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Hello! Project 3 Peer Review

The edits look good. One thing I suggest is revisiting the wording in the following sentence:

In the modern languages, there is sometimes a stronger contrast from Old Gaelic in the assumed meaning of "broad" and "slender"; the phonetic distinction can be more complex than mere "velarisation"/"palatalisation".

The edit is a step in the right direction, and is a definite improvement over the previous version. Still, I think the sentence feels cumbersome. I'm not sure of a better way to phrase it myself, but I'd try to experiment with the sentence structure. This could be something like moving the last clause ("the phonetic distinction [...]") to the beginning, and possibly breaking the sentence down into two.

Great work, and I really enjoyed working with you this semester.

CrispRadish922 (talk) 17:34, 6 December 2023 (UTC)

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Ophiuchus1 (talk) 17:09, 27 September 2023 (UTC)

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