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Beebo the God of War

Featured article candidates/Beebo the God of War/archive1

Nominator(s): Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 05:55, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

"Beebo the God of War" is the ninth episode of the third season of the science-fiction series Legends of Tomorrow. The episode is considered a turning point for the series from the self serious drama to a wacky nonsense comedy. Prior to the nomination I consulted with who was listed as a mentor User:Gen. Quon.

This is my first FAC so I'm fully expecting this to fail. It recently underwent a GOCE copy edit and a PR If anything I'm shooting for this to pass on renomination. Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 05:55, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

UC

Welcome to FAC, and good luck with the process. I'll pop in when I can, but two early-bird questions in response to This is my first FAC so I'm fully expecting this to fail: has the article been to Peer Review, and have you found a more experienced FA writer who might be willing to act as a mentor? Both come highly recommended to help with a first nomination and to help things go smoothly. Just looking through briefly, there are a couple of small typographical, tone and MoS errors which would probably be caught and fixed quickly on a pre-FAC PR. UndercoverClassicist ^T·C 14:47, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I did take it to PR (though there was limited engagement) and have the article copy edited. I also consulted a mentor. Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 15:10, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Excellent: who's mentoring it? Normally they are tagged in the nomination. UndercoverClassicist ^T·C 15:19, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@UndercoverClassicist: it was User:Gen. Quon Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 20:31, 30 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I can confirm! I'll take a look at it here in a bit.--Gen. Quon_[Talk] 02:08, 31 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Drive-by comment

Two refs seem to be duplicated (refs 6 and 23 as well as refs 13 and 47). --Jens Lallensack (talk) 20:20, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 21:40, 30 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]