- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by MeegsC (talk) 20:57, 7 May 2021 (UTC)
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Tetrasomy X
Karyotype of tetrasomy X
- ... that when the first woman diagnosed with tetrasomy X (chromosomes pictured) was followed up 26 years later, she had gone from residence in an institution to living freely with her sister? Source: Berg JM, Karlinsky H, Korossy M, Pakula Z (1988). "Twenty-six years later: a woman with tetra-X chromosomes". Journal of Mental Deficiency Research. 32 (1): 67–74. doi:10.1111/j.1365-2788.1988.tb01389.x. PMID 3361607.
- Reviewed: Did you know nominations/Paul Jackson (bassist)
- Comment: Couple of points:
- "Happily" is not explicitly called in-article (wrong formality register for an article, imo) but fairly clear from the source; it's a bit of a long hook and I can't think of another way to get across the whole 'life improvement' concept without going way over the character limit (advice is welcome)
- 'Chromosomes pictured' is, I think, an awkward wording, but the formal term ('karyotype') is definitely going to be unclear to most readers -- again, advice welcome on what to do here
Improved to Good Article status by Vaticidalprophet (talk). Self-nominated at 12:29, 8 April 2021 (UTC).
The article is long enough and new enough. I assume good faith on the references that I can't access. A QPQ has been completed. The hook and image are both fine. SL93 (talk) 22:03, 5 May 2021 (UTC)
what did you people do, you didn't even settle on a hook. it should definitely be "after", rather than "instead", besides, neither the article or the hook specifies what kind of institution it was. 37.225.38.158 (talk) 10:33, 11 May 2021 (UTC)