Talk:Guild Wars 2: Heart of Thorns

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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Kyubei. Peer reviewers: Briana Caffee.

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Feedback

@Kyubei: Great start. My only real concern is that there might be more detail here that folks thinks is really appropriate for a general audience. The relevant policy would be Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Trivia sections. I think there are certainly ways this can be improved but I feel pretty comfortable publishing this and letting others weigh in at this point! I'd go ahead and move this to the "(Article)" namespace! Good luck! —mako๛ 00:02, 24 October 2015 (UTC)

Peer Review

Hey Kyubei!

This looks great!

• I added a link to the Heart of Thorns website in the second paragraph. This way readers can go to the website if they are curious.

Overall it is a good description of the game, but at times I was a little confused because it seemed like a lot of detailed information about the game, which made it a little hard to follow.

Other than that, it looks good!

Briana Caffee (talk) 02:00, 31 October 2015 (UTC)