Template:Did you know nominations/Marni Abbott-Peter
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:17, 24 April 2019 (UTC)
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Marni Abbott-Peter
edit... that Paralympic athlete Marni Abbott-Peter competed in Paralympic swimming before joining the Canada women's national wheelchair basketball team?Shrine selects athletes- ALT1:
... that Paralympic athlete Marni Abbott-Peter was inspired by Nancy Greene Raine to begin skiing?Marni Abbott - ALT2:
... that while recovering from a spinal cord injury, Marni Abbott-Peter was introduced to wheelchair sports by Rick Hansen?Paralympics helped restore athlete's dream of Olympics
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Created by HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk). Self-nominated at 22:41, 5 April 2019 (UTC).
Interesting life on good sources, no copyvio obvious. - Striking ALT2, but I confess to miss at least a hint at gold medals and/or hall of fame, - perhaps in combination. - In the article, please find a way to avoid two "while" in close succession. Also waiting for qpq. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:20, 10 April 2019 (UTC)
- @Gerda Arendt: Thank you for beginning this review and nice catch with the wording. I have fixed the problem and will soon be completing QPQ. I am a little confused about your gold medals comment. Are you saying you think that should be the hook? HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 20:43, 10 April 2019 (UTC)
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... that Paralympic athlete Marni Abbott-Peter won three gold medals and three consecutive World Championship titles with Team Canada?WHEELCHAIR BASKETBALL ATHLETE MARNI ABBOTT-PETER AND BUILDER DR. DONALD ROYER TO JOIN CANADIAN PARALYMPIC HALL OF FAME As a member of the Canadian Senior Women’s National Team from 1992-2004, she captured an unprecedented three consecutive gold medals at the Paralympic Games (1992, 1996 and 2000) as well as three consecutive world championship titles (1994, 1998 and 2002).- Well, you got what I meant, but now it's a bit too much for my taste. If I word the hook for you, I can't also review, so just food for thought: perhaps begin with her injury, and then the medals OR the world champion titles (medals is shorter), and I wouldn't pipe "wheelchair basketball". --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:50, 10 April 2019 (UTC)
- @Gerda Arendt: Oh, I see what you mean. ALT4:
....that after a spinal cord injury, Marni Abbott-Peter won three Paralympic gold medals with Team Canada?HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 20:55, 10 April 2019 (UTC)- Getting there! Now just let's see her sport, - not just Team Canada. Take your time, off to sleep ;) - For your qpq: could you perhaps take a look at a nom I'd like to see on 12 April? It just needs approval of a hook or two. Search for the date, or "Patrick" ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:00, 10 April 2019 (UTC)
- @Gerda Arendt: I don't feel right making that my QPQ since so many other people have commented on it and put much more work into assessing that article. I have reviewed Template:Did you know nominations/Pokémon Go live events so QPQ is now done.
- ALT5:...that after a spinal cord injury, Marni Abbott-Peter won three Paralympic gold medals in Wheelchair Basketball with Team Canada? HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 21:28, 10 April 2019 (UTC)
- ALT6: ... that after a spinal cord injury, Marni Abbott-Peter won three Paralympic gold medals in wheelchair basketball with Team Canada?
- ALT7: ... that after a spinal cord injury, Marni Abbott-Peter won three Paralympic gold medals with Canada women's national wheelchair basketball team?
I tried different links, please strike if not correct, or you don't like. As for the qpq, that's generous, but Lange still needs an approval! You could do that without counting. I supplied another alternative. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 06:21, 11 April 2019 (UTC)
- ALT5:...that after a spinal cord injury, Marni Abbott-Peter won three Paralympic gold medals in Wheelchair Basketball with Team Canada? HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 21:28, 10 April 2019 (UTC)
- @Gerda Arendt: I don't feel right making that my QPQ since so many other people have commented on it and put much more work into assessing that article. I have reviewed Template:Did you know nominations/Pokémon Go live events so QPQ is now done.
- Getting there! Now just let's see her sport, - not just Team Canada. Take your time, off to sleep ;) - For your qpq: could you perhaps take a look at a nom I'd like to see on 12 April? It just needs approval of a hook or two. Search for the date, or "Patrick" ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:00, 10 April 2019 (UTC)
- @Gerda Arendt: Oh, I see what you mean. ALT4:
- Well, you got what I meant, but now it's a bit too much for my taste. If I word the hook for you, I can't also review, so just food for thought: perhaps begin with her injury, and then the medals OR the world champion titles (medals is shorter), and I wouldn't pipe "wheelchair basketball". --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:50, 10 April 2019 (UTC)
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- @Gerda Arendt: Thank you for beginning this review and nice catch with the wording. I have fixed the problem and will soon be completing QPQ. I am a little confused about your gold medals comment. Are you saying you think that should be the hook? HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 20:43, 10 April 2019 (UTC)
