- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 21:43, 13 February 2020 (UTC)
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Lynae Larson
- ... that after winning the 1978 Chicago Marathon, Lynae Larson complained about the delayed start time, as she had to drive six hours back to Brookings, South Dakota to work the next day? [1]
- Reviewed: List of Big Bash League captains
Created by Joseph2302 (talk). Self-nominated at 14:19, 2 February 2020 (UTC).
Article is new enough, long enough, adequately sourced, and free from close paraphrasing. The hook is cited inline and verified; however, the source only mentions Brookings and does not explicitly mention South Dakota, in which case I'd suggest linking to Brookings in the hook. A QPQ has been provided. Will be good to go once the Brookings thing is addressed. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 07:01, 4 February 2020 (UTC)
- Fixed. The line before in the source does say she travelled from Brookings, SD, but made it comply with the sentence of the source being used. Joseph2302 (talk) 09:43, 4 February 2020 (UTC)
- Thanks. I really like the hook, but I'm kinda worried about the word "complained" since I feel that some people might interpret it as a BLP violation. I'd approve it, but I'm not sure if that using that word would fly, so I think it might be a good idea to ask another editor for thoughts on the suitability of that word. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 23:26, 4 February 2020 (UTC)
In that case I think this should be good to go as there are no longer any outstanding issues. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 14:55, 13 February 2020 (UTC)