Talk:Mott High School
Latest comment: 5 months ago by Miskaton in topic Wording in intro
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Wording in intro
editI would suggest a change of wording in the intro from, "The official name of the high school," to, "The school's official name." This avoids excessive repetition of "high school" as well as well as condensing out the prepositional phrase for clarity. Miskaton (talk) 17:26, 9 June 2024 (UTC)