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The article was archived by Laser brain via FACBot (talk) 3 June 2019 [1].

A Nice Day for a Posh Wedding

Nominator(s): Aoba47 (talk) 02:04, 27 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hello everyone! The above article is about a season two episode of the American dramedy Ugly Betty. A loose adaptation of the Colombian telenovela Yo soy Betty, la fea, the show is about a young Latina woman who works at the fashion magazine MODE even though she does not fit their expectations of beauty and style. This particular episode is about the wedding of Bradford Meade and Wilhelmina Slater and Ignacio Suarez's United States citizenship ceremony. Victoria Beckham guest-stars as Wilhelmina's maid of honor who steals attention from the wedding, and her Spice Girls nickname (Posh Spice) is referenced in the title. The initial broadcast was viewed by 10.9 million viewers, and the episode was well received by critics. The scenes about Ignacio's citizenship ceremony attracted attention from academic scholars.

I would greatly appreciate any recommendations to improve the article. I have done FACs on television episode articles in the past, but I would like to continue to grow as an editor through constructive feedback. I hope that this nomination encourages other editors to work on television episode articles, and maybe even bring them through the FAC process too. The above article had a wonderful GAN review and a copy-edit from the WikiProject Guild of Copy Editors. I hope everyone has a wonderful day and/or night. Thank you in advance! Aoba47 (talk) 02:04, 27 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

"It was written Silvio Horta and Marco Pennette, and directed by James Hayman." A 'by' is missing after 'written'.

Apologies for that mistake. I am not sure how I kept reading over that lol. I have fixed it. Aoba47 (talk) 21:29, 28 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

"Wang designed Wilhelmina's wedding dress, which was toned down upon Williams' request, and Beckham's bridesmaid dress." I think the last bit is confusing.

Understandable. I have revised it to hopefully be clearer, but please let me know if further revision is necessary. Aoba47 (talk) 21:29, 28 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

""A Nice Day for a Posh Wedding" runs for approximately 43 minutes". I feel it can be rephrased as '"A Nice Day for a Posh Wedding" has a runtime of approximately 43 minutes.'

Revised. That is a much better phrasing so thank you for the recommendation! Aoba47 (talk) 21:29, 28 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

In the production section. "it was written Silvio Horta and Marco Pennette." Again 'by' is missing before the writers.

Apparently, I just do not like the word "by" lol. I have added it. Aoba47 (talk) 21:29, 28 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

That's it from me. Good work on the article. Yashthepunisher (talk) 20:52, 28 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Yashthepunisher: Thank you for the comments. I believe that I have addressed everything. Have a great rest of your night! Aoba47 (talk) 21:29, 28 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Support this nomination. Yashthepunisher (talk) 14:09, 29 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 15:54, 29 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Withdrawal request

@FAC coordinators: I would like to withdraw this nomination. Thank you. Aoba47 (talk) 07:22, 3 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Closing note: This candidate has been archived, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FAC/ar, and leave the {{featured article candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. --Laser brain (talk) 11:24, 3 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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