Talk:Grift of the Magi/GA1
Latest comment: 12 years ago by Theleftorium in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 01:03, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
- Lede
- Link animated
- Link sitcom
- Only Fox should be linked, not network
- Link to Fox Broadcasting Company, not Fox network
- Add actor for Fat Tony
- Add actor for Skinner
- Add actor for Bart
- Add actor for Lisa
- Plot
- Add actors for various. Example: Bart's actor is missing
- No other Simpsons episode articles list the actors. And since it's not required by any policy I don't think the actors should be added in this article either. Theleftorium (talk) 20:09, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
- Production
- Unlink showrunner per WP:OVERLINK
- This is not a common term. "animated" and "sitcom" are far more common. Theleftorium (talk) 20:09, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
- Release
- Only Fox should be linked, not network
- Link to Fox Broadcasting Company, not Fox network
- ABC should be American Broadcasting Company (ABC) per MOS:ACRO
- Add its first mention, it should only show the last name for "Mike Scully" which should be "Scully", etc.
- "Actor" is not needed in that image
- Perhaps move the image to the left, as there is already one directly above it
- I'd prefer not. See second paragraph of Wikipedia:Images#Location. Theleftorium (talk) 20:09, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
- References
- Ref. 2: That - should be an en-dash as per WP:DASH
- Ref. 2: Yahoo! is the publisher, and Yahoo! TV is the work
- Ref. 4: Is missing publisher (Internet Brands)
- Since when is this needed? See Wikipedia:Cite#Webpages. Theleftorium (talk) 20:09, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
- Various other ref. are also missing publishers
- See above. Theleftorium (talk) 20:09, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
- External links
- Add "television" portal in that box
- Why? It adds nothing to this article and would cause a whitespace at the bottom of the article. Theleftorium (talk) 20:09, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
- Add TV.com link for the episode
- Categories should be in alphabetical order please.
Good work. On hold for now. TBrandley 19:47, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review! I have fixed everything except for the stuff I have commented on. Theleftorium (talk) 20:09, 8 August 2012 (UTC)