Thanks for asking, and plz forgive my not offering a more extensive welcome than this. Without lk'g at the changes you've made, and assuming you've already consulted Wikipedia:Manual of Style (biographies), i'd suggest two things:
- Leave the tag in place two weeks if no one else works on it, to provide adequate chance for them to consider it.
- If you haven't already checked it out, and you don't find it yourself, look into what is said in the Wikipedia: (or "project") namespace about autobios on WP. Those issues apply less to a relative than to the subject, and still less to someone whose impulse to write the bio is a mere coincidence of name, but in all those cases are worth weighing IMO.
Please feel welcome to ask specific questions anytime, or to remind of this in two weeks if you'd like a critique of it at that point.
I'm here at WP bcz i think it is the most worthwhile thing on the 'Net with barriers to participation anywhere near this low. I'm glad you're contributing, and i presume at least weighing continuing to do so. Hope you continue to find it worth your time and effort. Thanks again.
--Jerzy•t 18:37, 12 January 2006 (UTC)