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Comment: Not sure what's going on with this article - the lead should be a summary of the topic, starting with "The Redbrae Massacre was..." asilvering (talk) 04:03, 15 August 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: I can't access the sources to establish notability, but note that External links should be removed or converted to inline citations where appropriate. Greenman (talk) 18:56, 5 August 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: I cannot find any sources whatsoever (books, journals, websites, nothing) which refers to the topic. Not under the name "Redbrae Massacre". A JSTOR search returns zero mentions of "redbrae massacre". Neither does a Google Book search. Zero results. Even a broad Google search returns only this Draft article and other Wikipedia mentions. Within the article, two of the sources appear to mention a placename called "Redbrae". But nothing about a "massacre". The other source doesn't mention either the word "Redbrae" or "massacre" or anything else to support the text here.
What am I missing?Guliolopez (talk) 20:47, 13 October 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: Per a discussion with the draft's author, this draft (including its title) appears to be based solely on (one page of?) a single book. That book appearing to be a self-published local-interest work. Now listed below. While I cannot verify myself, if the topic isn't covered (under the proposed title or otherwise) in multiple reliable/verifiable/independent sources, then I don't see how WP:SIGCOV is met. I'm not even sure we have sufficient reliable/verifiable sources to even cover this topic WP:WITHIN another article. Let alone enough coverage to justify a standalone article/title. Guliolopez (talk) 00:42, 14 October 2024 (UTC)
During the Plantation of Ulster, Tandragee Castle became the property of Sir Oliver St. John, Lord Deputy of Ireland. He rebuilt the original stronghold which had belonged to the O'Hanlon Clan. However, during the Irish Rebellion of 1641, Edmond O'Hanlon and his Rebels attempted to regain their lands and as a result, the castle became ruined due to violence and destruction; it remained so for almost two hundred years until it was rebuilt in about 1837 for The 6th Duke of Manchester.
Ballymore Parish Church also fell victim to the destruction inflicted by the O'Hanlons in Tandragee, being burnt to the ground along with the rest of Tandragee. The Rebels also hanged James Brombley, Richard Wigson, and others in Ballymore within Tandragee.[1]
Rebel Violence in Clare
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A short distance from Tandragee in the quiet village of Clare, Patrick oge McRoorey O'Hanlon and his Rebels hanged Tatton and his son William Tatton, William Clay, and John Thomson. Also killed were Thomas Smith, John Grantham, John Parker, John Greear, Mathew German, and John Willimott. The Earl of Bathe's Castle (Clare Castle) was subsequently burnt down - which had been surprised by the O'Hanlons - and many more there were killed.[1]
Redbrae Massacre
editThe Redbrae Massacre was one of many massacres which took place during the Irish Rebellion of 1641. It occurred on the Drumnamether Road, a short distance from Bell's Crossroads which is located just outside the small County Armagh village of Clare.
The local Protestant Settlers of the area were gathered together on the hill of the Drumnamether Road and murdered by Irish Rebels in the most brutal of ways. This massacre was apart of a series of attacks by Irish Rebels throughout the area in response to Protestants from Scotland and England having settled in the area.
The name 'Redbrae' only came about as a result of the horrifying incident that took place. 'Red' signifying the blood of the Protestant Settlers murdered and 'Brae' being Scottish for steep bank or hill, the very place at which the massacre occurred in 1641.[citation needed]
Redbrae was significant enough to be mentioned in Taylor and Skinner's Book of Irish Road Maps (1777).[2][original research?]
Redbrae is also mentioned on the thirteenth page of The Traveller's Guide through Ireland printed in Dublin in 1794.[3]
Until recent years, there was a cross-like feature on the roof of a house at Redbrae. Green slates formed the cross, and being on the roof it acted as a reminder, or a memorial of what had taken place on that day.[citation needed]
Further reading
edit- McClelland, Sarah Jennifer (2018). The History of Clare : the People, the Place, and the Presbyterians. p. 38. ISBN 9781909751972.
References
edit- ^ a b "1641 CLRLE | Deposition of Elizabeth Rolleston". 1641dep.abdn.ac.uk. Retrieved 2024-07-07.
- ^ "Taylor and Skinner - Road Maps of Ireland 1777". www.swilson.info. Retrieved 2024-07-07.
- ^ Tyner, George (1794). The Traveller's Guide Through Ireland: Being an Accurate and Complete Companion to Captain Alexander Taylor's Map of Ireland, Giving the Distance by the Great Roads from Dublin to Every Town in the Kingdom, the Cross Roads, and Description of the Gentlemens Seats Near the Roads ... To which are Added the Roads from London to Chester, Holyhead, &c. P. Byrne.
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