Template:Did you know nominations/Shyam Swarup Agarwal
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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:38, 13 March 2017 (UTC)
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Shyam Swarup Agarwal
edit... that Shyam Swarup Agarwal pioneered medical genetics education in India by establishing the first DM program in 1990 at SGPGI-MS?Source: Obituary, Shyam Swarup Agarwal (1941–2013)ALT1:... that Shyam Swarup Agarwal led a team of scientists to study the the genetic effects in the wake of the Bhopas Gas Tragedy of December 1984?Source: Obituary, Shyam Swarup Agarwal (1941–2013)
Created by Tachs (talk). Self-nominated at 07:13, 2 March 2017 (UTC).
New and long enough, within policy, Earwig detects no copyvios, QPQ done. Minor questions about the hooks. For ALT0, abbreviations should be avoided in the hook; Sanjay Gandhi Postgraduate Institute of Medical Sciences should be written out, and DM should be wikilinked to make it clear what degree it is. For ALT1, the sources did not say that Agarwal led a team, just that he participated in the research. Also, the hook and article both say "Bhopas" instead of "Bhopal"; is this a typo or an alternate spelling? In all, this article is very near Good Article status and I would encourage you to nominate it for that status as well. John P. Sadowski (NIOSH) (talk) 03:02, 4 March 2017 (UTC)
- ALT3... that Shyam Swarup Agarwal established India's first Doctor of Medicine program specializing in medical genetics in 1990 at the Sanjay Gandhi Postgraduate Institute of Medical Sciences?
- ALT4... that Shyam Swarup Agarwal studied the genetic effects of the Bhopal Gas Tragedy of 1984?
- Thanks @John P. Sadowski (NIOSH): for the suggestions. I have noted here ALT3 and ALT4, correcting the errors noted in your comments.jojo@nthony (talk) 07:32, 4 March 2017 (UTC)
Awesome. I've made slight tweaks to the hooks for brevity. ALT3 preferred, ALT4 also approved. John P. Sadowski (NIOSH) (talk) 20:49, 4 March 2017 (UTC)
- ALT4 hook promoted rather than ALT3 because not all the facts in ALT3 are included in the article. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:38, 13 March 2017 (UTC)
