Talk:The Desert Peach

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"This was mostly written by a German! --23:34, 18 August 2006 (UTC)Xenia L."

Khatru2 21:38, 4 September 2006 (UTC)

major cleanup needed

I hope to get around to some of this soon:

• NPOV! Much of this reads like a strongly positive review - I agree, but that's not what we're doing here. Too many jokes, too.
• Copyediting. Looks like a first-draft translation.
• Move character descriptions into a separate section, + general reorganization.
• Add ISBN links for books.

←Hob 17:35, 28 October 2006 (UTC)

minor cleanup needed

Sorry, this is not vandalism. Regardless whether the imaginary younger brother is "pretty", the point of the entire series is he's gay. Please leave the next edit! --User:Phlip2005

(And forgive me, WikiPedia gods, for arguing with a BOT!;)

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