Wikipedia:Peer review/Lisa the Simpson/archive1

Lisa the Simpson

I've listed this article for peer review because I'd like to have someone else's opinion on how to improve this article in case I'd like to nominate it for FAC some day. Thanks, ✗iℎi✗(talk) 00:23, 5 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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The lead needs exspanding. Buc 12:22, 11 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Although some people (without thinking thru the consequences) have condemned linking to other pop culture articles, this article not only needs links to the articles on the other major Simpson's characters, but probably a disambig link at the top explaining that this is about the episode, not the character. Okay, I admit I thought this article might be about the character -- but only because I've seen some poorly written Wikipedia articles, & as hard as I try to assume good faith, people do make some embarassingly bad mistakes in Wikipedia articles, so one never truly knows. -- llywrch 00:15, 12 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]