Jaksawatp
Joined 15 January 2016
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Taweetham in topic ICCH224 update
Hi Jaksawat --— Preceding unsigned comment added by Kanesskong (talk • contribs) 12:50, 20 January 2016
Crucible tong
editHi Jaksawatp! You need to work a lot harder.
- References should be in-line and properly formatted by {{cite web}}
- More content in encyclopedic tone.
- Your original photos. Make sure you upload it to Wikimedia Commons and you may want to create a new category for crucible tong.
ICCH224 update
editHi Jaksawatp! Looks like you're on the right track. Here is what you can do to improve the article:
- 3 drawings of crucible Tongs may be too redundant. How about taking pictures of the real ones?
- Move the content from your sandbox to a new article, Crucible tongs. If you cannot, please let ajarn know in class.
--Athikhun (talk) 15:06, 17 February 2016 (UTC)
Thank you for your work and wonderful drawing. Please
- Add internal links to your article.
- Improve your writing by following Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style/Chemistry and follow examples of other articles. There should be no section called "Insight."