Talk:Miyakonojō

Latest comment: 17 years ago by MonstaPro in topic Copy Edit: action plan

Copy Edit: action plan

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I'm not sure where exactly needs re-wording, but I see much of [It] is written in fairly simple English. Perhaps concatenation of sentences (and reduction of headlines used) would be a good place to start? _> MonstaPro:Talk:Contrib. 14:44, 3 July 2007 (UTC)Reply