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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by CSJJ104 (talk) 20:30, 22 September 2022 (UTC)

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Bhadun

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Created by Mehediabedin (talk). Self-nominated at 01:00, 30 August 2022 (UTC).

  • Drive-by comment (this is not a full review). I cannot verify the information presented, because I don't know Bangla, but there seems to be two typoes in the proposal. It currently reads "that According to 2022". Firstly, the word "according" should not be capitalized. Secondly, it seems they forgot to put the source of the information after the phrase "according to". Looking at the contents of the article, I'll propose an alt that seems to closer to the intention of the nominator:
    • ALT1: ... that according to Risingbd.com, in 2022, the residents of Bhadun can get US$5.30 by renting a wife per day for shooting?
RoundSquare (talk) 22:04, 6 September 2022 (UTC)
  • Giving a full review. The article was new enough and long enough at time of nomination. QPQ is present. I have tweaked ALT1 to read 5.30 instead of 5.3, as this is a currency amount.
    • The hook is quite an eyebrow-raiser (in a good way for DYK but I can see this being a question), in large part because of the use of "shooting" instead of "filming" extensively. This is something of an issue with word choice in the article as well. I've tried to increase the variety of words used on the page a bit. AGF on the Bengali-language source. I don't have copyvio or other textual concerns.
    • Only ALT1 (above) is approved. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 17:43, 18 September 2022 (UTC)
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