Template:Did you know nominations/Michał Radziwiłł Rudy

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The result was: promoted by PumpkinSky talk 19:41, 26 November 2011 (UTC)

Michał Radziwiłł Rudy

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... that Krzysztof Radziwiłł described his cousin Michał Radziwiłł Rudy, as a psychopath?

Created/expanded by Dr. Blofeld (talk), Piotrus (talk), Volunteer Marek (talk). Nominated by Dr. Blofeld (talk) at 17:01, 4 November 2011 (UTC)

How about a somewhat longer ALT below. --_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk to me} 17:04, 4 November 2011 (UTC)

... that Krzysztof Radziwiłł described his own cousin and Radziwiłł's family black sheep, Michał Radziwiłł Rudy, as a psychopath?

Yeah I like that.♦ Dr. Blofeld 17:06, 4 November 2011 (UTC)

Not fond of either - completely lacking in context and focuses on wrong person. I would suggest the following. Agricolae (talk) 18:44, 22 November 2011 (UTC)

... that nobleman and diplomat Michał Radziwiłł Rudy was described as a psychopath by his own cousin, politician Krzysztof Radziwiłł?

Length checks out fine: 3689 characters; Date of creation is good: November 2, 2011; Hook cited by Ref#2, foreign language ref AGF. No spotchecks for copyvio or close paraphrasing carried out due to foreign language references. I'm happy with any of the hooks; but the last is probably the best. Harrias ^talk 16:10, 26 November 2011 (UTC)