- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:09, 1 April 2020 (UTC)
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Rei Matsuzaki
... that Japanese voice actress Rei Matsuzaki is a fan of the Tokyo Yakult Swallows baseball team?Source: 松嵜はサンケイスポーツ特別版「丸ごとスワローズ」でコラムを執筆するなど、熱烈なプロ野球ヤクルトファンで知られる。- ALT1:
... that Japanese voice actress Rei Matsuzaki and her husband bonded over baseball?Source: The two of them bonded by attending baseball games together and discussing the sport.
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Created by Miraclepine (talk). Self-nominated at 01:58, 6 March 2020 (UTC).
New enough, long enough and within policy (written in a neutral tone, adequately sourced and free of CLOP). ALT1 is the more interesting of the two hooks. Hook fact is supported by an inline citation. QPQ review is completed. GTG. Dee03 18:46, 6 March 2020 (UTC)
These hooks are more worthy of a fanzine than a main page appearance. As the nominator has been blocked for six months, would someone else like to suggest an alt? Yoninah (talk) 20:33, 11 March 2020 (UTC)
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- As Narutolovehinata5 has expressed an interest in salvaging this, I'm reopening it. Yoninah (talk) 23:35, 25 March 2020 (UTC)
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... that Japanese voice actress Rei Matsuzaki wrote a newspaper sports column on the Tokyo Yakult Swallows? - ALT2a ... that Japanese voice actress Rei Matsuzaki wrote a newspaper sports column on the Tokyo Yakult Swallows baseball team?
- @Dee03, Yoninah, and BlueMoonset: Does this sound okay? Unfortunately, it's the only hook fact I can think of that doesn't sound fanzine-y, so if it's not suitable, feel free to re-close this. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 23:43, 25 March 2020 (UTC)
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@Yoninah: Dee03 hasn't been active in a week so a new reviewer might be needed if they don't return soon. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 11:41, 26 March 2020 (UTC)
OK, I'll handle it. Foreign-language hook ref AGF and cited inline. Rest of review per Dee03. ALT2 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 12:09, 26 March 2020 (UTC)
- Thanks; however I wonder if it would have been better to stick with ALT2a since it isn't clear from the hook that the Swallows are a baseball team, and in any case the Swallows may not be that well-known outside of Japan or baseball circles. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 12:14, 27 March 2020 (UTC)
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- @Dee03, Yoninah, and BlueMoonset: Does this sound okay? Unfortunately, it's the only hook fact I can think of that doesn't sound fanzine-y, so if it's not suitable, feel free to re-close this. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 23:43, 25 March 2020 (UTC)
