User talk:Breedbr8131/Macular hypoplasia

Comments on Breedbr8131's contribution to Diagnosis section

Good info added, esp. from the Recchia, et al. case study. Links to other Wikipedia articles make sense and are helpful. References are well cited. Nice work on this contribution! Amnot Areso (talk) 22:33, 14 July 2022 (UTC)

I moved the diagnosis and treatment sections to the live Wikipedia page. Are there any suggestions you have? I believe we are still working on the causes section per lecture. Thank you. Breedbr8131 (talk) 21:45, 25 July 2022 (UTC)

Hi Bailey,

Your contributions are looking pretty good! Here are two further improvements you could make:

1) Shift the placement of the illustration of the retina to the right; you can do this by clicking on "Edit" at the top of the article, clicking on the image, clicking on "edit," then clicking on "advanced" to see the layout options; choose "right."

2) In the "Diagnosis" section, instead of linking to "Pigmentation," link to "Eye color." The "Pigmentation" article describe color pigment generally. Though it's not wrong to use that term, your link would be more on point if you took the reader to the "Eye color" article instead. Amnot Areso (talk) 15:59, 26 July 2022 (UTC)

Possible Topics

I was thinking possible topics to explore here is signs and symptoms of macular hypoplasia and treatment options. More to come on this. Breedbr8131 (talk) 03:07, 12 July 2022 (UTC)