- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 12:07, 18 November 2012 (UTC)
Brian Ehlers
edit... that Brian Ehlers was just the second repeat winner of being named the Patriot League Men's Basketball Player of the Year?
- Reviewed: Connie B. Gay
Created/expanded by Jrcla2 (talk). Self nom at 20:46, 31 October 2012 (UTC)
Article is well-referenced and well-informed. Hook is decent, but I wonder if this hook is the most interesting of this article. I would suggest a basketball player becoming a current police officer as an alternative hook. However, this tick is a good-faith on the hook. --George Ho (talk) 03:34, 2 November 2012 (UTC)
You know what? I can't wait any longer. While the article has reliable sources and verified information, this nomination needs another hook:
- ALT1 ... that former basketball player Brian Ehlers is now a police officer?
Which one is better: original or ALT1? --George Ho (talk) 15:01, 5 November 2012 (UTC)
Your ALT1 is definitely better, George Ho. Article is new enough, long enough, well-sourced, no close paraphrasing seen, and well-written. ALT1 hook ref verified. Good to go.- Note: This DYK review is being applied against the QPQ requirement for Template:Did you know nominations/Apollo 11 lunar sample display, Apollo 17 lunar sample display. Yoninah (talk) 23:43, 17 November 2012 (UTC)
