- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 21:47, 14 July 2019 (UTC)
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Zond 5
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that two Russian tortoises on Zond 5 were among the first Earthlings to fly around the Moon and return safely to Earth?
- Reviewed: Melitta Muszely
- Comment: Please reserve for July 2019. Holding area is at WP:DYKNA#July 16–24 (50th Anniversary of Apollo 11)
Improved to Good Article status by Kees08 (talk). Nominated by Coffeeandcrumbs (talk) at 05:04, 19 March 2019 (UTC).
Interesting, solid GA on excellent sources, Russian sources accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. I like the hook but am not sure about the capital Earthlings. July date fine by me. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 15:57, 22 March 2019 (UTC)
Hi, I came by to promote this, but I don't see an inline cite for the hook fact. Yoninah (talk) 20:32, 14 July 2019 (UTC)
- The hook should read like so to avoid the mistaken intepretation that there may have been early missions that accomplished something similar to this mission.
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...that two Russian tortoises were among the Earthlings on Zond 5 that became the first to fly around the Moon and returned safely to Earth?
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- @Yoninah: I have copied the source over to provide an inline citation. --- Coffeeandcrumbs 21:01, 14 July 2019 (UTC)
- @Coffeeandcrumbs: this is the sentence with the hook fact that needs a cite: Zond 5 carried the first terrestrial organisms to return safely to Earth after flying around the Moon.
- ALT1 is a bit convoluted. How about piping the link?
- ALT2: ... that two Russian tortoises were aboard the first spacecraft to fly around the Moon and return safely to Earth? Yoninah (talk) 21:10, 14 July 2019 (UTC)
- The hook should read like so to avoid the mistaken intepretation that there may have been early missions that accomplished something similar to this mission.
