Template:Did you know nominations/Mongol conquest of Eastern Xia

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The result was: promoted by The Squirrel Conspiracy (talk) 06:40, 29 May 2020

Mongol conquest of Eastern Xia

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... that though formerly ~~allied~~ a vassal to the Mongol Empire, Eastern Xia was later destroyed by the Mongols because it rebelled against them?

Reviewed: 2020 coronavirus pandemic in Nunavut

Created by 3family6 (talk). Self-nominated at 18:39, 6 May 2020 (UTC).

This looks good. Sources are great and article is recent. Starzoner (talk) 00:15, 7 May 2020 (UTC)

@Starzoner: This review is incomplete. Please make sure to address all of the criteria. You can use the template in the "Reviewer's template for easy copy+paste" section to do so, if you wish. The Squirrel Conspiracy (talk) 06:59, 23 May 2020 (UTC)

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook eligibility:

Cited: - I am not sure the hook is adequately supported. It says he was at war with Mongols, made peace, then launched a rebellion. Was he really an ally or more of a vassal state?
Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: Doing full review which Starzoner did not complete. b uidhe 03:36, 28 May 2020 (UTC)

Vassal is more accurate, I've edited the hook to reflect this.--3family6 (Talk to me | See what I have done) 15:30, 28 May 2020 (UTC)

Meets requirements. b uidhe 22:53, 28 May 2020 (UTC)