Template:Did you know nominations/She Must Be Seeing Things

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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:37, 6 August 2014 (UTC)

She Must Be Seeing Things

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... that according to the Lesbian Film Guide, She Must Be Seeing Things was a "deeply controversial film ... dismissed outright by some as pornography"?

ALT1:~~... that She Must Be Seeing Things directed by Sheila McLaughlin was the film debut of both Lois Weaver and Peggy Shaw?~~
Reviewed: Poverty in Cyprus
Comment: Created at the Wikipedia:SHE MUST BE WIKI: Feminist Film Wiki-a-thon

Created by Edwardx (talk), Philafrenzy (talk). Nominated by Edwardx (talk) at 21:13, 1 August 2014 (UTC).

< 7 days old; 2600+ character article; 178- and 142-character hooks; both hooks cited and verified in sources; within policy. The main hook is more "hooky" than the ALT. The controversy itself may be a little complex to summarize within DYK's word limit. Then again, people can click through and find out what the deep pornographic controversy was. Rupert Clayton (talk) 07:57, 5 August 2014 (UTC)

I suggest deleting "on release" from the approved hook. Yoninah (talk) 22:57, 5 August 2014 (UTC)

Thanks. I'm all for shorter hooks, so I've trimmed "on release". We already have "was", and thus "on release" is largely redundant. Edwardx (talk) 08:46, 6 August 2014 (UTC)