent Clean-keeper (talk) 00:13, 9 July 2010 (UTC)

Verification is indeed difficult when this reference is used and in some cases statements are made citing this report that are inaccurate. For example, the statement "Sollecito made two calls to the Carabinieri military police, reporting a possible burglary", cites the Micheli Report. The time of these calls are in the report, but the report doesn't state that Sollecito reported a burglary. Transcripts of that call indicate he reported a possible break in, blood, a locked door and a missing roommate. If we need to use a trail judgement as a source, the Massei Report from the trail of Knox and Sollecito is a better reference. It is also in Italian, but has page numbers making it possible to point directly to a specific place in the report. Footwarrior (talk) 16:51, 9 July 2010 (UTC)

Don't think there is a case for saying these cites fail BOP. The fact that it is in Italian is not a problem per WP:NONENG, and the lack of page refs is because the source is an HTML document without page refs.

However, there are genuine difficulties in verification. I think MCK's proposal to quote the Italian in the footnote is a good one, provided this can be done succinctly. Large chunks of Italian in the footnotes would be unsightly, so in many cases, maybe we should just quote enough text to facilitate a search of the webpage for the relevant part.

If there are discrepancies between the report and the article, then these should be corrected (Footwarrior, are you able to quote the relevant material regarding the phonecalls?).

Footwarrior: the Massei Report would be an excellent source to have at our disposal, but it does not appear to be available online, as far as I know. Do you know different? --FormerIP (talk) 19:32, 9 July 2010 (UTC)

The transcript of Raffaele's first 112 call I remembered seeing turns out to be a blog, and thus not considered a reliable source. I am still trying to find a proper source for a transcript. We can however reference the Massei Report for the times of the calls:

At 12:51 and 12:54, Sollecito made two calls to 112, the Italian emergency number.

This also seems to be a good source for the contents of the call: "h12.51.40 Raffaele Sollecito chiamava il 112 per avvertire i Carabinieri del presunto furto nella stanza della Romanelli" ("Sollecito called 112 to inform the gendarmerie of the alleged theft from Romanelli's room"). --FormerIP (talk) 17:56, 10 July 2010 (UTC)

WP:NONENG makes no provision for the use of un-translated non-English quotations. A link to the Google translate site which as we all know barely works with Italian does not meet the express requirement of side by side text in both languages. Wikipedia's recommendation of putting lengthy quotes in footnotes or the talk page will not work here. The editors may want to create a new Wikipedia page dedicated to translated passages of documents relevant to this case. Since most reliable secondary sources on the case question the legitimacy of the tribunal, I will need an area where exact translations of passages from the Massei and Micheli documents can be posted and agreed upon. In the absence of specific side by side translation, the Wikipedia rules are clear that the above citations must go..PhanuelB (talk) 17:54, 10 July 2010 (UTC)

I've got no objection to editors using their userspace to store translations if they want, but there's nothing to oblige editors to follow a higher standard than the guidelines ask for. The guideline says: "When citing a source in a different language, without quotations, the original and its translation should be provided if requested by other editors: this can be added to a footnote, or to the talk page if too long for a footnote." That's the procedure we should follow.

Incidentally, a while ago I did some translation of extracts from Michelli, which are availble here: User:FormerIP/Michelli. --FormerIP (talk) 18:21, 10 July 2010 (UTC)

I guess "citing" a source means to me that somebody can actually see a "quote" from it. Anyway it doesn't matter because the sentence you choose gives me the right to request the quote and I hereby assert that right.PhanuelB (talk) 19:24, 10 July 2010 (UTC)

Is there any information in particular you feel may be inaccurate. It would be good to highlight your main concerns, or you might have a long wait. --FormerIP (talk) 21:10, 10 July 2010 (UTC)

I'm starting a section below to go through the cites one by one. --FormerIP (talk) 22:10, 10 July 2010 (UTC)

Interesting, PhanuelB, that you are so opinionated about so much of this court case whilst being neither able to read, or obtain a translation (other than Google's, which for more than the odd phrase is worthless) so much of the case documentation. Does that tell you anything about your own sources of information?   pablo_hablo. 22:30, 10 July 2010 (UTC)

I can read it but it takes work. All you have to do is search for names and words of interest. On an item by item basis we can agree that some items are undisputed. Just say which ones. There is way too much detail above. Example: who cares where the police had Guede's prints on file? I still think it would work better to have a dedicated page to translations related to this case. There isn't room here for what has to be done and it's not permament. I also have passages that will need agreement. Creating a dedicated page is allowed as Wikipedia is generally open about thinking outside of the box.PhanuelB (talk) 16:09, 11 July 2010 (UTC)

Italian and English text from Michelli

until at least about 8:30 pm, when Knox and Sollecito turned off their mobile phones.

l’unico dato significativo risultante dai cellulari è la mancata operatività di quello degli imputati a partire dalle 20:40 circa della sera del 1 novembre

the only significant information resulting from the mobile phones is that the accused persons had them turned off from approximately 20:40 on November 1

Inaccurate time to be changed in article. --FormerIP (talk) 22:10, 10 July 2010 (UTC)

Kercher was murdered in the apartment at around 11 pm.

il Procuratore della Repubblica e la Polizia Giudiziaria procedevano a ricostruire i movimenti della ragazza nelle ultime ore di vita, muovendo anche dalle ipotesi formulate dal C.T. medico-legale in punto di epoca della morte, da collocare a distanza di non più di 2 o 3 ore dall’ultimo pasto consumato, e verosimilmente da intendere avvenuta intorno alle 23:00 del 1 novembre 2007.

the Public Prosecutor and the Judicial Police proceeded to reconstruct the movements of the girl during the last hours of her life, starting from the hypothesis formulated from the medico-legal CT as to the time of death, which was placed no more than 2 or 3 hours after her last meal, and understood to have occurred at around 23:00 on November 1, 2007. --FormerIP (talk) 22:22, 10 July 2010 (UTC)

Knox and Sollecito were standing outside

Effettuate le verifiche sul primo dei telefoni in questione, l’utenza della relativa sim card risultava appartenere a tale R. F., domiciliata in Via della Pergola 7: un equipaggio della Polizia Postale si portava dunque presso il recapito accertato, ma - in luogo della R. - vi riscontrava la presenza di altri due giovani, l’americana K. A. M. (che risultava occupare un’altra delle stanze dell’abitazione) e il di lei ragazzo S. R..

After performing checks against the first of these phones, the user of the sim card was intentified as FR, who lived at Via della Pergola 7. A detail from the Postal Police then took it to the address, but - instead of R - we find that there are two other young people there, the American AMK (who occupied another room of the dwelling) and her boyfriend RS..

This doesn't seem to say they were outside. How important is this?--FormerIP (talk) 22:23, 10 July 2010 (UTC)

and told the police that the premises had been burgled, that a window had been broken and that there were drops of blood in several rooms

Secondo quanto rappresentato all’Isp. BATTISTELLI, la K. ed il S. avevano dunque rilevato la presenza di macchie di sangue in alcuni dei vani dell’appartamento, in particolare in uno dei bagni, nonché tracce di un apparente furto (anche se nessuno dei due riferiva di aver notato che qualcosa fosse stato effettivamente rubato) proprio nella stanza della R., dove c’era un vetro infranto e un grosso sasso in terra.

As it was represented to Inspector Battistelli, K. and S. had detected the presence of blood stains in some of the rooms in the apartment, in particular one of the bathrooms, and signs of an apparent theft (although neither of them said that they noticed that anything had actually been stolen) in A.'s room, where there was broken glass and a large stone on the floor. --FormerIP (talk) 22:29, 10 July 2010 (UTC)

The communications police investigated the upstairs flat, finding blood in several rooms, a bloody footprint in the smaller bathroom, an unflushed toilet in the large bathroom and blood near Kercher's locked bedroom

Ne derivava, anche nei giorni successivi ed a cura di personale del Servizio di Polizia Scientifica, una capillare attività di sopralluogo, da cui risultava che:

Over the following days, under the care of officers the Police Scientific Service, an extensive inspection was carried out, which showed that:

- subito dopo un piccolo disimpegno dinanzi alla soglia, si accedeva a un locale adibito a soggiorno-cucina, dove si repertavano alcune impronte di suole di scarpa e piccole tracce di sangue; - sulla destra del soggiorno vi era la porta della camera occupata dalla M., all’interno della quale non si rilevava alcunché di significativo, mentre in una prima stanza da bagno, adiacente a detta camera, il water si palesava non scaricato, con all’interno delle feci e della carta igienica;

- Next is a small hallway by the door, then you enter a room with living room and kitchen, where there found some impressions of shoe soles and small traces of blood; - At the right of the residence there was the door of the room occupied by M, in which nothing significant was found, while in the first bathroom, adjacent to that room, the toilet had clearly not been flushed and had a stool and toilet paper in it.

tenendo a sinistra la soglia della camera della R. e a destra quella della M., si apriva uno stretto corridoio (dal quale si accedeva ad altre due camere e ad un secondo bagno) sul cui pavimento venivano repertate altre impronte di calzature e tracce ematiche;

after the door of R's room and to the right of M's, opened a narrow corridor (leading to two bedrooms and a bathroom) on whose floor other shoeprints and traces of blood were found

Prints appear to be near, rather than in, the bathroom. --FormerIP (talk) 23:11, 10 July 2010 (UTC)

The window in one of the bedrooms had been smashed, with broken glass near a large stone in a bag on the floor

Il davanzale interno ed esterno della finestra è cosparso di frammenti di vetro di varie dimensioni, presenti anche all’interno della stanza. ... Sul quadrante anteriore del pavimento ... è una busta di carta ... contenente capi di abbigliamento ed un sasso della misura di cm. 20 x cm. 15 x cm.

The outer and inner windowsill is covered with glass fragments of various sizes, which are also present in the room. ... On the near part of the floor ... is a paper bag containing ... clothing and a stone sized 20 cm X 15 cm. --FormerIP (talk) 23:28, 10 July 2010 (UTC)

The door to Kercher's room was forced open and the police found Kercher lying beneath a duvet, soaked in blood, with pools and smears of blood around the room. The area was secured for investigation.

Dinanzi alle cautele degli Agenti della Polizia Postale, che non ritenevano di poter arrecare danni ad una proprietà privata solo sulla base di quanto evidenziato, era l’A. a prendersi la briga di sfondare la porta a calci, ma non appena fatto un passo all’interno della stanza, si ritraeva con orrore notando sangue in gran copia ed un piede nudo - evidentemente di un corpo inanimato, riverso sul pavimento - sporgere da sotto una trapunta. Si trattava, come subito dopo accertato, del cadavere della K., che presentava sul collo una vistosa ferita da arma da taglio. L’Isp. BATTISTELLI, a quel punto, inibiva a tutti i presenti di entrare nella camera, e faceva intervenire i colleghi della Squadra Mobile.

Given the cautious attitude of the Postal Police officers, who felt that they could cause damage to private property only on the basis of some evidence, it was A. who took the trouble to kick down the door. But as soon as she stepped inside the room, she drew back in horror, noticing a large amount of blood and a bare foot - evidently that of an inanimate body, lying on the floor - protruding from under a quilt. It was, as was soon established, the body of K., which bore a conspicuous stab wound in the neck. Inspector Battistelli, at that point, prevented all those present from entering the room, and brought in colleagues from the Mobile Unit. --FormerIP (talk) 23:57, 10 July 2010 (UTC)

The forensic evidence indicated that the body had been further disrobed and moved some time after death.

il reggiseno fu tolto dopo che il sangue aveva avuto modo di interessare per un tempo apprezzabile la spallina, appunto quella rivelatasi intrisa all’atto del ritrovamento.

the bra was removed after blood had been in contact with the bra-strap for a certain amount of time, precisely because it was soaked with blood at the time of discovery.

--FormerIP (talk) 16:59, 11 July 2010 (UTC)

a bloody print matching his left hand was found on a pillow under the victim's back

Soltanto in seguito, attraverso la comparazione in Banca Dati di un’impronta palmare impressa nel sangue e rinvenuta sulla federa del cuscino che si trovava sotto il corpo della vittima, si accertava invece la presenza sul luogo del delitto del 21enne G. R. H.

Only later, through checking a database against a palm-print made in blood on the pillow that was found under the victim's body, the presence at the scene of 21 year old HRG was instead established. Not sure how much it matters, but I will remove the word "left".--FormerIP (talk) 17:09, 11 July 2010 (UTC)

Guede's DNA was also found on toilet paper in one of the bathrooms but no trace of his DNA was found anywhere else in the flat, including the bedroom where the window had been broken and the contents ransacked.

In realtà, però, di DNA dell’imputato non è che se ne sia trovato parecchio: come ricordato in precedenza, ve ne era - oltre che sul famoso polsino - sul corpo della ragazza e sul reggiseno (portati via da quella stanza, e dunque non più fattori di contaminazione), sulla carta igienica (ma era in bagno) e sulla borsa. In definitiva, nulla fa ritenere che vi fosse materiale biologico di R. in gran copia, quasi come se volasse dentro la camera o vi stazionasse sul pavimento.

In reality, however, not a lot of DNA from the accused was found. As mentioned earlier, there was - apart from the famous cuff - some on the girl's body and on the bra (taken away from that room, so no chance of contamination), on toilet paper (although that was in the bathroom) and on the bag. Ultimately, there is no indication that there was biological material of R. in great abundance, such as might fly into the room or be lying about on the floor. --FormerIP (talk) 17:36, 11 July 2010 (UTC)

retrieved in a second forensic search on 18 December 2007

(doglianza riferita soprattutto al lembo di reggiseno, individuato dalla Polizia Scientifica già nella notte fra il 2 e il 3 novembre ma concretamente prelevato ed esaminato solo dopo un secondo sopralluogo del 18 dicembre 2007).

(This grievance is primarily related to the piece of bra, identified by the Scientific Police on the night of 2 and 3 November, but actually collected and examined only after a second inspection on 18 December 2007). --FormerIP (talk) 17:40, 11 July 2010 (UTC)

The judge at the trial of Rudy Guede described the claim of contamination at the laboratory as making no sense, since there was no material from which such contamination could have come, and so the risk would have been the loss of traces found there, not the risk of somehow discovering new traces.

Dov’è la fonte, o anche il sospetto, della contaminazione? Va sicuramente rimarcato che dimenticarsi il lembo di stoffa per 46 giorni, peraltro dinanzi ad una scena con evidenze di violenza sessuale e dopo aver repertato il reggiseno, costituì una leggerezza grave: ma va con altrettanta significatività ricordato che il rischio conseguente avrebbe potuto essere la perdita di tracce ivi presenti, non già la scoperta di tracce sopravvenute chissà come.

Where is the source, or even the suspicion of contamination? It should be remarked that, surely, to forget the clasp for 46 days, what is more at a scene with evidence of rape, and after finding a bra, constituted a serious lapse. But it should equally be remembered that the risk would have been the loss of traces found there, not the risk of somehow discovering new traces.--FormerIP (talk) 17:52, 11 July 2010 (UTC)

Deletion of Documentaries

Administrator Black Kite has deleted additions I made to the Books and Documentaries section. The ability to link to YouTube had been previously discussed and approved of by a neutral administrator, Amalthea. The links were fully compliant with WP:ELNEVER). Due care was taken to avoid copyright infringement.

1) CBS has agreements with YouTube as evidenced by YouTube pages that display both logos. The CBS videos in question were uploaded over a year ago. Because of the corporate alliance, it can be assumed that CBS is aware of any CBS content on YouTube and provides tacit approval for its use.

2) The NBC Documentary links to an NBC site.

3) The TLC Video was uploaded by TLC itself as evidenced by a TLC YouTube page that displays the TLC logo.

4) The videos in question are reliable secondary sources which designate the Perugian tribunal as a "Public Lynching", a "railroad job from hell" and, a "case based on lies." The TLC video is a reliable secondary source that questions whether police incompetence in not arresting Rudy Guede in Milan played a part in Meredith Kercher's death.

5) I pose the following question: If the concern was with copyright infringement and not content, why wasn't just the link removed with the name of the documentary left in place?PhanuelB (talk) 00:35, 11 July 2010 (UTC)

Phanuel, it sounds like you want the videos linked to because they provide a particular slant, rather than because they give an all-round, balanced picture. You can understand why this might be questioned, surely? --FormerIP (talk) 02:14, 11 July 2010 (UTC)

The Channel 4 one ([1]) is clearly a copyvio. CBS does upload their own shows (here's an example), but both the ones you linked to - this and this - were uploaded by someone else and are thus copyvios as well. You can not "assume that CBS is aware of all content on YouTube" - that is a ludicrous idea - you'd have to source a comment from CBS stating this. The NBC one is clearly OK because it's their own page. The fifth link doesn't work. However whether or not they're copyvios, they shouldn't be linked to directly anyway - if they're needed to source something you should just use {{cite episode}} anyway. The reader doesn't need to be sent to a YouTube video to see a short quotation. More importantly, as mentioned before, the videos are not reliable sources that the Perugian tribunal is "a case based on lies" or anything else. They are only a reliable source that some random media commentator said that. Whether those quotes are notable enough to be in the article is a different question and one that was dealt with on this talkpage a few weeks ago. Black Kite (t) (c) 10:02, 11 July 2010 (UTC)

There was a request for a third opinion on this page, even though I see at least three active editors here. Either way, I agree with Black Kite's reasoning above. YouTube videos are not WP:RS, and especially when they're not posted by the company itself. As to the NBC one, well, it seems that that would be better used as a reference somewhere than just a random external link at the bottom. — HelloAnnyong ^{(say whaaat?!)} 16:10, 11 July 2010 (UTC)

Friends of Amanda

I added a section on "Friends of Amanda" into the article, when we were doing the redrafting. This has been deleted without comment. I would have thought it was sufficiently notable to warrant a mention, although it seems quite a secretive group in terms of its membership and constitution, so it is hard to gauge how notable it is. Is there a good reason for deletion? Bluewave (talk) 17:19, 11 July 2010 (UTC)

No surprise there. I would ask the editors to consider why it was removed. BTW, there will be links added from a similar site to the Steve Moore articles which are the definitive secondary source on the police investigation. A career FBI agent IS a reliable source and he is calling for the imprisonment of key people involved in the investigation. Oh I forgot, the Italian government is also calling for the imprisonment of the prosecutor.PhanuelB (talk) 18:45, 11 July 2010 (UTC)

Even so I find it redundant to mention the "Friends of Amanda" site I have no objection if the other two notable blogs ("True justice for Amanda" and "Perugia Murder file") are mentioned too. Not sure if they would meet wp:notability thou and to make it clear, they would have no place at all as external links (as was discussed before and consensus was to leave them all out. It sure also depends on reliable third sources reporting on those sites. But again, I would just leave them all out to maintain NPOV. I'm certain we would run into POV issues again if we allow one or more blogsites to be discussed in the article.The Magnificent Clean-keeper (talk) 19:21, 11 July 2010 (UTC)

And BTW, the "career FBI agent" is not a reliable source other than for his opinion/commentary in this case.The Magnificent Clean-keeper (talk) 19:28, 11 July 2010 (UTC)

I don't think there's a problem mentioning that it exists, it could probably be mentioned after that lone sentence that begins the "Support for Knox" section; I doubt if it's notable enough to support a whole section, though. Black Kite (t) (c) 19:26, 11 July 2010 (UTC)

Agree.The Magnificent Clean-keeper (talk) 19:30, 11 July 2010 (UTC)

External links to sites with information from diverse perspectives improve the article. The effort here to restrict the information available to the reader is an affront to NPOV. IJIP and FOA are information sites and I am curious why the editors here are so concerned that the readers might be permitted to gain knowledge from those sites. I don't see what it hurts. PMF is a blog area. Of the four websites mentioned, one (TJMK) presents a problem.(unsourced. BLP-vio removed).PhanuelB (talk) 20:23, 11 July 2010 (UTC)

• Where? Is it in one of the several video clips? Is it hidden within the text of that rather large site? Can you please be specific where the information can be found instead of just linking to the main page? I'm sure not going to read and watch everything on that page.The Magnificent Clean-keeper (talk) 23:37, 11 July 2010 (UTC)

• That page takes forever to load, give it a second and then search on "Amy" or "jenkins."PhanuelB (talk) 03:09, 12 July 2010 (UTC)

Here is the link to the Truejustice site that shows an image of the target of their criticism with her minor child.True Justice. I do not believe that this was unsourced previously because everybody here knew how to go to TJMK and see it for themselves. The issue is important because it provides important safety information for those who participate in this page. It also means that each and every person here under WP:Multiple Accounts is entitled to have a legitimate alternate account, as I have, for reasons of privacy and security. Different subject: FOA and IJIP are advocacy sites and with the exception of the Steve Moore articles cannot be used as WP:RS.PhanuelB (talk) 23:11, 11 July 2010 (UTC)

Not sure what your point is here, Phanuel, but I was shocked to see the same photo on the Daily Mail website [2] accompanying an article by Amy Jenkins. I assume you also think the Daily Mail should not be considered an RS. I intend to support you in your campaign. I also think the BBC have some questions to answer: [3]--FormerIP (talk) 23:40, 11 July 2010 (UTC)

The page you cite is not a problem. This is an article written by Amy Jenkins. The choice to display an image of her with her child is hers and hers alone. No issues whatsoever.PhanuelB (talk) 03:21, 12 July 2010 (UTC)

While there may be copyright issues with this site reusing promotional photographs, this is not something we can change; it's not a WP issue unless the picture is hosted here. I don't see your issue with the "minor child" thing at all.   pablo_hablo. 08:47, 12 July 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I didn't understand that, either. But do we need links to any blogs anyway? Bluewave (talk) 09:05, 12 July 2010 (UTC)

I don't think links to blogs add anything. Anyone can post their opinions online; there's no quality control. I think that the Friends of Amanda blog/pr/pressure group cartel probably do need a mention though.   pablo_hablo. 09:20, 12 July 2010 (UTC)

The TJMK site is free to criticize editorials by others. The use of images of the people they attack is a grey area. The use of an image of the minor child of their target as part of their attack is immoral. The FOA site is not a blog.PhanuelB (talk) 10:22, 12 July 2010 (UTC)

I'd question the legality of re-using a promotional picture of an author with her minor child (or "baby" as we say round here) due to copyright reasons. We will have to disagree on the "morality".   pablo_hablo. 10:56, 12 July 2010 (UTC)

You seem to be quite up to date when it comes to those blogs, (I'm also referring to your post above). So why don't you do us all a favor and link directly to the parts you're referring to. Just in case you're not familiar with external linking on talkpages: [Your link] or [Your link here (followed by a space) and your then visible title or comment about the link]. You can try it at the wp:sandbox (although I don't think you need to as you must have some experience with your other legit account). And again as you've been told before, please do not comment on the editors. Comment on the subject only. Thanks, The Magnificent Clean-keeper (talk) 21:23, 11 July 2010 (UTC)

And as a reminder: Unsourced allegations have no place here. So please provide a source for "(TJMK) presents a problem. That site is actively engaged in the harassment of their adversaries. They have recently published images of the minor child of one of their targets, Amy Jenkins, along with a lengthy diatribe against her." or it will be removed shortly as a BLP vio.The Magnificent Clean-keeper (talk) 21:37, 11 July 2010 (UTC)

Agree with Black Kite. FoA is slightly more noteable than other blogs because of its active lobying (for example, being interviewed in the media). But it is important not to lose sight of "slightly" - if too much space is given, then other blogs should also be brought in for balance. But I think it would be better just to keep FoA to a passing mention. --FormerIP (talk) 21:26, 11 July 2010 (UTC)

PhanuelB: NPOV is exactly the reason why we can't use sites like FOA. There's no problem mentioning that it exists, but a website whose front page yells "978 days of wrongful imprisonment" in huge red letters isn't ever going to be a reliable source. It's not an information site; it's an advocacy site. An information site would be neutral; it isn't.Black Kite (t) (c) 21:40, 11 July 2010 (UTC)

To be clear...I wasn't suggesting linking to FoA and certainly not citing it as a source. But I thought its existence was arguably notable and worth mentioning in the article. Bluewave (talk) 21:52, 11 July 2010 (UTC)

It is not suggested that FOA or IIP should be considered WP:RS as they are both advocacy sites. The Steve Moore articles are reliable secondary sources that exist only on IIP. Links to both should be included. Links to TJMK remain in question for safety reason I have documented above. I don't think links to PMF or PSHOCK (prohibited by Wikipedia) hurt anything as part of a list of online resources. PhanuelB (talk) 13:58, 12 July 2010 (UTC)

FoA currently ranks 5,422,435th for web traffic. I'd say that's a website that's not notable or worth mentioning. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 173.25.240.217 (talk) 21:06, 12 July 2010 (UTC)

Larry King Live broadcasts to 200 countries with a potential readership of 150 million. The neutral commentators he has chosen to speak about this case are WP:RS but they are not allowed into this article.PhanuelB (talk) 16:11, 13 July 2010 (UTC)

So? The BBC's global reach is far more than that but I don't see a call for all the articles that they have about the issue to be included - as indeed they shouldn't be, unless they're very relevant to the case. What any news outlet has said about this case is irrelevant unless it is (a) sourcing a notable point via WP:RS, or (b) is notable to the article in itself. Black Kite (t) (c) 19:33, 13 July 2010 (UTC)

You are free to include BBC content here but don't interfere with other content that doesn't say what you want to hear. An article/segment that is about the case is relevant to the case -- obviously. In almost all cases BBC,CBS,CNN, ABC are WP:RS unless the information is obsolete.PhanuelB (talk) 19:45, 13 July 2010 (UTC)

No - you're missing the point. All these sources are RS but unless what they add to the article is notable and important, they shouldn't be in there. Yet again, this article is about the murder of Kercher, not about what random commentators think about the trial, whoever they are. The fact that the trial is controversial and its outcome has been contested is already in the article. And as has been pointed out many times, if we included every single bit of media commentary about the case, the article would be ridiculously bloated - it's long enough as it is. Black Kite (t) (c) 19:58, 13 July 2010 (UTC)

You do not properly state how Wikipedia works. This article is supposed to be about what reliable secondary sources WP:SECONDARY ("random commentators" as you put it) say about it. The trial is noteworthy because of questions about whether an American exchange student (and not her Italian friend) got a fair trial. That is what reliable secondary sources are saying. The article is bloated because it is so poorly written and because anybody who challenges that gets banned. Example:Number and nature of wounds doesn't belong in the first paragraph and is stated elsewhere. The criticism of this trial is barely if at all stated WP:WEIGHT. Look at this example: "A defence witness in the Knox and Sollecito trial said that Guede told him of having been caught by police with property stolen from the witness's office, but that he had purchased this property legitimately. A bartender has also alleged that Guede entered his home uninvited and carrying a knife and the owner of a nursery school in Milan has claimed that Guede trespassed on her premises." That passage has been ever so painfully worded to diminish the fact that Guede was on a spree of violent crime much of which was similar to what was observed at the crime scene. Let's see. Don't mention that Guede threatened somebody with the knife. Claims that he actually bought the laptop are absurd and only mentioned to show what a liar he is. And Maria del Prato didn't claim it, she saw it with her own eyes and describes it in great detail in American English on the documentary that you have banned. That tortured paragraph and the entire article define WP:UNDUE.PhanuelB (talk) 21:02, 13 July 2010 (UTC)

This posting actually sums up all the misconceptions you have about Wikipedia. I'll take these in turn;

• "This article is supposed to be about what reliable secondary sources WP:SECONDARY ("random commentators" as you put it) say about it". No, it isn't. It's about stating facts, sourced to reliable sources. The opinion of secondary sources is utterly irrelevant unless it is sourcing a notable fact.
• Your points about Guede are a perfect example of your incorrect view of notability. This article is about the murder; it is not about Guede. His prior criminal record (or otherwise) might be worth a sentence, if well sourced; but nothing more than that.
• "The article is bloated because it is so poorly written and because anybody who challenges that gets banned.". Yes, the article was incredibly poorly written to the level of being a WP:COATRACK for those wishing to push their POV that Knox is innocent; the rewrite has fixed that problem. It still isn't perfect; but at least it's neutral now. The reason that a number of people have been banned from the article (or from Wikipedia completely) is that they have failed to stop trying to degrade this article into a Knox advocacy piece.
• "Claims that he actually bought the laptop are absurd and only mentioned to show what a liar he is". "That passage has been ever so painfully worded to diminish the fact that Guede was on a spree of violent crime". These are your opinions. Let me very clear about this - no one cares about your opinions, and they don't belong in this article. If you wish to pursue a campaign to claim Knox's innocence there are many places on the Internet to do this - Wikipedia is not the place. If you do this I'm afraid that the inevitable result will be the same as previous editors who have tried to do the same.
• You have some sort of idea that the neutral editors on this article - including myself - are somehow biased. They're not - they're trying to maintain a neutral point of view. You're very fond of throwign around WP:UNDUE whilst trying to actually break the same guideline by advocating that a large amount of non-neutral comment should be added. I'd seriously think about what you want to achieve here. Black Kite (t) (c) 21:15, 13 July 2010 (UTC)

Phanuel, you seem very concerned that the information about character and past history of Guede should be altered to paint a darker picture of him than is the case at present. On the other hand, you seem unconcerned that information about the character and past history of Knox is completely missing from the article, even though it has received wide coverage in the media (media potentially consumed by millions of people, which by your reckoning would make it "must include"). Do you see how this apparent inconsistency might lead some to question your commitment to ensuring NPOV in the article? --FormerIP (talk) 21:53, 13 July 2010 (UTC)

If there is any knowledge of criminal or violent behaviour by Amanda or Raffaele, I think it should be included in the article, but properly sourced … --Aruu (talk) 22:30, 13 July 2010 (UTC)

Criminal behaviour and behaviour which might be seen as casting them in a bad light (I don't see why we would exclude the latter) has been widely reported in the media. That doesn't make it true, of course. But that isn't my point. We should be even handed, although I believe we should do this by avoiding gossip, innuendo and information of marginal relevance to the topic of the article. --FormerIP (talk) 22:47, 13 July 2010 (UTC)

There are plenty of sources out there that paint Knox's previous behaviour in a poor (whilst not criminal) light; but we do not include them because they are irrelevant to this article, as is anything of Guede's life before the murder. The simple reason for that is that any link between previous behaviour and the events of the murder are synthesis. That's the point, really - I'm sure it's not difficult to comprehend, although that appears to be the case for certain editors here. Black Kite (t) (c) 23:02, 13 July 2010 (UTC)

Just on a point of very little importance, there are allegations of (relatively minor) criminality against Knox and Sollecito contained in RSs. These shouldn't be included in the article, but just wanted to make the point that they are out there. --FormerIP (talk) 23:07, 13 July 2010 (UTC)

That's absurd … to simply report something is not synthesis. It was part of the evidence in court in this case. — So I guess, you're taking the things about Rudy out now, because it is synthesis? --Aruu (talk) 23:15, 13 July 2010 (UTC)

Yes, it's synthesis because it's irrelevant. Guede was tried and convicted of the same crime as Knox and Sollecito. But Guede's criminal record (or lack of it) before the actual murder are completely irrelevant to the actual crime. Linking prior behaviour to actual behaviour is clearly synthesis - those wishing to inflate Guede's (alleged) criminal past are basically trying to say "he was a criminal before therefore he is far more likely to have committed this crime". It's almost the textbook definition of WP:SYNTH and must therefore be excluded from the article (not to mention the extremely dubious WP:BLP issues, although they're almost as important). Black Kite (t) (c) 23:21, 13 July 2010 (UTC)

If you state it like that (Rudy has done this so he must have done that) in the article, it's clearly synthesis, I agree. But if you don't make that connection, just simply report it, because it was relevant in this case (but of course doesn't make him necessarily guilty), it's no synthesis.--Aruu (talk) 23:40, 13 July 2010 (UTC)

If you simply report it, you must be doing so with a purpose in mind (innuendo).

I'm not sure where exactly I stand on this point overall. Allegations that Guede may have committed break-ins were brought up in the K&S trial and considered by the panel, which may distinguish them from mere gossip. The report determined that there was not a case for linking the staged break in at the Knox-Kercher flat (even supposing it were an actual break in) with alleged previous break-ins by Guede. The judge seems not to want to rule on the veracity of the claims against Guede, although he does say that Guede did not commit a break-in at the nursery. The bar-tender witness was not certain in his identification of Guede. The lawyer witness is clear in his identification of Guede, but his story is compatible with Guede being innocent of any crime. I think it is reasonable to suspect that Guede may have stolen a laptop, but it doesn't look like it would stand up in court. And laptop thieves are not always murderers in any event. There's a case, I think, per WP:BLP for saying we should avoid anything involving conjecture.

I still can't understand why negative character information is appropriate in the case of Guede but not for Knox.--FormerIP (talk) 23:57, 13 July 2010 (UTC)

Yes, that's the point, I think. If Guede had a reliably sourced background of being convicted for violent crimes, for example, there would be a reasonable justification for mentioning it. But in this case that isn't the case, and there is dispute about what exactly his prior behaviour was anyway. Per WP:BLP, we're far better off staying well away from that issue (exactly as we would be for Knox and Sollecito, or anyone else involved in the case). Black Kite (t) (c) 00:01, 14 July 2010 (UTC)

I write: "This article is supposed to be about what reliable secondary sources WP:SECONDARY ("random commentators" as you put it) say about it"

Black Kite writes: "No, it isn't. It's about stating facts, sourced to reliable sources. The opinion of secondary sources is utterly irrelevant unless it is sourcing a notable fact."

WP:SECONDARY: "Wikipedia articles should be based on reliable, published secondary sources and, to a lesser extent, on tertiary sources."

WP:RS: "Wikipedia articles should be based on reliable, published sources, making sure that all majority and significant minority views that have appeared in reliable, published sources are covered"

So Black Kite is flat wrong. Wikipedia says views (AKA opinions) of secondary sources go in and Black Kite says they don't.

The fact is that the view of virtually all the reliable secondary sources relevant to this case is that it is notable because of the question of whether AK got a fair trial. They question the quality of the police investigation and the Perugian tribunal. This includes people like Peter van Sant, John Q. Kelly, Doug Preston, Steve Moore, Judy Bachrach, Sen Maria Cantwell, Paul Ciolino, and Tim Egan. Their "views" have been broadcast throughout the world. The question of a fair trial is approached in each book.

The question of Rudy Guede's criminal acts in the time preceding the crime is central to arguments made by all these people and has been supported by so many reliable sources that it must go in even if he didn't have a criminal conviction. There are also WP:BLP issues for Amanda Knox that bear on the issue of the coverage of Guede.

Let me also speak to a flaw that I see in Wikipedia's rules. We need a procedure mandating the recusal of non-neutral administrators from administrative responsibilities.PhanuelB (talk) 12:34, 14 July 2010 (UTC)

The question of Rudy Guede's criminal acts in the time preceding the crime is central to arguments made by all these people and has been supported by so many reliable sources that it must go in even if he didn't have a criminal conviction. There are also WP:BLP issues for Amanda Knox that bear on the issue of the coverage of Guede.

This is what I think also, the defense theory was the lone wolf scenario and Rudy's criminal acts are crucial for this theory and were therefore brought up in court. There are a lot of jornalists, experts and other people who believe this scenario to be more credible than the one presented by the prosecution. I wonder if it doesn't violate any Wiki-Rules if the very important facts of the criminal acts leading many observers to believe in the lone wolf theory and make it therefore a significant minority (or even majority) view in this case, are just deleted. This view would be totally disregarded if those criminal acts disappeared from the article.--Aruu (talk) 12:57, 14 July 2010 (UTC)

We need a procedure mandating the recusal of non-neutral administrators from administrative responsibilities - For the record, Black Kite hasn't performed any administrative duties on the article. However, allow m[e to again warn all participants that this kind of grandstanding and sniping at other editors will not be tolerated. Editors unable to argue content without personalizing it will be removed from the discussion. MLauba ^(Talk) 13:24, 14 July 2010 (UTC)

Indeed. For the record, I have not used admin tools except protection on this article at all (and that was prevent an ongoing edit war), and have only edited content in order to remove unsourced statements. I am completely neutral here - I have no real interest in the subject except my duties as an administrator to keep the article as NPOV as possible. Talking of POV, can I ask, PhanuelB, if you are the same PhanuelB who has posted hundreds of times to dozens of forums agitating the case for Knox's innocence? (Google search). If so, you cannot under any circumstances claim that other editors are non-neutral here and frankly you probably shouldn't be editing the article at all. Black Kite (t) (c) 14:27, 14 July 2010 (UTC)

Aruu and Phanuel, could we just pause a second, because I'm not clear about what it is you are asking for. I'm pretty sure I diagree with it in any case, but I feel I need to know preceisely what I am disagreeing with.

There's material currently in the article about witnesses testimony which suggest Guede may have been involved in theft/burglary. But you think there should be more material about his character and prior history that should go in because it was brought up at trial and supports a notable theory as to Knox's innocence (note: we would at least need clear sourcing that it does support such a theory, otherwise that would be SYN). Is this right?

Do you think this additional stuff needs to have been brought up at trial, or can it be anything that has been reported?

Do you think the same sort of treatment should be given to Knox and Sollecito? There is a lot of material out there that would support what we might call the "sex-crazed, violence fetishist drug-fiend" theory, which is trashy, but certainly notable, and a lot of it was brought up at trial.

If you don't think the treatment should be the same for all the defendants, what's your reasoning for this? --FormerIP (talk) 13:39, 14 July 2010 (UTC)

Since FormerIp asks what others are asking for. Here is an example of what I think should be said.

At the time of the murder Rudy Guede had no previous criminal convictions. However, in the weeks prior to the murder he had participated in a series of criminal acts which police knew about but for reasons that remain unclear did not act upon. In three separate incidents prior to the murder there were significant similarities to what was observed at the crime scene. The details of these incidents would form a major part of arguments made by lawyers for Knox and Sollecito at trial that Guede committed the murder alone.

In a deposition presented at trial Cristian Tramontano stated that in early September 2007 he had caught Guede prowling around inside his house late at night. Guede brandished a knife in his escape but did not take anything or injure anyone. The incident, also witnessed by Tramontano’s girlfriend, was described to police but was not followed up upon.

In a separate incident only five days before the murder, Guede was caught alone inside a nursery school in Milan as the school owner, Maria del Prato, arrived in the early morning. Guede had taken a set of keys and a large knife from the school’s kitchen which he told police he needed for protection. He was also found to be in possession of a laptop computer and cell phone that police determined had been stolen from a Perugian law office a few weeks earlier.

The Perugian Law office break-in would be compared to the crime scene because the entry was through an elevated window that had been broken with a rock. Guede claimed that he had bought the cell phone and laptop at a railway station.

It is all completely sourced using references on this page.PhanuelB (talk) 14:50, 14 July 2010 (UTC)

So does that represent the sum total of what you would like to see added to the article, or is there more? (ie if you achieve the above wording or something reasonably close to it, would you then be satisfied?).

And what about material relating to the other defendants (eg Knox's sexual history, reputation, drugs use and police record)? Are you in favour of adding this type of material? If not, how do you justify the article having this type of negative material about Guede but not Knox or Sollecito, in terms of NPOV? --FormerIP (talk) 15:11, 14 July 2010 (UTC)

@ FormerIP, if you follow the preceding discussion Black Kite said this:

But Guede's criminal record (or lack of it) before the actual murder are completely irrelevant to the actual crime.

and this:

If Guede had a reliably sourced background of being convicted for violent crimes, for example, there would be a reasonable justification for mentioning it. But in this case that isn't the case, and there is dispute about what exactly his prior behaviour was anyway. Per WP:BLP, we're far better off staying well away from that issue (exactly as we would be for Knox and Sollecito, or anyone else involved in the case).

So he was voicing the opinion the criminal acts shouldn't be brought up at all, that's what I was reacting to. I think it does belong into the article, I do consider it important in this case for the reasons I've mentioned above. And I don't think it's fair to say I want to neglect similar behaviour by Raffaele or Amanda, I clearly stated this above:

If there is any knowledge of criminal or violent behaviour by Amanda or Raffaele, I think it should be included in the article, but properly sourced … --Aruu (talk) 22:30, 13 July 2010 (UTC)--Aruu (talk) 20:33, 14 July 2010 (UTC)

Do you think we should go back to Knox's weird behavior at the police station, the story she wrote on her homepage (myspace I guess it was), her police experience while hosting a party etc.? Should we add Solecito's "fetish" or collection of (flip-)knifes? Should we add all their video recordings they made for Halloween? I could go on and on with this silly list of undue for this article But we don't want to paint "anyone" of the accused/convicted in any good or bad light. That's what neutrality is all about.TMCk (talk) 21:54, 14 July 2010 (UTC)

• BTW, this section is actually about the FoA page. Maybe we can back on track here?TMCk (talk) 21:58, 14 July 2010 (UTC)

I like that, I get critisized for supposedly unfair, not balanced treatment of all three. If I state, criminal or violent by Amanda or Raffaele can go into the article as well, I get critisized too. Some should scrutinize the way they debate here.

Of course the weird behaviour of Amanda can and should go in, after all that's the reason they suspected her and it was essential to the prosecution's case. The story on the internet was a school assignment, how is this criminal of violent behaviour? Of course you can bring in Raffaele's collection of knifes, this is interesting, yet it's no criminal behaviour. Videos made for Halloween are neither violent nor criminal. Her experience with the police while holding a party, of course that can go into the article if one wants it to, this was brought up in court as evidence of her criminal nature. But it has to be factual, she didn't throw stones or something. Smoking marijhuana, and having an active sex-life, is that on the same level as threatening somebody with a knife and burglary?

If there is any knowledge of criminal or violent behaviour by Amanda or Raffaele, I think it should be included in the article, but properly sourced … this was partly ironic, partly serious anyway. Because there are no criminal or violent acts in their past, except for that party-thing, which is laughable, but clearly can go in, as it was brought up in court, the same with the weird behaviour and everything else, like I stated above. --Aruu (talk) 22:53, 14 July 2010 (UTC)

Correct me if I'm misinterpreting you but you seem to acknowledge those things as trivia and yet you would like to see those in the article even so WP rules tell us not to do so? I'm starting to think you'd like (a lot?) of tabloid trash [that's how I personally call it] to be merged into the article. I'm certainly against this kind of "trashing" of any defendant in this case.TMCk (talk) 00:39, 15 July 2010 (UTC)

• PS: We're still not back to the title issue. Still off topic.TMCk (talk) 00:43, 15 July 2010 (UTC)

This sort of "trivia" was half of the prosecution's case … Amanda's somewhat weird behaviour after the murder was crucial in this case; the reason, they suspected her, in my mind the only reason she is in prison even. This party-thing doesn't hurt or trash Amanda, it trashes the prosecution for thinking this is evidence of criminal behaviour. Or that smoking marijhuana makes one a murderer or having an active sex-life. What trashes the defendants (convicts) on this site is, when users want to take out the parts about Rudy's prior criminal behaviour. Or if the strongest evidence in favour of the defendants (convicts); that there was no forensics of Amanda found in the victim's room is here totally unnecessarily watered down with "Apart from the knife" which doesn't belong into this segment at all, or some users even like to take it out alltogether, because they think, to say the mere truth, there wasn't any forensic evidence of Amanda found in this room, makes her look innocent. It's simply the truth though … So that's what trashes them (treats them unfairly) in this article. A ticket for a loud party mentioned doesn't trash them at all. --Aruu (talk) 12:57, 15 July 2010 (UTC)

Reliable secondary sources are clear on that there is nothing in the background of AK or RS to suggest they would have been involved in the crime -- exact opposite of Guede BTW. Reliable secondary sources (Judge Heavey in the TLC documentary, Tim Egan) are crystal clear that police participated in the release of false information to the tabloid press. Such false negative coverage which Italian law does not even prevent jurors from seeing during trial (yes secondary sources are saying that) is not covered in this article. This is yet another reason that this article is not NPOV.PhanuelB (talk) 14:23, 15 July 2010 (UTC)

Whereas other secondary sources report on the background of the defendants, sometimes in quite a lurid tone, and contradict those sources on this matter of opinion. The fact that your sources feel it is necessary to deny the relevance of all the gossip etc, adds to the case for its notability, rather than detracting from it. The information may not have come from the police (it mostly seems to have come from Googling and talking to people the defendants knew), that is also just someone's opinion. --FormerIP (talk) 14:27, 15 July 2010 (UTC)

But pure gossip is different then for example Raffaele's knife collection, Amanda's "weird" behaviour (cartwheel, etc), the loud party-ticket or Rudy's criminal acts for that matter, those things are verifiable, gossip isn't. Gossip clearly doesn't belong here, but verifiable facts which were brought up in court can be reported, that's the case for all three defendants. --Aruu (talk) 16:05, 15 July 2010 (UTC)

"Gossip" is just my characterisation. AFAICT all the information we are talking about is to some extent verifiable. But equally, AFAICT, none of it forms part of the basis on which the defendants in the case were convicted and none of it is directly relevant to the topic of the article. News sources may have made reference to it, but we don't have to follow suit, because we are not engaged in journalism. --FormerIP (talk) 16:55, 15 July 2010 (UTC)

I totally disagree, the cartwheel was brought up in court by the prosecution, the same with the party-ticket and raffaele' knife collection, whereas Rudy's criminal acts were brought up as important evidence by the defense, it was part of the trial and can therefore be reported on Wikipedia. Especially Rudy's prior criminal act's were an absolutely crucial point for the defense's theory. On the other hand for the prosecution Amanda's "behaviour" was the reason for their suspicion, they even once said (Giobbi, exactly) they didn't need to do any additional investigation to know she is guilty. Why this shouldn't be important is beyond me. All those many observers and experts who believe in their innocence believe this to be the only reason they're in jail even. However, wheather one believes in their guilt or innocence, this "behaviour-issue" is clearly important to understand the case.--Aruu (talk) 17:22, 15 July 2010 (UTC)

No it isn't. A lot of information was mentioned in trials, but not all of it is important. Some (though I don't think all) of the information we are talking about was brought up at trial, but in all cases (AFAICT) it was not put forward by the prosectution as a part of their case (the cartwheels, for example were mentioned in testimony, I beleive, but the prosecution did not seek to make anything of it), and it was not taken into account by the judge. The only thing that was part of the defence case was the alleged theft/burglary by Guede (which is already referred to in the article), but even this was dismissed by the court as not relevant. --FormerIP (talk) 17:43, 15 July 2010 (UTC)

Wikipedia isn't the speaking tube of the court, it has to present all sides. Of course the court considered the "Rudy-Burglary"-Theory (his prior burglaries / break-in's were crucial fot that theory) to be irrelevant, they didn't consider any of the defense's case relevant. Still the defense arguments are mentioned on this site. And like I said, many journalist's, expert's, obsevers and the defense believe the burglar-theory to be all but irrelevant. Amanda's behaviour is clearly important, even if she didn't get convicted because of just that, it set everything in motion and they might not even be in jail if it weren't for it. And for the knife collection and the loud party; I don't consider it important either, I never said, it needs to be in the article. Merely if somebody thinks it's necessairy to balance the mention of Rudy's criminal past out. Rudy's criminal acts clearly need to be mentioned.--Aruu (talk) 18:16, 15 July 2010 (UTC)

Murder_of_Meredith_Kercher#Fast_track_trial - secondary sources needed

WP:BLP gives strong indications that trial documents should be used with care where there are WP:BLP issues. It does say that court documents can be used to augement secondary sources, and I think this is going to be appropriate in this article at times (for example, because we have secondary sources that conflict, and so court docs may therefore be the most reliable source for certain facts).

However, the section about Rudy Guede's fast-track trial is almost entirely reliant on the Michelli report. Much of the same information is probably contained in secondary sources. Can I suggest that editors familiar with the secondary sources used in the article might try to relace some of the Michelli cites with cites to newspaper reports etc?

I'll try to do some of this myself, but I may also decide to remove material if it does not seem easy to find secondary sources backing it up or establishing its notability.

Cheers. --FormerIP (talk) 11:24, 15 July 2010 (UTC)

NB Since this section is about Guede's trial, souces should be reporting on that trial. Sources which, for example, predate the trial or are about the K&S trial are probably not suitable for the section, IMO. --FormerIP (talk) 11:57, 15 July 2010 (UTC)

Front and center here for anyone who wants to speak with authority on this subject is to understand where the information is coming from. Two trial opinions are available to the public. The rest of the trial record is not available to the public. Some of these trial documents, carefully selected by the prosecution, have been provided to favored journalists. Much of the newspaper reporting on the case is based on eye-witness accounts of journalists who were in the courtroom.

The Michelli and Massei reports are not reliable sources because they are the subject of the article and because they have been so heavily criticized by the real reliable secondary sources which have been banned from this article -- for now. On a point by point basis points of fact referenced in the two documents may be reliable. Always the article can say what the courts opinion was.

Issues related to Guede's fast track trial are all but irrelevant. Nobody's here to read about his trial except possibly for the bizarre incident where some judge cut his sentence because he thought he'd apologized -- which he hadn't. Information about him as it relates to the innocence of AK and RS is the only information about him that's important. PhanuelB (talk) 12:50, 15 July 2010 (UTC)

I think one reason why the section on Guede's trial is so dependent on the Michelli report is that the trial was held in closed session, so there was no direct news reporting from the court. Contemporary news reports were based only on "leaks", so may be unreliable: subsequent reports presumably use Michelli as their source.

I'm struggling to understand PhanuelB's assertion that the Michelli and Massei reports are unreliable. Surely, they are a record of the decision-making process which the judges adopted, so I don't really see how "real reliable secondary sources" could challenge them. Neither do I understand the assertion that issues related to Guede's fast track trial are all but irrelevant. Surely, in an article about a murder, the trial and conviction of one of the accused is totally relevant? Bluewave (talk) 14:13, 15 July 2010 (UTC)

Suffice to say I agree with the points you make, Bluewave.

The reason I think secondary sources are needed is that this appears to be policy (WP:BLP). I don't think we can have a whole section so heavily reliant on one primary source. The logic (I would say) is that we don't know from the Michelli report taken alone what details are significant enough for us to include - they should be featured in RSs in order to pass WP:N.

You are right that secondary sources may be less reliable, but where a secondary source contains something inconsistent with the Michelli report, we can use both and report the version of events per the report.

I also don't think it would be any great loss if the section in question lost a few sentences here and there. --FormerIP (talk) 14:20, 15 July 2010 (UTC)

Fair enough! Bluewave (talk) 14:27, 15 July 2010 (UTC)

c Effectively PhanuelB is saying "we need more information on Guede's possible criminal past because it makes our audience think that it is more likely Guede was the only participant, thus casting doubt on Knox and Sollecito's guilt". You don't need to be psychic to work that out. More WP:SYNTH, in other words. Black Kite (t) (c) 17:13, 15 July 2010 (UTC)

It ain't synthesis because it's what the reliable secondary sources are saying.PhanuelB (talk) 17:31, 15 July 2010 (UTC)

Bluewave writes:

I'm struggling to understand PhanuelB's assertion that the Michelli and Massei reports are unreliable. Surely, they are a record of the decision-making process which the judges adopted, so I don't really see how "real reliable secondary sources" could challenge them.

You don't see how reliable secondary sources could challenge two judicial decisions? It follows that Wikipedia can never write an article about how the public challenged an unjust legal decision. Such judicial mistakes happen in all countries; people pay attention to it and Wikipedia writes about it. Reliable secondary sources are calling this a "kangaroo court", "public lynching", and "a railroad job." This information is being carefully kept out of this article and that is a violation of NPOV.PhanuelB (talk) 17:44, 15 July 2010 (UTC)

Phanuel, please, please, please try to keep on topic. It would be nice just to have one or two discussions where the matter raised is addressed and dealt with and we move on, rather than veering off every single time into general speculation and opinion about the terrible injustice of the case. If you think the Massei and Michelli reports are unreliable, please start a new section to discuss that.--FormerIP (talk) 17:50, 15 July 2010 (UTC)

I can only echo that. Seriously, PhanuelB, if you continue on this course of trying to agitate to insert non-encyclopedic material into the article, whilst continuing your attacks on other editors (and yes, repeatedly claiming with no evidence whatsoever that other editors are trying to present a POV is a personal attack), there will only be one result. And I seriously suggest you read WP:SYNTH because you clearly don't understand it at all at the moment. I explained in my posting above how trying to "maximise" Guede's alleged criminal record would be seen as synthesis. I further suggest you read WP:RS, because you don't understand what reliable secondary sources are - they are not the opinions of various commentators. We don't present opinions as fact; we may mention that particularly notable opinions exist, but none of the opinions you present appear to be such. Even op-ed pieces in reliable sources are not suitable to source contentious material, and certainly not opinion pieces that may or may not be neutral. Black Kite (t) (c) 18:05, 15 July 2010 (UTC)

Apart from the knife

Previously (I just made an edit), the article said, "Apart from the knife, there was no forensic evidence, such as DNA, hair, fibre, blood or skin, directly indicating that Knox had been in the bedroom where Meredith Kercher was sexually assaulted and murdered." I disagree with the inclusion of "Apart from the knife" in that statement. I edited it out once, but it was reverted. The thing is that the knife does not indicate that Knox was in Kercher's bedroom during or after the sexual assault. I tried simply removing the statement, but the change was reverted. Even if you accept that the DNA on the knife was from Kercher (although that is disputed), there was no evidence that it occurred at the time of the murder. The knife itself has no evidence linking it to the bedroom, only the disputed DNA that might link it to Kercher. I've tried another revision, better explaining the knife and how it links Knox and Kercher. The rest of that statement is simply a rewording of what is said in the reference. The "[a]part from the knife" is a rewording that confused the original meaning. The original statement does not make the claim that the knife linked Knox to the bedroom. My (new) revised version, "The only forensic evidence linking Knox and Kercher is a knife (found in Sollecito's apartment), but Knox had legitimate reasons to have touched the knife (explaining her DNA, e.g. using it to prepare dinner at Sollecito's[47]) and the evidence identifying Kercher's DNA is disputed." Mdfst13 (talk) 16:24, 1 July 2010 (UTC)

Oh, thank god. Zlykinskyja is back. I missed you dear. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 173.25.240.217 (talk) 00:02, 2 July 2010 (UTC)

The DNA on the knife is mentioned in the citation already included, so no additonal citation needs to be included. The question of whether any DNA evidence links K to the murder scene is one of POV. Per the decision of the court, it does, because a murder weapon was found with her DNA on it. There is an alternative POV, which goes contrary to the findings in the case, that this was not the murder weapon and so no link is established. However, per WP:NPOV and WP:RS#Statements_of_opinion (the source is an op-ed), the article should not state this as if it were factual. --FormerIP (talk) 11:12, 2 July 2010 (UTC)

The citation is not needed to establish the presence of DNA on the knife. The citation is required to establish that the knife indicates that Knox was in the room (which is what the current version of the sentence claims). The citation for that sentence clearly states that there was no evidence connecting Knox to the room. If the author had felt that the knife connected Knox to the room, then they would not have been able to make the unequivocal statement that they made. I don't believe that anyone can find a valid secondary source claiming that the knife established presence in the room. Thus, any claim that it does is either original research or synthesis.

The knife was not the murder weapon (as per *both* the prosecution and the defense theories). It is clearly established that the fatal wound was caused by a different weapon. Thus the prosecution theory that there were two knives, one of which made the fatal wound (and another wound) and the other of which made the indeterminate cut. The defense theory is that a single knife made all three wounds, and the forensic evidence is consistent with that (although it does not establish it; two knives or even three could have been used).

Also, even if you accept that the knife was used to cut Kercher, there is nothing about the forensic evidence relating to the knife that indicates that she was cut by that knife in that room. The knife was not found in Kercher's room but in Sollecito's apartment. The knife does not link Knox to the room. Any statement about the knife should be moved out of the sentence, "There was no forensic evidence, such as DNA, hair, fibre, blood or skin, directly indicating that Knox had been in the bedroom where Meredith Kercher was sexually assaulted and murdered." and into its own sentence. Mdfst13 (talk) 18:56, 2 July 2010 (UTC)

The relevant phrase there is "I don't believe that...". What you do or do not believe is irrelevant to a neutral encyclopedia article. What your theories about the murder contain, are irrelevant. We only report on the facts about the case (i.e. what happened during the trial, and the result of trial and/or possible appeals). Anything else is synthesis. As I've said to PhanuelB above, if you want a forum to expand on your theories about Knox's innocence or otherwise, there are plenty of venues on the Internet. Wikipedia is not one of them. Black Kite (t) (c) 19:38, 2 July 2010 (UTC)

I agree with this. That's why I want the "Apart from the knife" removed, as it is synthesis. The knife does not indicate that Knox was in the room. The source citation does not include that conclusion (in fact, the source was claiming the opposite, that there was no forensic evidence indicating that Knox was in the room). Either someone should demonstrate a valid secondary source that explains how the knife indicates that Knox was in the room, or the synthesized conclusion that the knife indicates that Knox was in the room should be removed. Lacking such a citation, we should remove the conclusion about Knox's guilt or otherwise and only report the facts. The facts are that there was no forensic evidence in the room that indicated that Knox was present. The lack of such evidence does not make Knox innocent. It is purely a fact to be considered.

I've already said that I'm fine with people reporting separately the existence of the knife. However, as things are, it's confusing. Look at FormerIP's statement that the knife was the murder weapon. That statement is false (by all theories of the crime, including those of both the prosecution and the defense in the Knox case), but statements like "[a]part from the knife" lead to that kind of confusion. The confusing portion of the statement should be removed. The knife should be discussed separately, either in a different sentence or a different paragraph. The sentence to which it is attached has nothing whatsoever to do with the knife.

Another possible alternate version: "There was no forensic evidence, such as DNA, hair, fibre, blood or skin, directly indicating that Knox had been in the bedroom where Meredith Kercher was sexually assaulted and murdered. All forensic evidence that was presented against Knox came from outside that room, for example, the knife (see above) that was found in Sollecito's apartment." This removes the synthesized conclusion that the knife proves presence in the room while retaining the explicit mentioning of the knife as forensic evidence. This statement reduces the confusion rather than amplifying it, as the current statement does. It reports the facts, rather than someone's synthesized conclusions. As stands, the current statement is simply non-factual. It should be revised to conform with the actual facts. Mdfst13 (talk) 21:47, 2 July 2010 (UTC)

I reverted your edit, because I think that:

The only forensic evidence linking Knox and Kercher is a knife (found in Sollecito's apartment), but Knox had legitimate reasons to have touched the knife (explaining her DNA, e.g. using it to prepare dinner at Sollecito's)[omissis]

is all but neutral. It looked like yet another attempt at soapboaxing for Knox's innocence. I think that the previous version:

At trial, Knox's lawyers argued that she used knives for cooking at Sollecito's apartment.

although meaning the same thing is far more balanced.

As far as the "apart from the knife" thing goes, I really have no strong opinion and will be happy to go with consensus. Salvio ( ^{Let's talk 'bout it!}) 22:28, 2 July 2010 (UTC)

Mdfst, I think you're looking at the question the opposite way round to me. The source is an op-ed, so we need to treat it with caution in the first place (I think a lot of editors would be in favour of "don't use it at all, except for statements about the opinion of the author). Leaving that aside, though, what the author says, to paraphrase is: "There is no physical evidence linking Knox to the crime. Okay, there is the knife, but I'm discounting that". What is currently in the article is a fair version of that. It removes the editorial emphasis an POV of the original ("Niente, nada, nihil"), but that is a totally appropriate thing to do. What would not be appropriate would be to use the source to back up a misleading statement along the lines of "there is no physical evidence linking Knox to the crime", which is a misleading 50% of the relevant detail in the source. BTW, indicating that the knife links Knox to the crime is not synthesis or someone's original research, it is the finding of the court at the end of the trial. --FormerIP (talk) 00:18, 3 July 2010 (UTC)

PS I'd be totally in favour of revoving the sentence altogether. There is far too much he said she said in this article. --FormerIP (talk) 00:19, 3 July 2010 (UTC)

I'm not suggesting saying "there is no physical evidence linking Knox to the crime", even though it may be true. It's certainly disputed (obviously the prosecution says that there is and other sources say that it is not). I'm suggesting saying, something along the lines of "Limited physical evidence against Knox was introduced at trial, none of it was from the room where the body was found." This removes the questions of whether or not the evidence links Knox to the scene, as that is disputed. It retains the notice that there was no physical evidence of Knox's presence in the bedroom. I disagree with the statement that the current version is a fair summary. The current version implies that the knife is direct physical evidence linking Knox to the bedroom. However, the knife was not found in the bedroom. There is no forensic evidence indicating that the knife was ever in the bedroom. There is only a police theory, that says that Kercher touched the knife (disputed) near the time of the murder (disputed) and it in fact made one of the cuts on Kercher's neck (disputed). The only part of that theory that is not disputed by Knox's lawyers is that the murder occurred in the bedroom, and Guede may be disputing that. I'm fine with including that theory (and I think that it is already made elsewhere), so long as it includes the defense criticisms.

Without the "[a]part from the knife", we'd have that anyway, as the knife has multiple paragraphs of discussion. If you are insistent that that's not enough, then a new sentence should replace "[a]part from the knife" that eliminates the claim that the knife in some way establishes Knox's presence in the room and simply claims the knife as physical evidence that the prosecution theory used to link Knox to the crime. You haven't explained what you don't like about my more recent suggestion (with some slight revisions), "There was no forensic evidence, such as DNA, hair, fibre, blood or skin, directly indicating that Knox had been in Meredith Kercher's bedroom. The forensic evidence that was presented against Knox came from outside that room, for example, the knife that was found in Sollecito's apartment (see above)." That removes any attempt at dismissing the knife (what the cited source does) and only lists it as evidence used by the prosecution, without making any judgment on its value as evidence. It takes out the "he said, she said" opinions and leaves only the facts. Mdfst13 (talk) 17:05, 3 July 2010 (UTC)

"Limited physical evidence against Knox was introduced at trial" - this is your opinion. Who is to say what should be classed as limited? Clearly, there was enough to secure a conviction.

Knox's connection to the knife is not "just a police theory", it is the conclusion of the court.

I don't like any version which is slanted. There was enough physical evidence against Knox to convict, so to distort facts to try to make it look like the evidence was deficient is not acceptable.

You may think that you are just highlighting a true fact. I am not comparing you to one on a moral level, but you seem to be employing the same logic that holocaust deniers use when they point to the relative lack of physical evidence for gas chambers. The misleading implication is that there is a gap in the case, which there isn't. --FormerIP (talk) 21:06, 3 July 2010 (UTC)

"…The misleading implication is that there is a gap in the case, which there isn't."

That seems to me to be a personal conclusion and a strong statement for someone who doesn’t want to slant and distort the facts. There are many who say that Knox and Sollecito were convicted despite a lack of enough evidence. If we are going to stay neutral, how can we state as a fact either that the evidence was or was not sufficient for a fair conviction; or whether there is a "gap in the case"? Kermugin (talk) 03:15, 4 July 2010 (UTC)

Whether there is or isn't a gap in the case is irrelevant. Unless we can cite reliable sources proving that there is, or isn't, we can't go anywhere near that type of opinion - it would be clear synthesis. There are many venues on the Internet for speculation of that type - an encyclopedia is not the place. Black Kite (t) (c) 11:55, 4 July 2010 (UTC)

Replying to FormerIP's post above Kermugin's:

Who is disputing Knox's connection to the knife? I'm saying there is no forensic evidence of Knox's connection to the *ROOM*. What don't you like about "There was no forensic evidence, such as DNA, hair, fibre, blood or skin, directly indicating that Knox had been in Meredith Kercher's bedroom. The forensic evidence that was presented against Knox came from outside that room, for example, the knife that was found in Sollecito's apartment (see above)." What is slanted about it?

"Apart from the knife" is totally unacceptable as an attachment to that sentence. It is not factual, much less NPOV. It implies that the knife in some way links Knox to the room. It is especially egregious since it directly contradicts the cited source. What is your proposed alternative? I've suggested three now (four if one includes simply removing the misleading words). Mdfst13 (talk) 03:44, 4 July 2010 (UTC)

If the section is that problematic, and runs risk of violating WP:NPOV, WP:NOR and WP:SYNTH, the obvious answer would be to remove it completely. Black Kite (t) (c) 11:57, 4 July 2010 (UTC)

I'd be totally fine with taking it out altogether.

Mdfst, the slant lies in giving a misdirection to the reader. A statement such as "There was no forensic evidence..." appears designed to create doubt about the verdict in the case. Whilst it is appropriate for the article to reference the doubts of some commentators, directly trying to lay out the defence case is not appropriate. --FormerIP (talk) 21:33, 4 July 2010 (UTC)

Black Kite, why not just fix the statement to be factual? It requires splitting into two statements, as one talks about evidence of Knox appearing in the room, see http://abcnews.go.com/WN/AmandaKnox/amanda-knox-murder-trial-evidence/story?id=9113616&page=2 for another reference. The other talks about other forensic evidence, specifically the knife. The knife is clearly forensic evidence, but just as clearly, it isn't forensic proof of presence in that particular room (what it does prove is highly disputed). It's only the conjoining of the two statements that makes it synthetic and non-factual. I remain fine with exploring alternative wordings. I have suggested several, which would seem to address the complaints that I've seen. I still don't understand why the current wording is unique in addressing such concerns. I would like someone else to take a try at a wording that fixes the factual issue and retains the statement about the lack of evidence in the room. Mdfst13 (talk) 16:36, 5 July 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Mdfst13; that sentence sounds kinda strange. I wouldn't say it's totally false, because if one believes the knife indicates guilt, it also indicates presence in the room, since that's where the murder took place.

But it really sounds almost surreal, like this you get the feeling the knife proves Amanda's guilt, and if that's already proven, then of course she was in the victim's room at the time of the murder. But the knife is highly disputed and therefore could be totally misleading here. The rest of the sentence after "apart from the knife" becomes almost irrelevant because the knife ("the murder weapon"!) is so powerful. Like, how is it relevant if there were no forensics of Amanda found in the victim's room, if the knife indicates she killed her all the same? So the point of that insert seems to me almost like an attempt to make these facts of the missing forensics in the victim's room meaningless, when they are actually quite powerful.

I see no need to mention the knife in this paragraph again, I suggest, instead of "indicating presence", just write what has been found or not found in the room, it's clearer then. Like this;

There was no forensic evidence of Amanda, such as DNA, hair, fibre, blood or skin, found in the bedroom where Meredith Kercher was sexually assaulted and murdered.[47] The only fingerprints of Knox which were found anywhere in the apartment were those on a glass in the kitchen sink. Knox's fingerprints were not found in Kercher's bedroom, nor her own bedroom.[48][12]

I know lots of people don't like that, but this is actually a fact, and an important one; there were no forensics of Amanda found in the victim's room, to water it down with the "apart from the knife"-part; I don't see a legitimate reason to insert that here, when the highly disputed knife is alreay mentioned and everyone can decide for themselves if that proves or indicates guilt and/or presence in the room. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Aruu (talk • contribs) 20:24, 5 July 2010 (UTC)

And yet again - I think this is the sixth time I've mentioned this on this talkpage - people need to read WP:SYNTH. No wonder I had to ask for this page to be FP'd today. Black Kite (t) (c) 20:50, 5 July 2010 (UTC)

The argument that there were no forensics of Amanda found in the room, is a nonsensical statement. Her DNA was found on the murder weapon. And Knox was convicted of Murder. You're not seriously saying that the murder weapon was never in the room? Because that is a ridiculous statement. The statement your trying to enter, is you trying to argue for Amanda Knox being innocent, and Wikipedia, for the millionth time, is not the place to argue for an imprisoned persons innocence. That is not what Wikipedia is for. Find another place to do it. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 173.25.240.217 (talk) 02:56, 8 July 2010 (UTC)

By saying "murder weapon" you're arguing for their guilt, we don't know if it was the murder weapon. There were respected experts who said otherwise… — There were no forensics found IN the room, the knife wasn't found in the room. If it is in fact the murder weapon, of course it has been in the room at some point. If it isn't the murder weapon on the other hand, it has never been in the room. Aruu (talk) 20:20, 9 July 2010 (UTC) (I'm not allowed to edit my own comment?)

She was found guilty by the judges in the court in Perugia. This is what wikipedia does, it reports what happened. The judges report, said the knife was the murder weapon. I'm sorry you don't think so, but wikipedia is not the place to argue what you think. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 173.25.240.217 (talk) 23:29, 9 July 2010 (UTC)

It's quite the other way around (you're arguing what you think). If you think, the facts are what the prosecution said and the judges and jurors concluded, then the article could just simply say: Amanda and Raffaele together with Rudy killed Meredith in a Sex Game gone wrong under the influence of drugs on November second. Because that's what the judges said. There wouldn't be any need to include what the defense was arguing. Wikipedia has to be neutral, it has to report what they were accused and convicted of. What the prosecution was arguing and the defense side of the story. — And I didn't say it isn't the murder weapon, I said we don't know, if it is the murder weapon. --Aruu (talk) 13:39, 10 July 2010 (UTC)

The facts on the ground in Perugia, is that it was the Murder weapon. That's what the judges decided. Wikipedia is an enclyclopedia. It reports facts, that are decided by others. You are not free to insert your personal opinion into an article. If Amanda Knox's conviction is reversed on appeal, then that will the fact. But this is not the page to argue for her innocence. That's one of the most basic editing facts about Wikipedia. Wikipedia is not the place for righting great wrongs. Wikipedia is not the place for arguing the innocence of prisoners. You can find a dozen websites on the internet where you can do that for Knox. You can't do it at Wikipedia. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 173.25.240.217 (talk) 15:49, 10 July 2010 (UTC) Righting Great Wrongs Shortcuts: WP: GREATWRONGS WP:RGW See also: Wikipedia:Advocacy Wikipedia is a popular site and appears high in the search engine rankings. You might think that it is a great place to set the record straight and Right Great Wrongs, but that’s not the case. We can record the righting of great wrongs, but we can’t ride the crest of the wave because we can only report that which is verifiable from reliable secondary sources, giving appropriate weight to the balance of informed opinion: what matters is not truth but verifiability. So, if you want to

Expose a popular artist as a child molester, or Vindicate a murder convict you believe to be innocent, or Spread the word about a theory/hypothesis/belief/cure-all herb that has been unfairly neglected and suppressed by the scholarly community, on Wikipedia, you’ll have to wait until it’s been picked up in mainstream journals, or get that to happen first. Wikipedia is not a publisher of original thought or original research. "Wikipedia is behind the ball - that is we don't lead, we follow - let reliable sources make the novel connections and statements and find NPOV ways of presenting them if needed."[2] —Preceding unsigned comment added by 173.25.240.217 (talk) 15:56, 10 July 2010 (UTC)

I've no intention in prolonging this discussion, I've read you preceding contributions and it says enough for me. Your interpretation of what Wikipedia's role should be, is contradicted by the "Meredith Kercher"-article itself … --Aruu (talk) 20:16, 10 July 2010 (UTC)

The simple fact is that Wikipedia is not the forum to argue for the innocence of Amanda Knox. And there is no question about Wikipedia's rules in this regard. If you do it, I expect you'll be banned from editing as all the previous editors that tried to do it were. Good Luck to you though. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 173.25.240.217 (talk) 21:07, 10 July 2010 (UTC)

I'm sure this was just an honest mistake by MLauba and you can reinstate your edit. BTW, please remember to sign your posts.The Magnificent Clean-keeper (talk) 16:33, 9 July 2010 (UTC)

Apologies for that, from the diff, I read it as if you had edited someone else's comment. My mistake. MLauba ^(Talk) 16:53, 9 July 2010 (UTC)

The "simple fact" is that Wikipedia is a forum to accurately record what reliable secondary sources are saying. Reliable secondary sources are calling this a "kangaroo court", "railroad job", and "public lynching." The following are reliable secondary sources which have been banned from this article:

• TLC Documentary w/ Judge Heavey Maria del Prato
• CBS 48 Hours A Long way from Home Ciolino Preston
• CBS 48 Hours American Girl Italian Nighmare Ciolino, Preston
• CNN Larry King Live 5-Dec-09 with John Q. Kelly Judy Bachrach
• CNN Larry King Live 16-Oct-09 with John Q. Kelly
• CNN HLN W/ Wolf Blitzer Judy Bachrach
• CNN W/ Anderson Cooper Judy Bachrach Doug Preston
• New York Times: Tim Egan articles

Each and every one of the sources above put the Perugian tribunal on trial as their main topic. The CNN broadcasts go to 200 countries with potential viewership of 150 million. Larry King often gets 5-10 million viewers. The books in the case have probably sold in the range of 20-30,000 copies if that -- does anyone know? There is no NPOV here. There has been success in the past removing the accounts of those who take issue with the new version of the article, but at this point too many people are saying the same thing. We need the two banned editors, Wikid77 and Zylinski, returned and to go over this thing word by word. The current version is biased to the bone.PhanuelB (talk) 15:51, 13 July 2010 (UTC)

You need to think again about what this article is about. Clue: It's not about Amanda Knox, her family, her family's PR firm, What Donald Trump Thinks, How Doug Preston Promotes His New Book ...   pablo_hablo. 20:15, 13 July 2010 (UTC)

Concur with Pablo X. Forgive me, PhanuelB, but the sheer number of times that the name Guede creeps into your text below ought to act in itself as sufficient reminder of the actual subject of this article — namely, Meredith Kercher's murder. To crusade for a so-called truth which is in fact not clearly verifiable, let alone true, is not a collegial approach to editing. The level of distribution of books and other media hardly increases their trustworthiness. Lastly, although I fail to see how the rewritten article is "biased to the bone", I am quite sure that it is far more readable than what used to appear here. SuperMarioMan 00:54, 18 July 2010 (UTC)

Break

No, WP isn't the speaking tube of the court, but nor is it of Geraldo or whatever. But large parts of the article purport to be about the investigation and trial, so it would seem obvious to me that those sections ought to give more weight to what happened during the investigation and trial than to what happened in the minds of a small number of commentators and bloggers. I don't think you get the luxury of arguing to include dirt on one of the defendants and the others only if someone else insists on it. We are supposed to be creating an article that conforms to NPOV, and I think all editors need to take a balanced view on that. --FormerIP (talk) 00:53, 16 July 2010 (UTC)

This is absurd; like I say it, it's wrong. I absolutely want them to get treated the same way and it isn't my fault if Amanda and Raffaele haven't done things in their past that are on the same level of notability for Wikipedia as Rudy. And reading differentiated would just help sometimes; I didn't argue they should be treated differently. I argued, that Rudy's acts defenitely need to go in. And my point was, I didn't know how noteable the stuff about Amanda and Raffaele was, you made it sound like it would hurt any Wiki-Rules, if it got in. That's why I said, it doesn't have to be included but maybe could if it's needed to balance out the mention of Rudy's past. And for the record; that's not throwing dirt at him.

Again; I don't have the slightest problem with those things mentioned, but everybody here is always threatening this and that would violate any rules, so I tried to be careful … but which ever position I take, I get attacked … the same with Geraldo, did I say it should be his speaking tube? Did I insinuate it? My point was, the court's opinion about what is relevant or not doesn't have to have anything to do with what is considered relevant by Wikipedia. I said it as an example to then conclude, Wikipedia should present all sides. Yet I got attacked for it. Or then, did I say, the defense theory should outweigh the rest in the article? I merely said, it should be mentioned. Oh, and the defense theory did in fact happen during the trial; all the time the defense was arguing actually. So literally half of the trial was defense theory, it wasn't only present in the minds of some commentators and bloggers, but in court every day … also I'm ending this discussion here, realizing that on this site general assumptions about unfairness are constantly made about you if you don't join into the way of thinking that apparently everybody else here does …--Aruu (talk) 02:37, 16 July 2010 (UTC)

Aruu, I'm not sure what you mean by the last bit, but if you mean people are talking about Wikipedia policy rather than directly about the facts, then that is how it supposed to be. Half of the trial probably was the defence theory (ies), but I don't think that has a great bearing on how this article should be constructed. Moors murders, David Berkowitz and Harold Shipman, for example, don't devote equal space to prosecution and defence versions of events, and I don't think there is a good reason for this article to be different. --FormerIP (talk) 14:03, 17 July 2010 (UTC)

In the three murders cited there is no controversy over who did it. Note also that in all three cases the reason that the crime is noteworthy is stated clearly. "he [Shipman]is the most prolific serial killer in recorded history" Berkowitz "terrorized New York City" for a year, and the Moors murders "would have been a footnote.. but for the fact that one of the killers was a young woman." This page needs to state clearly right up front that it is noteworthy because the quality of justice is on trial. That is what every reliable secondary source is saying.PhanuelB (talk) 22:10, 17 July 2010 (UTC)

You're missing the point. Aruu was saying that half the trial was spent on the defence case. I'm saying this is not relevant, per the example set by the those other cases (where, undoubtedly, half the trial was spent on the defence case). Every reliable source is not saying that the quality of justice is on trial. A few sources which, there is reason to suspect, have struck a deal with Knox's parents' PR people, have said that. --FormerIP (talk) 00:43, 18 July 2010 (UTC)

The allegation that the reliable secondary sources who have challenged (to put it mildly) the quality of justice in the case are doing so because of deals with PR firms or money is in the words of Pulitzer Prize winning New York Times columnist Tim Egan "preposterous and made-up." It is in the words of Doug Preston a "crazy conspiracy theory." Now who do you think was influenced in this way? Preston, Van Sant, Ciolino, Bachrach, Egan, Kelly, Heavey, Trump, Steve Moore, Bernard Shepard, Cantwell, George Fletcher? Each one of these people has used unprecedented language to condemn the tribunal and they constitute the majority opinion (by a wide margin) in the most important media outlets in the free world. Each one of them came to the table neutral and has in no way been corrupted. Period.

This page's treatment of Amanda Knox constitutes a serious violation of WP:BLP. A dozen people speaking above in the world's most important media outlets are calling Italy's trial of the century a modern day witch hunt and Wikipedia won't even allow their words in the article. It will probably require arbitration to correct this.PhanuelB (talk) 13:30, 18 July 2010 (UTC)

If you believe the page represents a violation of WP:BLP then the venue for that is WP:BLP/N. Black Kite (t) (c) 14:18, 18 July 2010 (UTC)

How is it certain that the views of all these people "constitute the majority opinion" "by a wide margin"? Since when are the likes of Donald Trump representatives from among "the most important media outlets in the free world"? Hyperbole. This talk of (non-existent) conspiracy, injustice and defamation on Wikipedia is fast becoming boring. And on the proposal that arbitration is needed to "correct" the perceived problems in this article, well, I see no (fictional) problems to "correct" at all. "Period". SuperMarioMan 16:31, 18 July 2010 (UTC)

When did Guede accuse K and S?

This source [4] indicates that this was during his trial, but there are other statements in the article to the contrary. These were not properly sourced, so I have removed them. If there is doubt about the Guardian source, please shout out. --FormerIP (talk) 02:38, 18 July 2010 (UTC)

When I was doing some of the re-write, I tried to unravel this one (and failed). There are various accounts of him accusing K and S; of him specifically saying they weren't involved; and of him simply not mentioning them (which sometimes seemed to be interpreted by newspapers as the same as saying they weren't involved). I think the earliest he named them was supposedly in a diary written whilst he was in prison in Germany. However, whichever paper I read it in, didn't quote the diary in full, so I was a bit sceptical. Unless there is a convincing account of his saying something notable at some other time, I'd stick with his not naming them at his trial, but naming them at his appeal, which is how most of the reporting seemed to portray it (in the UK at least). Bluewave (talk) 08:07, 18 July 2010 (UTC)

PS the Guardian article that you cite says: Guede has claimed that he had retreated to the bathroom with stomach pains seconds before two shadowy figures he would later identify as Knox and Sollecito burst in and stabbed Kercher. This doesn't really make it clear if he repeated the claim about K and S at the trial (and Tom Kington wouldn't actually know what was said at the trial because it was closed to journalists). Bluewave (talk) 09:08, 18 July 2010 (UTC)

Guede didn't testify during his trial, so it's rather clear that he could not have made the claim about AK and RS at that time. --Footwarrior (talk) 19:49, 18 July 2010 (UTC)

Tend to agree this is likely, Footwarrior, but do we have any sourcing?

The Guardian source was published on the day after the verdict, so "would later identify" must be referring to some time before then (ie during the investigation/trial period, even if not in the actual courtroom). It's possible that the Guardian were wrong on this detail (I think it may be), but I'm not sure it is easy to interpret the source as being compatible with G not identifying K and S. Think some kind of contradicting source is what is needed. --FormerIP (talk) 20:21, 18 July 2010 (UTC)

Guede biography

I raised this subject previously, during the rewrite and it wasn't really resolved, so I think it's worth raising again. The biography of Guede says "According to Times Online, Guede was known as a small-time drug dealer, a drifter with a prior record of petty crime and drug offences who, according to some witnesses, harassed women and stole from their handbags." Although it is quite true, as proved by the citation, that Times Online said this, I think there are some issues that we should at least discuss.

• The bit about "according to some witnesses" doesn't give us any clue about who these witnesses might be. The piece was written at the time when Guede's trial was ending, but that trial had been held behind closed doors, with no journalists present, so the journalist is certainly not giving an account of something he saw during the trial. It really sounds like hearsay.
• The "prior record of petty crime and drug offences": I have trawled through all the accounts and can't find anything about Guede having actually been convicted of anything prior to the murder trial (I know there were a couple of run-ins with the police in the weeks before the murder, but Guede was released both times). This source[5] speaks of his lack of criminal record, which is at odds with The Times' account.
• The term "drifter" appears in almost every newspaper article about Guede. It's a great journalistic word, because it conveys a negative impression but requires no factual basis to support it and is virtually unchallengeable. I would argue that it is a very poor encyclopedic term, for the same reasons.

What do others think? Bluewave (talk) 08:53, 6 July 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure about the first point. It seems like an unsubstantiated rumour, but on the other hand Guede doesn't have much of a reputation to be damaged. Maybe raising it at the BLP board would be the thing to do.

On the second point, think this should be removed. If there are conflicting sources about this then we can't report it, particularly taking into account BLP considerations.

Agree that "drifter" too vague a term for us to use in Wikipedia's voice, but if it is true that he is consistently so described then maybe we can say "often described as..".

Given that there seem to be multiple issues about the reliability of this source, perhaps it should not be used at all. --FormerIP (talk) 12:47, 6 July 2010 (UTC)

Bluewave, regarding the use of the word drifter in your third point ... perhaps this may be an instance of ambiguity between British English and American English? In the US, the term drifter is used to describe a person that does not own or maintain a residence; acording to this source, Guede actually had an apartment in Perugia:

http://blog.seattlepi.com/dempsey/archives/179047.asp

Although perhaps it is journalistic license in referring to someone who drifts from job to job, which it how it is occasionally used in the US... does the UK have a different connotation for the word? Perhaps "unemployed" or "jobless" is more accurate? Although I suppose those two words can be used to describe Knox & Sollecito. Jonathan (talk) 21:08, 6 July 2010 (UTC)

Regarding "drifter", the OED defines it as "A man following an aimless, irresolute, or vagrant way of life". So it sounds as if the British usage is a lot broader than the more specific American usage. Bluewave (talk) 07:17, 7 July 2010 (UTC)

I've done a bit more research into the sources about the allegations of drug offences and harassing women. This piece from the Telegraph[6] repeats pretty much the same story as The Times, but attributes the allegations to Abukar Mohamed Barrow, known as “Momi”. So it looks as though he is the witness and, in fact Barrow was lined up to testify at Guede's trial. However, in this piece[7] by Candace Dempsey, of Seattle pi, she writes "Abuker 'Momi' Barrow, a Somali who used to play basketball with Rudy [...] was supposed to describe Guede as a botherer of girls, a violent drug user and thief. But Guede's defense team once again rode to the rescue. Biscotti brandished a videotape recorded Sept. 17 by Studio Aperto of the Mediaset Group. He said the tape showed the witness negotiating with a reporter for cash to tell his tale. Reportedly (and rather confusedly), he'd also received 2,000 euro from La Nazione. Judge Michele threw this witness out." I suggest that, as this testimony was thrown out by the court, it should be thrown out by us too. Bluewave (talk) 09:05, 8 July 2010 (UTC)

That sounds sensisible. If we want to comply with WP:NPOV, the alternative would be citing the Timesonline article, then idenfiying the witness using the Telegraph article, then using the Seattle Pi article to discredit the witness. But that kind of "here is what a newspaper says" followed by "here is what is wrong with what the newspaper says" is exactly what the article has suffered too much of. Plus we are subject to WP:BLP --FormerIP (talk) 10:26, 8 July 2010 (UTC)

Yes, if it was some really important aspect of the case, it would be worth going into the different sources and the chronology (I think The Times article preceded the throwing-out of the witness). However, to go into all that would seem to me to attribute undue importance to this aspect of the case. Bluewave (talk) 12:59, 8 July 2010 (UTC)

Perhaps I may be oversimplifying things here, but if the word "drifter" would be replaced with the phrase "Perugia resident" in describing Guede, I think it would be much more accurate and also neutral ... or would that be implying something that Wikipedia should be avoiding? Jonathan (talk) 14:18, 8 July 2010 (UTC)

Issues related to Guede have been deliberately downplayed by the current editors because their agenda seeks to portray Guede in a better light and make it more plausible that Amanda Knox would have gotten together with him for a sex orgy. NPOV requires a more detailed discussion of Guede's criminal history. The fact that he might not have a criminal conviction is irrelevant because the evidence of his criminal acts is so compelling. These incidents are particularly important because he has no accomplices and it shows a past history of much of what happened at the crime scene. They also relate to the future section on the criticism of the police investigation. Three reliable sources:

1) Statement of Maria del Prato in TLC documentary (video 6 on Youtube.) He is discovered behind closed doors on her property armed with a knife. She describes him as a "dangerous person" and references the property stolen from the Perugian law office where the entry was the same as in Filomena's room.

2) Statement of Nathan Abraham in CBS 48Hours Documentary. He talks of Guede getting in a knife fight with a bartender.

3) Statement of Frank Sfarzo describing his conversation with Cristian Tramontano. Guede was caught robbing Tramontano's residence and brandished a knife in his escape. Police were contacted.

The above are primary sources but are appropriate for use here because Italian law does not permit public access to the trial record.PhanuelB (talk) 00:07, 9 July 2010 (UTC)

• I've read part of your first sentenced: "Issues related to Guede have been deliberately downplayed by the current editors because their agenda seeks to portray Guede in a better light..." and didn't read/listen any further. This is NOT a forum or blog where you can throw wild accusations around against editors you seem to disagree and if you don't adhere to our rules that you should be aware of as this is not your only account (and therefore you must have some experience with WP-rules) you'll have a hard time to be taken seriously and in the worst case scenario might even get blocked for misusing WP as a forum and battlefield. Please stop this approach now so we can really work together and you can make a difference. It's up to you to choose.The Magnificent Clean-keeper (talk) 00:31, 9 July 2010 (UTC)

PhanuelB, I was discussing whether the word "drifter" is an appropriate encyclopedic term for Guede and also whether the article should or should not include some allegations against him that were published in several newspapers but were based on statements by someone who was thrown out of court. I believe this is exactly the kind of content discussion that is appropriate for a talk page. To get from this to the allegation that I'm trying to "make it more plausible that Amanda Knox would have gotten together with [Guede] for a sex orgy" would take an extraordinary leap of [bad] faith. This accusation against me is quite offensive: in future, please try to stick to discussing the content. Bluewave (talk) 08:40, 9 July 2010 (UTC)

PhanuelB, this statement "The fact that he might not have a criminal conviction is irrelevant because the evidence of his criminal acts is so compelling... is self-contradictory and exactly why this information needs to be kept out of Wikipedia. Jonathan (talk) 11:47, 9 July 2010 (UTC)

Guede's history of criminal acts and the police inaction are all fully supported by reliable sources. The significance of the police inaction is addressed in the TLC Documentary -- a primary source. The TLC documentary and the two 48 Hours segments (both primary sources which put Perugian justice on trial) have been carefully omitted from the list of television documentaries by the current editors because they do not support their agenda.

No one knows what "drifter" means so it's probably not a good word to use. The TLC documentary uses "petty criminal" which is accurate. "Drifter" implys an extended period of time. The reality with Guede is that his life was spiraling downward over a relatively short period of time. I hesitate to enter into that debate over a single word because it might imply an endorsement of the legitimacy of the rest of the article.

Guede's history of "girl bothering" is fully documented in the TLC documentary. At least two of the books (and maybe all of them, I'll have to look) verify his small time drug dealing. I have also seen statements by people who knew him that verify this. Let me repeat that the information on Guede has been ever so carefully worded to diminish a criminal history that very much bears on the plausibility of any involvement by Amanda Knox.

The "our rules" that "we" will abide by are Wikipedia's PhanuelB (talk) 13:24, 9 July 2010 (UTC)

Phanuel, your opinions about Guede and other editors are not really the issue here. Bluewave raised some specific concerns about a particular source. Do you have anything to say about this source? --FormerIP (talk) 19:53, 9 July 2010 (UTC)

"Issues related to Guede have been deliberately downplayed by the current editors because their agenda seeks to portray Guede in a better light..." All I've seen is Guede being portrayed as a Murderer of Meredith Kercher. I don't see how anyone could see that as "better light". —Preceding unsigned comment added by 173.25.240.217 (talk) 16:03, 10 July 2010 (UTC)

I had a look at "Darkness Descending" in a reference library (so I wasn't able to borrow it). It describes how, aged nineteen Guede went to stay with an aunt in Lecco and got a job as a waiter in Pavia. He saw this as a big break for him, but the business folded (through no fault of Guede's) and he went back to Perugia in July 2007. In August he got a gardener’s job at a restaurant but he was sacked for his casual attitude to work (including not turning up at times). He then lived off his savings until 2 November. No mention of drug dealing or convictions for petty crime. Could we describe him as "a Perugian resident who had worked as a waiter and taken other casual jobs but was unemployed at the time of the murder"? That would be more specific than "drifter". Bluewave (talk) 17:09, 11 July 2010 (UTC)

Darkness Descending doesn't even talk about the Cristian Tramontano incident which tells you where Paul Russell et. al. is coming from. Because Italian law does not permit public access to the trial record, Tramontano's testimony is not available to this group. A number of newspaper articles talk of Tramontano but probably the best primary source is Frank Sfarzo's May 5, 2008 account of their conversation. There Guede broke in and threatened him with a knife. Important: Tramontano's girlfriend was there and could be a corroborating witness which never seems to occur to Massei. Also important Tramontano tells Sfarzo that Guede was identified to the police prior to the murder and they did nothing. Note Barbie says in Angel Face on page 103 that he was a small time drug dealer. Gary C. King says this also and talks about an abdominal scar Guede got in a fight over drugs. See the 30-June blog entry by O.Fallaci on the bleeding espresso site where Guede is busted for 6 crimes but never charged. If ever there was a blog entry without a real name that might be a reliable primary source that is it. See also the first hand account of Maria del Prato on the YouTube video (end of 6) of "the Trials of Amanda Knox" The present article talks of the laptop that "somebody stole" that Guede had with him. Any suggestion that Guede's claim of buying the laptop was anything but a lie is so devoid of credibility that it cannot be allowed to remain in this article. Guede's criminal history is fully supported by the reliable primary sources I cite above. They are more reliable than his lack of a criminal record. Guede's history in the weeks prior to the crime: three break-ins; threatens somebody with a knife; armed with a knife as a weapon while committing a felony; breaks a window with a rock and climbs in a window to steal a laptop. That would seem to make it more likely that a crime where somebody breaks a window with a rock, climbs in through a window and kills somebody with a knife was committed by him. It’s not OK to just breeze by it. It must be discussed in detail. All of this puts the Perugian justice system and the Italian investigators "on trial" which is the primary theme of most of the reliable secondary sources who have covered the trial.PhanuelB (talk) 18:28, 11 July 2010 (UTC)

Again, most of your post above is forum-like "stuff" that relies on blogs. Please redact those parts and provide a wp:RS for the remains so we can look into it and respond.The Magnificent Clean-keeper (talk) 19:07, 11 July 2010 (UTC)

No redacting and it's not forum like stuff. Believe it or not I have a pretty good idea where the authoritative information on Guede is for the general public.

• TLC TOAK (video 6) statement of Maria del Prato: Highly reliable primary source spoken in perfect American English.
• Angel Face statement about Guede drug sales: reliable secondary source.
• Newspaper Statements (ABC) about Tramontano: reliable secondary source.
• Frank Sfarzo statement about conversation with Tramontano: primary source from a controversial location. All eye-witness accounts can be important. This corroborates what some newspaper articles say.
• Gary C. King statements in book about knife scar: presumed reliable secondary source
• Gary C. King statement about drug sales: presumed reliable secondary source. (note: I gave my copy away but I still believe it's there)
• O Falluci statement on Bleeding Espresso blog: Controversial? of course. Take a look at it.
• Assertion that Guede was in possesion of laptop taken from Perugian law office: Undisputed
• Nathan Abraham statement on 48 Hours about Guede knife fight: Highly reliable primary source
• Zach Nowack statement in TLC TOAK and in Candace Dempsey book about Guede girl bothering: Highly reliable primary sourcePhanuelB (talk) 20:58, 11 July 2010 (UTC)

Phanuel, you should take a look at WP:TLDR. This is a discussion about the Times Online source, not about the general character of Guede. Do you have anything to say about it? --FormerIP (talk) 21:21, 11 July 2010 (UTC)

The discussion was not limited to The Times Online Source. The relevant qustions: 1) Guede drug sales, 2) Guede petty crime (or more) history 3) Guede harrassing girls.

1) at Youtube search for "True Stories: The Trials of Amanda Knox 06.avi" at 6:00

2) Angel Face page 103. "he [Rudy] was known as a small time drug dealer"

3) ABC Tramontano Info

4) Follow link to PMF under Cristian Tramontano

5) Don't have Gary King's book in front of me. Looking for it.

6) search on "17 year" (understood that blogs usually unacceptable)

7) at YouTube search for "american girl italian nightmare 3/6" at 3:25 (Nathan Abraham knife scuffle, also knife history and thief)

8) at YouTube search for "True Stories: The Trials of Amanda Knox 06.avi" at 4:00 (eye witness girl bothering)

No issues of WP:TLDR. All substance. Questions were asked. The problem is that the answers were't what some people were looking for. NPOV means this stuff goes in. History of knife fights, robbery, girl bothering makes it less likely that AK would have gotten together with him for a sex orgy. This is central of theme of reliable secondary sources above that are not being permitted into this article. BTW... Instructions on YouTube search strings may be permitted where specific YouTube links are not because of Copyright issues. PhanuelB (talk) 11:43, 12 July 2010 (UTC)

Break

Phanuel, to restate the issue, it has been suggested that the Times Online source should not be used (1) for the decription of Geude as "drifter" (because this is subjective and not an appropriate characterisation to use in Wikipedia's voice) (2) for the assertion that Guede had a criminal record (because this is demonstrably not true, on the basis of other sources) (2) for the assertion that Guede had a history of harassing and stealing from women (because the witness who said this was ruled unreliable because he had been paid - NB an alternative source for the same claims by the same witness would not meet this objection).

Other information about knives or trespass or Guede's character in general is missing the point of the question. Do you have any specific reason to think that the concerns raised by Bluewave are not valid?--FormerIP (talk) 12:24, 12 July 2010 (UTC)

If you look closely you will see that I have spoken to the "drifter" issue. It is undisputed that he didn't have a conviction yet. Whether "record" can mean arrest without conviction is unclear. I read the debate to be about the statement: "Guede was known as a small-time drug dealer, a drifter with a prior record of petty crime and drug offences who, according to some witnesses, harassed women..." which I believe other editors were considering to be unreliable. I produced an eyewitness account of him committing a felony a few days before the murder for which he was not charged. This is a reliable primary source from a reliable secondary source that I believe belongs in the list of documentaries and other do not. I produced a conversation with an eye witness to a second armed break-in where a knife was brandished. I produced a statement on CBS news or someone who knew of Guede getting in a knife scuffle. Actually the problem with the statement is that these weren't "petty crimes." WP:TLDR prevents more here. Major news organizations have gone out and found these compelling accounts because Perugian justice and police inaction ARE on trial.PhanuelB (talk) 13:40, 12 July 2010 (UTC)

AFAICT, Phanuel, only one RS says he has a criminal record. Other sources say he had no criminal record (not that he had "no convictions"). The exact meaning of "criminal record" in the Itlian criminal justice system doesn't really matter - whatever exactly a "criminal record" is, we know that he didn't have one, so we shouldn't be saying it in the article. Claims that he committed crimes that were never recorded are already included in the article, and don't, in any case, substantiate the the claim that he had a criminal record. Whether you think he deserved to have had a criminal record is outside the scope of our discussion here.

I can above that you agree "drifter" is not a good word to use, so okay. You haven't said anything about the paid witness - does this mean that you have no obejctions to this material being removed? --FormerIP (talk) 14:14, 12 July 2010 (UTC)

The paid witness is irrelevant because the reliable primary and secondary sources that I produced confirm girl bothering ,serious criminal acts (conviction or not), and small time drug sales. As before, he did not have a criminal conviction or pending criminal charges (to my knowledge.) The discussion of claims of unrecorded crimes is inadequate, so I may do some editing. I'm still studying Wikipedia's procedures as anything I edit will likely result in controversy. Aside from content issues the writing style of the entire article is painfully bad. PhanuelB (talk) 14:49, 12 July 2010 (UTC)

I said "paid witness" above which is not accurate. He may have asked for money for an interview but he wasn't as far as I know paid for his testimony. I hadn't heard of that guy so I question how important he is as I know this case pretty well. Books by Gary King and Barbie Nadeau both say Guede sold drugs. That is sufficient basis to say he was involved in "small time drug sales."PhanuelB (talk) 16:07, 13 July 2010 (UTC)

Well, I don't think the article would benefit from including tittle-tattle such as that about the defendants. If you disagree, though, I would suggest starting a new section dedicated to assessing the full quantity of available dirt on all of them. --FormerIP (talk) 20:46, 13 July 2010 (UTC)

I fear we are starting to see the sort of repetition appearing, which was such a problem with the article a couple of months ago. We now have a paragraph under the Guede biography part that says:

Guede had no criminal record at the time of the murder.[54] A defence witness in the Knox and Sollecito trial said that Guede told him of having been caught by police with property stolen from the witness's office, but that he had purchased this property legitimately.[55] A bartender has also alleged that Guede entered his home uninvited and carrying a knife and the owner of a nursery school in Milan has claimed that Guede trespassed on her premises.[56]

But then, under the section on the AK/RS trial we have:

The defence sought to show that Guede could have been a lone killer. Two Perugia lawyers and a school director testified that he had been caught with a large (16-inch, 40-cm) stolen knife inside a closed Milan school on 27 October 2007,[91] and was also in possession of a laptop PC and a mobile phone previously stolen by somebody from a Perugia solicitors' office, burgled with a rock breaking an upstairs window.[92] Guede said that he had bought both the stolen laptop and phone at a railway station in Milan.[91] The school director testified that a small amount of money was also missing when she found Guede looking inside a cabinet in the school office, following his alleged break-in.[91] An expert witness for the defence testified that the window of Kercher's flat had been broken from the outside, and presented a video of stones shattering similar windows.[93]

Both these sections seem to be covering evidence given at the trial, so why don't we just cover the points in one place, namely the trial section? I think the only additional information in the first quote is the observation that Guede had no criminal record, which is worth retaining in the biography part. How about replacing the piece in the biography section with something along the lines of:

Guede had no criminal record at the time of the murder but had been questioned by police regarding several incidents prior to the murder, which were brought up later at the trial of Knox and Sollecito.?

That would give the reader a pointer to the section where the incidents were covered in more detail. Bluewave (talk) 07:27, 17 July 2010 (UTC)

"Guede had been questioned" No... NPOV means saying that he got caught red handed and that the actions were similar to the crime scene: Stealing cell phones, entry through second story windows, breaking windows with rocks, using a knife as a weapon, all with no accomplices. The reliable secondary sources say it. Why not here?

And here's the one that really kills me: "A defence witness in the Knox and Sollecito trial said that Guede told him of having been caught by police with property stolen from the witness's office, but that he had purchased this property legitimately." The lawyer's testimony about the break-in came from what Guede told him? Give me a break. That's what it says. That thing is so painfully worded it isn't even funny. Guede got caught with that stolen property while armed and committing another crime. Why are all the facts left out? PhanuelB (talk) 22:59, 17 July 2010 (UTC)

Phanuel: The lawyer's testimony does appear to be as described in the sentence you quote. According to the lawyer, Guede turned up at his offices and said something like: "I just wanted you to know that the police questioned me over stealing some of your property, but I didn't steal it I bought it". A weird story, I agree, but it's what's in both the trial report and the secondary sources.

Bluewave: It is not certain that Guede was interviewed by police. The schoolteacher witness claimed he was, but the police had no record of this. Part of the conspiracy theory is that there is no record of Guede being questioned by police because he was being protected.

There's a lot wrong, IMO, with the second version of the paragraph. It isn't clear what witness testified to what in our version. It also contains obvious synthesis, comparing the law office break in to the Pergia "break in" - we need a source that does this. The "small amount of money" may be misleading (because Guede appears to have left a larger amount of money - while this is not an honest act, it also does not look like the act of a career criminal).

-FormerIP (talk) 00:27, 18 July 2010 (UTC)

I was really commenting on the repetition: covering similar material about the trial in both Guede's biography and the trial section. I agree that the wording could be improved, though. I'm not sure whether the synthesis of comparing the two break-ins is editorial or is a retelling of a comparison made at the trial: I'll need to look at the newspaper accounts again. Regarding the school "break-in", I thought the proprietor found Guede when she was bringing a locksmith to repair a door lock, so Guede may not have broken in; he may have just walked in through the door with the broken lock. I don't know if this is a criminal act in Italy (I don't think it is in England). Also I read the sources as implying that when the school director called the police, Guede calmly waited with her until they arrived. Presumably, when they did so, they would have checked whether he had the allegedly-stolen money in his pockets. The whole story doesn't hang together very well but, of course, none of this was really tested in court, because, bizarrely, the evidence against Guede only came up at a trial where he wasn't represented. Bluewave (talk) 07:49, 18 July 2010 (UTC)

No synthesis; Candace Dempsey book p299. "The defense never let the jury forget Rudy's modus operandi. It was a text book reflection of the Kercher case they claimed: He entered through windows. He carried a knife. He allegedly stole cell phones."

Now for the really good one: "he may have just walked in through the door with the broken lock. I don't know if this is a criminal act in Italy (I don't think it is in England)." When somebody enters their home or place of work alone and somebody they've never seen before is snooping around behind closed doors in an area where no one should be, it's a big deal -- everywhere. All reliable secondary sources assume this act to be a serious offense. See the TLC documentary. Maria del Prato describes the whole thing in excellent American English. She says "we all had the feeling that this was a dangerous person." "Bizarrely" brought up where he wasn't represented? It's bizarre that he wasn't charged in the first place and it probably means that Meredith Kercher would still be alive if Italian authorities had done their job and taken him out of circulation. Anyone who would say that must not be a reliable source.[8] These passages and much of the rest of the article are not NPOV.PhanuelB (talk) 16:31, 18 July 2010 (UTC)

As I said, entering unlocked premises isn't necessarily a criminal act in England. "Forced entry" is criminal and the police could be involved but, if a person enters an unsecured, unoccupied building, without forcing an entry, that is a civil, not a criminal matter. Squatters do this all the time. Dunno about Italy though (as I said before). Bluewave (talk) 17:36, 18 July 2010 (UTC)

The building being a squat looks like a plausible interpretation of the known facts (Guede asks around at the station for a place to stay and is taken to a building which was broken into three weeks earlier and not since secured). But we are in the realms of speculation here. --FormerIP (talk) 20:49, 18 July 2010 (UTC)

I'm just pointing out that the speculation that he was using the building as a squat is at least as plausible as the speculation that a crime was committed. We certainly shouldn't imply that he committed a crime when there are other plausible (if speculative) explanations and the incident was not treated as criminal by the police. Bluewave (talk) 07:32, 19 July 2010 (UTC)

Yes, I agree. --FormerIP (talk) 09:48, 19 July 2010 (UTC)

Read my lips. Original research, synthesis. The efforts to minimize the seriousness of the Milan nursery school incident -- even saying it wasn't a crime -- are a fabrication of this page. No reliable secondary sources are saying anything like that. Has everybody looked at the Maria del Prato statment in the TLC documentary that has been banned from this page? Let me say it again when somebody you've never seen before is wandering around behind closed doors in your space it's a big deal. That's why Ms. del Prato, a reliable primary source if ever there was one, says "we all had the feeling that this was a dangerous person." In the weeks prior to the murder Rudy Guede was on a crime spree that included break-ins, use of a knife as a weapon, breaking windows with rocks, and climbing in windows. And it was all done without accomplices. Reliable sources and defense lawyers point out that all of this was observed at the crime scene. The efforts to withold what these reliable secondary sources are saying with the kind twisted logic above defies belief. I will also point out that the claim above that any of the 12 reliable secondary sources that I provided above are speaking out because they have "struck a deal with Knox's PR people" is a CRAZY CONSPIRACY THEORY and an unsourced false allegation.PhanuelB (talk) 11:48, 19 July 2010 (UTC)

Phanuel, I think it is important to distinguish between saying in the article "the Milan nursery school indcident involved no crime" - which would be synthesis, but I don't think anyone wants to do it (however, the Massei report is a valid source for the narrower claim that Guede did not commit a break-in) - and arguing that the incident should not be described as a criminal act, since this is not clear from the sources. We should not portray in the article that "in the weeks prior to the murder Rudy Guede was on a crime spree", because this is not a well-established fact, it is a based on conjecture.

In terms of sources, I think it would be helpful if you were more specific about what source you think supports what claim in what way (eg do any of your sources say that Guede was "on a crime spree"?).

The issue of the reliability of news sources that struck deals with Knox's parents is not a conspiracy theory, it is something raised in Barbie Nadeau's book. ::--FormerIP (talk) 12:26, 19 July 2010 (UTC)

I'm sure that, if I left my house unlocked and came home to find someone wandering around in it and carrying one of my kitchen knives I would have "the feeling that this was a dangerous person". However, if I asked them to leave, and they did so, and they gave me back the knife before they left, they would not have committed a crime and the police would not be remotely interested. Irrespective of any of this, the only test of whether a person has committed a crime is through due process of law. In Guede's case there were no convictions, so we have no basis to say that he committed any crime (never mind a "crime spree"). Of course, I'm talking about the period prior to the murder, here. He was convicted of murder but, even then, we are better avoiding the statement that he committed a crime (a matter of judgement) and rather say he was convicted of that crime (a matter of fact). The same goes for the other defendants. Bluewave (talk) 16:55, 19 July 2010 (UTC)