Talk:Grift of the Magi/GA1

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Theleftorium in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 01:03, 8 August 2012 (UTC)Reply

Lede
  • Link animated
  • Link sitcom
  • Only Fox should be linked, not network
  • Link to Fox Broadcasting Company, not Fox network
  • Add actor for Fat Tony
  • Add actor for Skinner
  • Add actor for Bart
  • Add actor for Lisa
Plot
  • Add actors for various. Example: Bart's actor is missing
Production
Release
  • Only Fox should be linked, not network
  • Link to Fox Broadcasting Company, not Fox network
  • ABC should be American Broadcasting Company (ABC) per MOS:ACRO
  • Add its first mention, it should only show the last name for "Mike Scully" which should be "Scully", etc.
  • "Actor" is not needed in that image
  • Perhaps move the image to the left, as there is already one directly above it
References
External links
  • Add "television" portal in that box
  • Add TV.com link for the episode
  • Categories should be in alphabetical order please.

Good work. On hold for now. TBrandley 19:47, 8 August 2012 (UTC)Reply