Template:Did you know nominations/Northeast Arm Iron Range
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:45, 3 December 2017 (UTC)
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Northeast Arm Iron Range
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Folded banded iron formation along Highway 11 in Temagami
- ... that the Temagami Iron Range takes jasper in iron past snakes and turtles?
- Reviewed: Amanita subpallidorosea
- Comment: Since this seems to have changed in the few years I've been quasi-mostly-on-Wikibreak: I've erred on the side of "yes" here, but are QPQs required now for non-self nominations?
Created by Volcanoguy (talk). Nominated by The Bushranger (talk) at 01:05, 12 November 2017 (UTC).
- Comment: I would make the hook more specific, something like: ... that the Temagami Iron Range hosts jasper and iron past Turtle and Snake Island lakes?. Note when snakes and turtles are not capitalized you are referring to the animals, not the names of lakes. Proper names are capitalized. And as far as I'm aware of nobody calls these lakes Turtles and Snakes. Volcanoguy 03:00, 12 November 2017 (UTC)
- The idea was to make an amusing-sounding hook - the Wiki-positive version of clickbait, so to speak.
- The Bushranger One ping only 03:39, 12 November 2017 (UTC)
- The idea was to make an amusing-sounding hook - the Wiki-positive version of clickbait, so to speak.
New enough (from the nom), long enough, hook cited (2), well cited generally and the image is self-work. I like the hook. I would like it if you could replace "linear trend" with something less jargony though, I assume "trend" is a geology term that means something easily explained? Maury Markowitz (talk) 19:01, 30 November 2017 (UTC)
- @Maury Markowitz: replaced "linear trend" with "elongated area". Volcanoguy 04:31, 1 December 2017 (UTC)
