- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:02, 18 August 2017 (UTC)
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Moon Hunters
edit... that the action RPG Moon Hunters changes depending on the players' choices in what is described as a personality test?ALT1:... that the action RPG Moon Hunters takes place in a fantasy version of ancient Mesopotamia?
Created by Zxcvbnm (talk). Self-nominated at 07:07, 19 June 2017 (UTC).
The date, length, and age check out. While looking at the cited sources for the "personality test" portion, I could not find the information in a third-party, reliable source; I feel that it would be better to have this information come from a third-party source rather than directly from the video game's website if it is going to be used as a hook. On the other hand, the Mesopotamia information from the ALT1 hook can be located in one of the sources, and is appropriate and ready to go. Aoba47 (talk) 14:52, 20 June 2017 (UTC)
- This has been sitting for seven weeks, so I'm hoping this will get it moving again. Of the hooks, the original one is more interesting; I was wondering whether the "personality test" sourcing issue could be solved by ascribing the description to the developers. I have added a "citation needed" template to the article precisely for that quoted phrase, so Zxcvbnm will need to add the cite. Aoba47, let us know whether the new ALT2 version of the hook meets your approval. Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 16:38, 11 August 2017 (UTC)
- ALT2: ... that the action RPG Moon Hunters changes depending on the players' choices in what the developer has described as a "personality test"?
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Thank you for the update and it looks good and ready to me for the main page. I apologize for the delay. Aoba47 (talk) 16:41, 11 August 2017 (UTC)
Aoba47, I do not understand how you could tick this when there is a "citation needed" template on the key fact for both the original and ALT2 hooks. I've superseded your confirmation for the time being; let's wait to see how Zxcvbnm responds to my comments. Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 17:51, 11 August 2017 (UTC)
Another reviewer needed; since I suggested ALT2, I can't approve it. I have struck the original hook, since ALT2 was proposed to address issues with it. BlueMoonset (talk) 16:07, 14 August 2017 (UTC)
- Approving ALT2 as more intriguing than ALT1. Made a minor change ("developers have" to "developer has") to make it consistent with the source (and the article says there is only one developer, Kitfox Games). --Usernameunique (talk) 08:25, 16 August 2017 (UTC)