You will be compiling your bibliography and creating an outline of the changes you will make in this sandbox.
Bibliography
As you gather the sources for your Wikipedia contribution, think about the following:
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Bibliography
editnote: it is difficult to find articles that focus on drag kings that are from a reliable source; the few peer reviewed articles about drag usually ignore drag kings or only mention a few underdeveloped claims about them - Surkan, Kim 2008. Drag Kings In the New Wave
-This is a peer reviewed article by a Phd candidate so it is reliable. This source covers the gender fluidity of drag, specifically of drag kings.[1]
-Basiliere, Jae 2019. Staging Dissents:Drag Kings, Resistance, and Feminist Masculinities
-This is also a peer reviewed article. This offers a feminist perspective of drag kings, and sheds light on why drag kings are often overshadowed by drag queens in the LGBTQ+ community.[2]
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References
edit- ^ Surkan, Kim (2003-04-01). "Drag Kings in the New Wave: Gender Performance and Participation". Journal of Homosexuality. 43 (3–4): 161–186. doi:10.1300/J082v43n03_10. ISSN 0091-8369.
- ^ Basiliere, Jae (2019-06). "Staging Dissents: Drag Kings, Resistance, and Feminist Masculinities". Signs: Journal of Women in Culture and Society. 44 (4): 979–1001. doi:10.1086/702034. ISSN 0097-9740.
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Outline of proposed changes
editClick on the edit button to draft your outline.
The first and most obvious change that must be made is to alter the introduction paragraph with more inclusive language. Right now, the article makes it seem like drag kings can only be women who dress up as famous men, whereas drag kings are people of all genders who create personas that may be solely based on male stereotypes, but often incorporate female aspects as well. The world of drag simply isn't as black and white as this wWkipedia page makes it sound. I also plan on monitoring the language throughout for this very reason.
On my initial read of this article, I already noticed a few spelling/grammar errors, so I will be fixing those. For example, the word "marginalized" is misspelled twice.
Someone in the talk section suggested that there be more pictures, so I plan on adding one of a drag king performer from 2019 in order to include a more modern picture. I found this photo through Wikipedia so it is safe to use.
Now that you have compiled a bibliography, it's time to plan out how you'll improve your assigned article.
In this section, write up a concise outline of how the sources you've identified will add relevant information to your chosen article. Be sure to discuss what content gap your additions tackle and how these additions will improve the article's quality. Consider other changes you'll make to the article, including possible deletions of irrelevant, outdated, or incorrect information, restructuring of the article to improve its readability or any other change you plan on making. This is your chance to really think about how your proposed additions will improve your chosen article and to vet your sources even further. Note: This is not a draft. This is an outline/plan where you can think about how the sources you've identified will fill in a content gap. |