Talk:Rumsfeld Commission

GA nom on HOLD for 7 days

• This article provides a decent quick-look at the topic. This topic deserves a much larger article. However, for the purposes of GA, it's OK to have a "broad overviews of a large topic"
• I couldn't help but come away with the feeling that the critics' position was underrepresented; which raises significant POV questions. Some quotes from prominent critics would be welcome. The "Aftermath" section seems to thin even for a "broad overview."
• Some sections were very list-like. You might be able to justify that, based on the "broad overview" nature of the article. However, it would help the article if you could improve this aspect.
• A large amount of this material came from one source; this raises further questions about how broad the article's coverage is, and how well-referenced the article is. MORE SOURCES would be highly welcome.

I'm putting this article's GA nom on Hold for 7 days.

Drop me a line if you have any q's. --Ling.Nut 11:40, 26 November 2006 (UTC)

Hello again,

Before the 7 day period expires, I hope someone will take the time to discuss or address my referencing and NPOV concerns. I'm quite open to persuasion that my NPOV concerns are unfounded. In fact, I welcome such discussion. I honestly would regret having to fail the GA nom of an article simply because my concerns were unaddressed — and that would be even more regrettable if my concerns were unfounded. :-)

• Question: What is NIE?
• What does "compartmentalization of intelligence" mean?

Thanks --Ling.Nut 04:22, 29 November 2006 (UTC)

Thank you for your helpful comments. I have cleared up the NIE thing (it stands for National Intelligence Estimate and written a footnote for the "compartmentalization" line. I have also two sentences to the aftermath section; one explains the critics side that the report described what could and not what would happen; the other is the reaction of a more moderate group. I agree with most of your comments but I don't have much time now to do a full-scale expansion of the article. I would be happy if it became GA, but if you still have doubts, I can always renominate it at a later time. Thanks, Joshdboz 02:07, 30 November 2006 (UTC)

I really hope you'll find time to expand this; it's an important topic. PASS.--Ling.Nut 02:18, 30 November 2006 (UTC)

PS We just had a long hullaballoo over passing an article that relied too heavily on one source; you benefited from that discussion. However, I humbly but STRONGLY request that you find more sources! --Ling.Nut 02:21, 30 November 2006 (UTC)

GA Reassessment

This discussion is transcluded from Talk:Commission to Assess the Ballistic Missile Threat to the United States/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the reassessment.

Starting GA reassessment as part of the GA Sweeps process. Jezhotwells (talk) 16:13, 24 January 2010 (UTC)

Projects and major contributors have been notified. Jezhotwells (talk) 16:46, 24 January 2010 (UTC)

Checking against GA criteria

GA review (see here for criteria)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS):

   Well written, I made some copy-edits to satisfy these requirements.

#:: I feel that the lead should be expanded somewhat to fully summarise the article as per WP:LEAD

1. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

#:: One dead link (ref #21 [1]) has been tagged.

1. One statement: North Korea launched their Taepodong-1, modeled on the Scud missile highlighted in the report, on August 31 in what they described as a satellite launch. However, US intelligence determined the attempt was a failure. needs a citation.

   It would be helpful to have an EL to the actual report, which I assume is available on-line, this is not a GA requirement however.

   I assume good faith for off-line sources.

   Other references check out and are WP:RS

2. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

3. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

4. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

5. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

   OK

6. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

7. :On hold for seven days for above issues to be addressed. Jezhotwells (talk) 16:34, 24 January 2010 (UTC)

   OK, just the lead to be addressed, as per above. Jezhotwells (talk) 02:05, 30 January 2010 (UTC)

   OK, keep GA status, thanks for the hard work that has gone into this. Jezhotwells (talk) 17:02, 31 January 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for the constructive critique! I'm sorry not to have kept this more updated since it was created. So far I believe I addressed many of the major things you noted; over the coming days I'll see what more can be done (will add cite templates all around), and I'll try to get a hold of the main book source to see if I missed anything from first round. Joshdboz (talk) 00:07, 25 January 2010 (UTC)

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