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Peer Review

One thing I noticed is the lack of citations. After each part that you found in the book it will need to be cited. Expanding upon the books was a great idea because this gives more depth to what you are talking about and allows the reader to understand better if they are unfamiliar with the epic. Another suggestion might be to move the last sentence, "This is the last major appearance of Anchises," out of that book 6 section since it is it's own thought/ending remark so it might best be placed outside of the section to show that was the final moment for him in the entire epic.