Marshall90
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Hiya, Marshall90!
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Feedback on your work
editGood development of original stub content.
Please consider making the following changes:
- Fix formatting: "Contents [hide]"
- Image does not seem to have uploaded properly. Consider deleting / replacing
- Rephrase as a complete sentence "A national student campaign for interfaith action."
- Rephrase as a complete sentence "Coexist - working together with no conflict"
- This does not need to be a separate section: "Multi-faith Spaces: Symptoms & Agents of Religious and Social Change"
- Hyperlink to the relevant Wikipedia pages: President Obama, President’s Interfaith and Community Service Campus Challenge, Interfaith Youth Cooperation, Rig Veda
- Change to "across the world are joining this movement in an effort to"
- Change to "Another reason why universities and schools are preferred models"
- Change to "Regardless of race, sex or religion we all have a common ground."
Feedback
editGreat additions to content since the last assessment! Here are some suggestions that you may want to consider:
- Maybe add some member college names: "Campuses across the world are joining this movement in effort to create diverse interfaith cooperation"
- Mention the source of this quote in-text as well (otherwise it may seem a little abrupt): "Student leaders are the foundation to leading the next chapter in the inspiring story of interfaith."
- Consider changing to: " leadership rooted in a person’s beliefs"
- Please explain / specify how exactly the Rig Veda quote is related to Multifaith Spaces - is it part of the official definition? Why has this particular quote been selected?
- Consider changing to: "Agnus Scott College is located in Decatur, Georgia"
- This statement is not part of the Ting-Toomey quotation. Please fix: "When designing a multifaith space we have to keep in mind the different cultural meanings because the design and objects put into this space could be seen in a disrespectful manner or offend someone in a very sensitive way"
- Consider dividing the culture Iceberg Metaphor into sub-headings (popular, deep, etc.)
Good job!
editGreat job on developing the original stub! Try contacting Dan Simanek to find out how to get featured on the Did You Know section. Nice work! Mgantony (talk) 23:31, 25 March 2013 (UTC)
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Great work on your class project! Mgantony (talk) 23:37, 25 March 2013 (UTC) |
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