- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 11:51, 20 October 2015 (UTC)
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Lee Ee Hoe
edit- ... that Lee Ee Hoe was conferred the Order of the Rising Sun for his contributions to tourism between Japan and Malaysia?
- Reviewed: Roland Paoletti
Created by Wendyapplenian (talk). Nominated by Rainbow unicorn (talk) at 00:49, 24 September 2015 (UTC).
File was created on 25 August, taken to mainspace on 22 September and nominated on 24 September, new enough. 2787 char long enough, no apparent copy-vio. Hook is verified and under character count. QPQ completed by nominator. Issues,- WP:Peacock need to eliminate the excess puffery, "vast experience", "wealth of knowledge", "expert", "big role", to make article more neutral.
- Several sentences are missing in-line citations, and specifically the one claiming that he is "the first foreign recipient from the travel industry to receive this award". Sources indicate his company is, not him personally and since he has a partner, you would need to provide a source showing it was only for him or change it to reflect it is a company achievement. In any case, there is no citation provided for the claim. Also missing cites for final information in topic "Business career" and "International business ventures".SusunW (talk) 19:09, 19 October 2015 (UTC)
- SusunW, I have edited the article to fix these issues. Rainbow unicorn (talk) 23:47, 19 October 2015 (UTC)
Rainbow unicorn Thank you. After editing is now 2444 char, still meets requirements and is now neutral. In-line citations are now complete. GTG. SusunW (talk) 00:59, 20 October 2015 (UTC)
