Jordfbro
This user is a student editor in Wikipedia:Wiki_Ed/University_of_Michigan/Plants_and_Human_Health_(Fall,_2017). Student assignments should always be carried out using a course page set up by the instructor. It is usually best to develop assignments in your sandbox. After evaluation, the additions may go on to become a Wikipedia article or be published in an existing article. |
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editHello, Jordfbro, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:01, 26 September 2017 (UTC)
Hello and welcome to Wikipedia. There were several issues regarding your edit. 1) the formatting of sections under "Drug interactions" was obviously incorrect; please review MOS:SECTIONS. 2) you intended to add information about health effects, but none of your references meet the guidelines for health content at Wikipedia; please review WP:MEDRS. 3) your Felisberto source is a primary study; see WP:PRIMARY. 4) your comment "With further research, this science could move wheat bread toward becoming a more functional food." is synthesis of findings; please review WP:SYNTH. 5) your punctuation-reference format is incorrect; please review WP:REFPUNCT. 6) your formatting of references does not use a template; please see WP:CIT. Finally, once you've practiced more in your sandbox, please put your edit first on the Talk page for other editors to review. Thanks and good luck. --Zefr (talk) 22:03, 5 December 2017 (UTC)
- Please share this information with your classmates. Editing food topics, then implying health effects, requires strong evidence with the highest quality sources. Your sources are WP:PRIMARY and do not support adding information to the encyclopedia. --Zefr (talk) 23:21, 9 December 2017 (UTC)