Template:Did you know nominations/Jay Jeffrey

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The result was: promoted by Presidentman talk · contribs Random Picture of the Day (Talkback) 22:17, 31 May 2012 (UTC)

Jay Jeffrey

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Created/expanded by Jrcla2 (talk). Self nom at 19:32, 22 May 2012 (UTC)

  • Date, size okay. Hook is unsourced in the article. Vensatry (Ping me) 04:17, 28 May 2012 (UTC)
  • Not sure you bothered even reading the article then, because it's clearly referenced in the "Coaching career" section. Leads don't need to be sourced since they're a summary of the rest of the article, which is what I can only assume you based this review on. Jrcla2 (talk) 06:34, 28 May 2012 (UTC)
  • I thought it's good to have the exact hook in the article. Vensatry (Ping me) 05:35, 31 May 2012 (UTC)