Template:Did you know nominations/Den Frie Udstilling

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The result was: promoted by — Crisco 1492 (talk) 10:42, 27 February 2013 (UTC).

Den Frie Udstilling

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... that the first exhibition of Den Frie Udstilling (pictured) featured artists such as Peder Severin Krøyer and Kristian Zahrtmann who were among the greatest painters of the period?

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Teresa Gil de Vidaure

Created by Rosiestep (talk), Ipigott (talk). Nominated by Rosiestep (talk) at 06:02, 1 February 2013 (UTC)

New: Good. Length: Good. Policy: This is largely a translation, so I'm assuming good faith. Hook: Length is good, but declaring the painters to be the greatest of their period reeks of a neutrality violation. Also, the period in question was never specified. Could we rephrase the hook a bit? Abyssal (talk) 19:31, 19 February 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for your review. Ipigott suggested some alts:

ALT1

... that the first exhibition of Den Frie Udstilling (pictured) in 1891 featured P.S. Krøyer and Kristian Zahrtmann who were among Denmark's most notable painters at the time?

ALT2

... that the first exhibition of Den Frie Udstilling (pictured) in 1891 featured several notable painters including P.S. Krøyer and Kristian Zahrtmann?

--Rosiestep (talk) 18:20, 24 February 2013 (UTC)

Alt 2 is fine. Abyssal (talk) 19:09, 26 February 2013 (UTC)