Talk:Codex on the Flight of Birds
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Templating
editNow that's some fast templating! Soon we'll have a box at the top of every article. I can't wait. –Outriggr § 06:07, 27 March 2008 (UTC)
As you can see, this article still needs a considerable amount of work adding in the remaining topics, which currently are still headers. Dtwedt (talk) 20:46, 17 November 2016 (UTC)
Review
edit- Minor grammatical issues in the summary.
- Wrap introductory text around the contents and/or images of Da Vinci.
Formatting
edit- Indent between folios and in between paragraphs within folios in order to give textual separation for the reader.
Peer Review
editConsidering Leonardo's notoriety with regard to flight, I think this was an extremely important article of choice. I like that you have the template arranged and that you're going through the codex folio by folio. The source material is excellent and has great pictures and great text.
I'm sure that my constructive notes have already been considered.
I hope to see more photos of the codex imbedded within the article. As prolific as Leonardo Da Vinci was in art along with his science, I'm sure there are plenty of great photos to be used. The History of Science department has a vast collection of large books that I'm sure they will allow you to photograph and use for your article.
Overall, it's coming along nicely and is certainly a very worthwhile article.— Preceding unsigned comment added by Paullittle1979 (talk • contribs) 03:23, 19 November 2013 (UTC)
Research
editMultiple paragraphs need to be expanded, I can contribute if any help is needed Lawtheagoraphobic (talk) 18:54, 27 August 2018 (UTC)