How is this?
editI came upon this article and it was quite a mess; it was written like a review. I totally rewrote the article and it should be much more neutral now.
— R. J. Circus – contribs - talk – 00:43, 4 August 2016 (UTC)
I came upon this article and it was quite a mess; it was written like a review. I totally rewrote the article and it should be much more neutral now.
— R. J. Circus – contribs - talk – 00:43, 4 August 2016 (UTC)Reply