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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 08:50, 3 October 2016 (UTC)

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Talbieh Camp

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Created by Tucoxn (talk). Self-nominated at 19:48, 14 August 2016 (UTC).

  • Comment The articles states, "mostly Bedouin", rather than "Palestinian". Edwardx (talk) 01:08, 15 August 2016 (UTC)
ALT1: ... that when Talbieh Refugee Camp first opened, most of its inhabitants were displaced persons, as opposed to refugees?
- tucoxn\talk 01:13, 16 August 2016 (UTC)
  • Thank you Tucoxn, ALT1 does seem to coincide better with the article facts. Edwardx (talk) 09:17, 16 August 2016 (UTC)
  • Full review needed now that hook has been settled on; striking original hook due to issues raised. BlueMoonset (talk) 01:28, 16 September 2016 (UTC)
  • Meets newness, length, and neutrality requirements. However, there are numerous sourcing problems. The UNRWA source in footnote 1 is a dead link. I found the hook information in the Jewish Virtual Library source, and used that as the cite in the article, but the UNRWA source is cited in other places, so that needs to be taken care of. Also, I don't understand how the Google pushpin map in footnote 3 verifies this sentence: Because of their status as displaced persons, many of the camp's residents have documentation allowing them to work legally in Jordan. The wordpress source in footnote 4 is a non-reliable source and should be deleted. Finally, this sentence – As of 2013, Talbieh Camp was the only Palestinian refugee camp where young men outperformed young women in terms of completing post-secondary education. – is sourced to a 2011 publication, which doesn't mention it at all. QPQ done. Yoninah (talk) 22:06, 20 September 2016 (UTC)
Thanks for raising these issues. UNRWA recently changed the way their web addresses work, so that's fixed. I need to address the other things you raised and will comment again when those changes are complete. I appreciate your constructive comments. - tucoxn\talk 16:10, 21 September 2016 (UTC)
  • Thanks to Yoninah for the thorough review – the issues raised above have been addressed. The article is ready for a new review. - tucoxn\talk 13:45, 1 October 2016 (UTC)
  • Tucoxn thank you for taking care of the footnote and removing the Google pushpin map and the wordpress source. However, the 2013 statistic mentioned above is still sourced to a 2011 publication, which doesn't mention it at all. Yoninah (talk) 21:51, 1 October 2016 (UTC)
  • Yoninah, thank you for your fast reply. I can't believe I accidentally cited that fact to the wrong source, then missed your comment about it! That comes from pages 134-135 of the 2013 Fafo report. The citation is fixed now. - tucoxn\talk 22:19, 1 October 2016 (UTC)
  • Great, that's the right source. Full review: New enough, long enough, adequately referenced, neutrally written, no close paraphrasing seen. ALT1 hook ref verified and cited inline. QPQ done. ALT1 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 22:39, 1 October 2016 (UTC)
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