- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 13:51, 23 October 2022 (UTC)
Sydney Domville Rowland
Skiagraph of 3 months old infant by Sydney Rowland, 1896.
Created by Whispyhistory (talk) and Philafrenzy (talk). Nominated by Whispyhistory (talk) at 15:55, 25 September 2022 (UTC).
- This review is for ALT1, since that one is more interesting:
General: Article is new enough and long enough
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Policy compliance:
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
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Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
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Overall: Some rewording/rephrasing is needed of some paragraphs. BTW if you want to use the image, the hook should say:
- ALT1a ... that pioneer radiologist Sydney Domville Rowland coined the term "skiagraphy" (example pictured)?
P 1 9 9 ✉ 19:40, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
- Thanks @P199:... I have reworded parts that are not quotes or names of institutions/journals etc. Thanks for ALT1. Whispyhistory (talk) 12:14, 4 October 2022 (UTC)
- for ALT1a. Although it went down to only 29.6%, it appears that this is due to a lot of long institution/journal names and a few common expressions. I can live with that. Thanks for this good new article. -- P 1 9 9 ✉ 15:34, 4 October 2022 (UTC)