Talk:Reform Party (Singapore)
Latest comment: 12 years ago by Jaredjeya in topic Election Rally Speeches
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[Copied from Wikipedia talk:SGpedians' notice board#Reform Party (Singapore)]
Hi, I recenty edited the article Reform Party (Singapore) from a redirect page. Please feel free to edit it --Kumaran59 (talk) 18:36, 26 August 2009 (UTC)
- The text is now written from the point of view of the party, particularly the "Ideals" section ("Specifically we believe that", "We believe in the creation of", and so on). It should be rewritten such that it refers to the party in the third person ("The Party believes that", etc.). Also, the text appears to have been lifted directly from the party's website and may thus constitute a breach of copyright. To avoid this problem, the text should be rephrased. Finally, you will need to add inline citations to show exactly which parts of the text are supported by which citations. — Cheers, JackLee –talk– 10:53, 27 August 2009 (UTC)
Election Rally Speeches
editI would like to point out that this section is IDENTICAL (not a word different apart from formatting) to the one on Kenneth Jeyaretnam's page. Perhaps it should be oriented more towards a general look at speeches by ALL candidates on this page, and more towards KJ on his page? Jaredjeya (talk) 16:25, 24 May 2012 (UTC)