Hiya, IanMatthewDavis!

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Howdy, IanMatthewDavis. I'm Theo, your Online Ambassador for the New Media Technology and Communication online Wikipedia course, and I'll be here to help if you run into any problems. I've left a welcome message here that has some useful info, including my email address. Give it a look, and let me know if you need anything! —Theopolisme (talk) 12:17, 5 February 2013 (UTC)Reply

Feedback on your work

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The additions look good.

Consider making the following changes:

  • A lot of material has not been cited (see Kick Returner and Possible Removal sections).
  • All quotes must be attributed to sources.
  • Also, please include hyperlinks to other relevant Wikipedia articles, e.g., punt returner, wide receiver, etc.

Mgantony (talk) 16:37, 4 March 2013 (UTC)Reply

Greetings and Feedback

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Hello, Ian

This is Conner Baldwin, the Campus Ambassador (In-Training).

Spell check all words.

Yjx2ic35 (talk)Yjx2ic35 —Preceding undated comment added 16:29, 5 March 2013 (UTC)Reply

Insufficient development

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Does not look like you have incorporated any developments since Assessment 2. Please fix this by 5pm on 18 Mar.Mgantony (talk) 14:16, 17 March 2013 (UTC)Reply

I'm having a hard time understanding the difference in adding a reference and citing my sources. When I try to do both they come out the same. I also had trouble uploading an image. If i could get any help on thos that would be great, thank you IanMatthewDavis (talk) 01:55, 18 March 2013 (UTC)Reply

Good job!

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Nice work on developing the original stub! Mgantony (talk) 23:26, 25 March 2013 (UTC)Reply

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  Nice work on your class project. Mgantony (talk) 23:39, 25 March 2013 (UTC)Reply

Help us improve the Wikipedia Education Program

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Hi IanMatthewDavis! As a student editor on Wikipedia, you have a lot of valuable experience about what it's like to edit as a part of a classroom assignment. In order to help other students like you enjoy editing while contributing positively to Wikipedia, it's extremely helpful to hear from real student editors about their challenges, successes, and support needs. Please take a few minutes to answer these questions by clicking below. (Note that the responses are posted to a public wiki page.) Thanks!


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